My treasure of poetry

Posted: 12 years ago
The Jewel Box
The Lincoln Family had an ancient treasure
From generation to generation it was bequeathed
A wooden , carved jewel box
With rich velvet it was lined, so they thought

At the centre of the carving lay a studded peacock
It had a value beyond estimation
When every heir got it, increased were their expectation
For the man worthy of it had not yet been found

To describe its beauty poests stammered
When admirers saw it , their hearts fluttered
But no one knew what was in it
Beneath its sealed lid,lay its spirit

One day, in a generation, born was a girl
With bklonde curly hair and eyes of sapphire
She was the darling of the family
But could not be the heir

When she was about five, while playing around
The elegant jewel box, a plaything she found
The minute her tiny hands grasped it, the clasp opened
Seeing the miracle, the family was speel bound

"Dear Prince/princess"The inscription said
Lie like a bright fire,a stone of red
Shaped like a heart, a true work of art
"Your heart is pure like the dew, not yet invaded by greed."

Innocence makes miracles so profound
On grabbing the stone ,the princess smiled
Her eyes shone with a brightness -alike the stone
Battles were fought,for this treasure; all for greed
With a newfound glee her eyes shone

She grew up to be a maiden possesing jewels of virtue
With beauty and raising vanity
Her eyes gleamed with pride;a boastful one
As she stood in front of the mirror,
She could'nt suppress her satisfaction

There came a day when the box would'nt budge
No matter how she tried with a growing grudge
She forced the clasp, the box slipped in protest
The heart broke to pieces forever disintegrated...


Posted: 12 years ago
Its a very pretty poem Apoorva really nice. Very well written๐Ÿ‘





Edited by NandiniPS - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
Very good attempt. ๐Ÿ‘
The last part was the best, keep writing.
Posted: 12 years ago
Gr8 work apoorva.. Keep it up. ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
Posted: 12 years ago
 Excillent APOORVA!!!๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome poem Apporva๐Ÿ‘
Keep it up..!!
Posted: 12 years ago
Mind-blowing poem๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
Write more dear...
Posted: 12 years ago
Wowww Fantastic dear:-) keep it up... Really nice GREAT WORK...
Posted: 12 years ago

                                    
Posted: 12 years ago
Nice poetry Nsapo ...

can I give you a small suggestion ??

I guess you can open your poem thread in the poetry forums. It's actually not about CID na ... so that's why ... this is basically CID forums ... if you post poems about CID that's different but I feel you should open in the poetry thread, you'll get more responses and comments too. It's actually an off topic' so we can't be sure if it won't be closed in the future. So it's a small suggestion from my side !!

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