Sapnon Se Bhare Naina

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Posted: 12 years ago
oh! lucky!! this is superb!!!!!!!!!πŸ‘ i like the way daksh teases Naina on the train...so cute!!! now cant wait for the other parts! quickly ! quickly!
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh lucky! this is superb!!!! πŸ‘ love the way how dakshu teases Naina on the train when she is angry!! haha!!! now cant wait for the other parts!!! quickly! quickly!!!πŸ˜›
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Posted: 12 years ago
, @ dakshnafan, aish and mysti

Thanks to u all...I am so happy and luv u for all remarks.πŸ€—..I am happy that I could make u smile...and believe me when I was typing this part..mere chehre par poora close up smile thaπŸ˜ƒ start se end tak.mere gahr wale paresan ho gaye ki main kyu itna khush ho ke type kar rahi ho..πŸ˜† and I am extremely excited to get same reaction from u all..i knew u would love this part...πŸ˜‰.

I want exposure scene to be rocking tho thoda waqt tho lagega..bahut lambha scene haina..but will try to bring it up fast...πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: lucky.m

, @ dakshnafan, aish and mysti


I want exposure scene to be rocking tho thoda waqt tho lagega..bahut lambha scene haina..but will try to bring it up fast...πŸ˜‰


Take ur time... I know u will rock the whole scene...  par kya kare cant wait na dear...πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow..!! i would like something happen like this in real SSBN
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Part 12
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Brief on this part

Exposure ke shock ko baradaash karne ke liye dakshu sabko tayar kar raha hein( he should, u know y? sab ki bas ki baat  nahi hein shock lena...πŸ˜†...)especiatlly P-zoo ko tho kabhi itna shock nahi laga hoga...


Shaadi ka mandap..

( I dnt have very good idea of maharastrian marriage, whether they have baraat coming etc etc..so Just keeping it simple..excuse me for any mistakes)

Saare guest aagaye..charo taraf shor..Every body is busy running here and there..

Shaadi ka muhurat aagaya, aku ka marriage hogaya ayush ke saathπŸ˜›( dnt get shocked just wanted to make aku's life settled , y and how? u will know once u finish reading part 13)😲

Next baari hein hamari dakshu ki shaadi ki..Daksh is missing( lol)..πŸ˜†

Ayi( lil worried); sanket beta zara dekh chintu kaha hai?

.Every body is tensed as they are not able to find daksh.sonakshi  senses something is wrong and is worried

Joshi comes to baba and says; daksh kaha hain?

Just then daksh makes an entry and says' main yaha hoon".Everybody breath a sigh of relief 

Ayi; chintu ..kaha chala gaya??..chal mandap pe bet..muhurat paas aa raha hain( kyu itna tension le rahe ho ayi..)

Daksh; nahi ayi. main ye shaadi nahi karna chahtaπŸ‘( daksu mooh se ye dialogue..luv it)

Shock😲 shock 😲shock😲 laga...sab ko...πŸ˜²πŸ˜†

Ayi; chintuuu , ye  tu kya keh raha hain?β“πŸ˜²

Just then sonakshi comes and says; daksh tum bhi na..ye koi waqt hai mazaq karne ka(dnt wry baby.asli mazaq tho ab hoga)πŸ˜†
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Daksh looks at her with killer look and says😑 ;mazaq??  doosre ki zindagiyon ki saath khelna aur mazaq banana tumhari aadat hein sonakshi meri nahi,πŸ‘ haan lekin maine mazaq tho kiya, tumhare saath ki , ye kehke ki main tumse shaadi karunga..jo sach nahi hainπŸ‘πŸ˜†

Shock.😲.😲.😲...

He looks at all the guests and says; sorry aapko taklif utnae padi ,ab aap jaa sakte haina..ye shaadi nahi ho rahi hain
Every body leaves speaking in themsleves whats happening..

.only P-ZOO and J-ZOO members left

Ayi;( furious) chintu..tu ye

Daksh; ayi pls..iss baar tujhe meri baat sun ni padegi and looking at others ' aap sab ko bhi.."
JOSHI makes an entry in hyper tension; daksh patwardhan ,ye tumne teek nahi kiya aur...

Daksh cuts the sentence and says;Mr.joshi..aap ke liye acha yahi hoga ki, aap chup rehne ki aadat dal leejiye, kyunki jab aap ko, apki beti ki kartoot pata chalegi aap kuch bhol nahi payenge...( wah wah)πŸ˜†

He goes to ayi and says; ayi.. tu jise apna bahu banana chahthi..tu jise itna masoom aur boli samaj rahi hein  uske peeche shaatir dimmag chupa hain.(points at sonakshi).agar tu sunegi ki ye apne khushi ke liye kis hadh tak gir sakthi hain..tu yakeen nahi kar payegi.looks at all others and says  .aap sab bhi...

Just then sonakshi;😑( usual drama) daksh ye tum kya keh rahi ho? aisa kya kardiya maine and she goes to ayi and says  ayi..and is about to say something..just then daksh stops her and says

Daksh; bas karo sonakshi..ye natak ab nahi chalega.. aur pls tum chup raho yahi tumhare liye acha hoga..Jo khel tumne hum sabki saath shuru kiya woh ab mein khatam karunga...πŸ‘ 

Daksh; ayi tu mere baat sunn uske ke baad..tu jo kahegi mein karunga...

Every body is in shock but still ready to listen to daksh...

Daksh starts sach ka samna πŸ˜†...
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PS; Guys...part 13 bahut lamba hain..I will post in parts like i posted part 11 today..but I promise by end of day u will have all parts of sohini exposure..).

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Note;

Guys I have divided this whole exposure episode into two parts 

1. sach ka samna where dakshu takes entire lead aur baaki sab bas sunnenge)πŸ˜‰
2..hum sab  ki fav tappad aur dhulayi of sohini)πŸ‘

 hope u will have fun...

Part 13 ( sub part 1)

Daksh starts narrating how sonakshi started her game

Point no 1( lawyer hai iss liye)

Daksh;
Sonakshi ne ye khel tab shuru kiya jab isse, mere aur naina ke pyar ke baare mein pata chala iss ki birtday party par..uss waqt maine isse saaf saaf bataya ki mein ye shaadi nahi karsakta..

Everybody is shocked to hear about dakshna's love, but ayi is more shocked to listen that sonakshi know this before hand😲

Daksh'
aur uske baad  jab mein aur naina tujhe ye baat batane waale the..isne aku ka case ka bahana banakar , apne meethe meethe baaton se naina ko yakeen dila diya ki woh hamare khushi chahthi hein aur usse thoda waqt chahiye, Meri Naina itni achi hain , usne iss ki baaaton ko manliya aur tujhe patane se mana kardiya..

.phir isne jhoote moothe asu bahakar tujhse vacahan le liya.

 aur jab mein iss ke ghar gaya tha poochne ke liye..iss ne apna haath ka nass kat liya aur apne mummy, papa ke saamne haat kat jaane ka natak kiya..😑

MR amd mrs joshi remember the incident(I hope u remember) and are shocked

Daksh continues...

 ayi,Agar aap yaad karenge tho sonakshi ki doosre haath par bhi paati lagi huyi thi..yaha  pe, shows the wrist

Every body remember the scene when sonakshi gets down of the car with all bandages in PH and bandage on her wrist on other hand

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PART 13( SUB PART 2)

Point no  -2 - fracture part

Daksh continues.pointing at sonakshi

.phir isse laga ki ,aaj nahi tho kal mein aur naina tujhse jaroor baat karenge jo ye nahi chahthi..issliye isne haath fracture hone ka natak karke hamare ghar aagayi(.looks at sonakshi).lekin asal mein fracture hua hi nahi...

Sonakshi; nahi ayi, baba, daksh jhoot bol raha hain..ye naina se shaadi karna chahta hain iss liye mujhe par itne saare iljaam laga raha hein..

Ayi is confused whom to believe and whom to not

Daksh proves sonakshi wrong in his lawyer style

Daksh; pata hain sonakshi, ki tum yahi kahoge..iss liye...he takes out his phone ,goes to joshi and says
Mr,joshi kya aap ye number pehchanthe hain?
Joshi looks at number; haan haan kyu nahi hamari family doctor dayal ka number hein..
Daksh calls the number.Phone is ringing..daksh; 
Doctor picks the phone; hello
On loud speaker

Daksh; hello, mr.dayal?. main daksh patawardan ,woh aap mujhe nahi jaante, mein sonakshi joshi ka honewala pati.mr.joshi ne aapko bataya hoga...
Doc ; woh..haan haan..I am sry..main shaadi pe aa nahi paya..
Daksh; koi baath nahi...lekin woh sonakshi ka haath ka fracture(in a worried tone),πŸ˜† mujhe bahut paresan kar raha hein..uska chot kab teek hoga?.πŸ˜‰...

Everybody is confused listening what daksh is saying

Doctor; fracture.😲. ya aap kya keh rahe hain?sonakshi ka haath ka koi fracture nahi hua.bas halka sa moch tha..ek do din mein teek hogaya hoga, shayad aap banadage ko dekh kar aise soch rahe hain..woh sonakshi ne insist kiya tha ki usse bandage hi chahiye..tho maine laga diya ..basπŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Daksh; are u sure?
Doctor; Of course 100%.. woh kab ka teek hogaya hoga..fracture ka tho sawaal nahi..aap fikr mat kijiye..(oh doc..u are so sweet)
Daksh; thank u doctor aap ne tho problem solve kar diya..saying this he disconnects the call 

Sab ki bolti  bandh hogayi..( dakshu ne itna pakaa saboot jo pesh kiya)πŸ‘

Daksh'

 aur uske baad isne apne maid se ayi ko phone karwaya..aur usse ye kehne ke liye kaha ki uski haath kafracture hogaya hain aur ye bahut bhuri haalat mein hain...

Everybody in  shock of disbelief and especially joshi & co and ayi
.Sonakshi ka tho bolti badh aur uski standard exp jab darr jaati hein, woh wala laga kar dekh rehi hainπŸ˜†..rohini.(.kahi mere pol na khul jaaye expression)

.Sonakshi thinks its better to leave from there,and acts as if crying and tries to go from there..but daksh stops her

Daksh; kaha jaa rahi ho? picture abhi baaki hain..he holds her hand brings her into the center of crowd..and again starts his sach ka samna ka programme

Daksh

Jab se hamare ghar mein ayi hein ,tab se isne ghandha khel shuru kar diya..naina ko neecha dikhane ka ek mauka bhi nahi choda ,woh bhi sabki saamne achayi ki moorat bankar.Jab bhi maine ya naina ne tumse baat kehne ki koshish kiya, kabhi dard, kabhi kuch aur bahana banakar baat ko tujh tak pahuchne nahi diya...
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Part 13( Sub part 3)
Point no -3---- Zeher nahi ..cough syrup hainπŸ˜‰

Daksh

aur phir iska doosra natak hein..zeher peene ka

Uss din jo bottle pakadkar iss ne jaan lena natak kiya..woh asal mein cough syrup tha.Naina ko iss par shak ho gaya aur usne woh bottle ,lab mein  testing ke liye diya..phir isne chalaaki se report badal diya, aur naina ko galat sabit kar diya..lekin iss mamle ye akeli chor nahi hein..iss ka saath diya...looks at rohini and says; aapki pyari bahu aur meri vaini rohini ne😲

SHOCK LAGA SHOCK SHOCK..sab ko...P-ZOO MEIN THO BOMB DAALA DAKSH NE ISS LIYE...

Rohini; daksh ye tum kya keh rahe ho?tumhe zaroor kuch galat femi huyi hogi..uss naina ne tumhara kaan bardiya hoga mere khilaaf

Daksh; kisi ko mere kaan bhare ki jaroorat nahi hein vainai, kyunki maine khudh apne kaano se aapko uss raat terrace pe sonakshi se baat karte hue sunliya(πŸ˜‰,aur agar aap chahti hain tho hum abhi lab jayenge...doodh ka doodh aur pani ka paani hojayega..kyu vaini)

Now we show the scene when sohini are having conversation and daksh listens from behind..by the time rohini turns back daksh leaves( If u go through FF part8 u will find a sentence where daksh returns( from terrace) and finds ayi in his room),

Daksh turns to sanket and says; sanket dada ,report badalna tha, iss liye vaini ne naya hospital jaane ka zidd kiya..kal jab mein reports collect karne gaya tha..mujhe yaad aya ki naina ne ussi lab mein test karvaya..aur jab meine uss lab walo se baat ki mujhe pata chala vaini ne usse paise dekar  report badal diya..aur maine usse police ki damki dekar asli report le aaya....he takes out report from his pocket..ye rahi report and gives it to ayi

Sab log report dekhkar ek doosre ko paas karte hain aur phir wahi yaar shock...

Daksh; looks at rohini and says; vaini, kamse kam aap se ye umeed nahi thi..

Rohini hungs her head in shame...
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PART 13 - SUBPART 4

(Point -4 - aku's fall & caught)

Daksh; yahi nahi ayi..uss din jab akruthi girgayi thi..ye bhi inn dono ka plan tha.naina ko galat dikhane ke liye...tel niche girana , phir sonakshi aku ko pakdne , sab sochi samjhi chal thi

He turns at sonakshi and says

aur isne naina ko aapki nazaro mein girane ke liye kya kuch nahi kiya..jab bhi mein aur naina ek saath hain..ussi waqt aap ko bhulana aur ye ehsaas dilana ki naina meri aur iss ki beech aa rahi hein,, naina se shaadi ka jhoda pehnana..ek nahi, do nahi ayi, agar mein iski kartoot kehta chala gaya tho kabhi khatam nahi honge..( very true dakshu)

Rohini ki dhulayi( thoda kam kiya..samjo yaar..pregnent hain)

Sanket; rohini..kya ye sach hain? no answer..
Sanket apna haath utata hein ek dum tight slap on rohini's faceπŸ‘πŸ‘

Ayi; sanket...

Sanket; nahi ayi..aaj tu mujhe nahi rokhegi..agar iss se ye tappad bahut pehle lagaliya hota tho aaj ye iss hadh tak nahi girjaati.hum sab jaante hein ki tum naina ko pasand nahi karti lekin kya bigada uss bechari ne tumhara.? itna nafrat ki tumne mere behen ko bhi istemmal kiya...chi..sharam aati hein mujhe tumhe apni patni kehte huyi..Agar tumhe kuch bhi sharm baaki hein tho pana chehra mat dikahvo mujhe...kal hi mein tumhe apna maayke mein chod dunga warna pata nahi aur kya kya karti( Finally)

Rohini looks at all p- zoo members..sabki aankhon mein nafrat... leaves from there crying😭,On ayi's forcing sanket goes with her as she is pregnent

Daksh looks at sonakshi and says; ab kyu tumhari bolti bandh hogayi? kyu koi naya natak sooch nahi raha hain kya?

Sonakshi is already planning what to do... goes near ayi; ayi..mujhse galati hogayi..mein daksh se bahut pyar karti hoon..sirf daksh ke liye...

daksh; acha..ye sab tumne mere liye kiya..tho phir meri behen akruthi ki zinadagi ke saath kyu khelne ki koshis ki..haan..bolo...

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