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Dilwale dulhe le jayenge-(FF) Last part updated (Page 6)

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Posted: 21 September 2011 at 1:29am | IP Logged
Dont cut it into so many parts!Unhappy just go on writing will u? u know i cant wait with patienceEmbarrassed
 
Btw...nice story...nice to see daksh acting smart!Tongue

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Posted: 21 September 2011 at 1:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by LadyMystique

Dont cut it into so many parts!Unhappy just go on writing will u? u know i cant wait with patienceEmbarrassed
 
Btw...nice story...nice to see daksh acting smart!Tongue

Dnt wry. dear.just 3 to 4  more parts...and  a happy ending..SoonWink

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Posted: 21 September 2011 at 1:37am | IP Logged
contd...

PART 10

Shaadi ka din...
Muhurat; evening 4.00PM( daksh ki), 3.45 pm(aku ki shaadi ka muhurat)

Naina's darjeeling train; 6.30 pm

(2.00pm P-ZOO)

All arrangements are done...sab log mandap ke liye nikhal rahe he,Aku comes and asks naina when is she coming..naina says she will be there in 1 or 2 hrs as she just completed arrangements and will take time to get ready...

..Every body leave except naina.Sablog gaadi mein beth rahe hain..aur naina apne room ki kidki se dekh rahi hain.

Suddenly daksh ki nazar upar jaata hein, both share a eye lock.Embarrassed.tears spill out of naina's  eyesCry and she goes away from window

Daksh within himself; bas aaj shyam tak ki baat hain naina..I promise uske baad tumhare annkhone mein asu kabhi nahi aane  doonga..kabhi bhi nahi aur humare zinadagi sirf khusiyan hongi

Naina's room

Naina apna luggage pack kar liya and she takes one last round of her Patwardan house( Didnt refer as P-zoo as its from naina's point of view) remembering all her moments with ayi , baba and all members and the day she entered PH and her fights with daksh and later their pyarHeart.. judai and crys outConfused.Crycursing her fate..

After sometime naina comes back to thoda normal stage..looks at watch..3.30pm..
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Naina; bas adha ghantha aur..shaadi ho jayegi( with pain)

,she takes her luggage, writes a letter( U can imagine the contents..Some urgent work came out in darjeeling and she needs to leave)..She knows ayi will cover up later part...She leaves to railway station..as she dnt want to get hurt more, by memories..
Naina travel plan' first to kolkata in train..then to  new jalpaiguri and next darjeeling

5.00 pm..

Mumbai railway station

Naina takes her ticket goes and sits in her seat..lost in thoughts..Just then..somebody comes and says

Excuse me; ye mera seat hai..

Naina lifts her head and gets shockedShocked..lol..its dakshuLOL

 PS;; More parts coming up shortly, 
                                                                                           Contd...
                                                 

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Posted: 21 September 2011 at 1:59am | IP Logged
Oh Wow Lucky Clap... Apna FF wala Dakshu is truely a smart lawyer Wink 
Naina ka part while reading felt very sad for her Cry ... but end of FF 10 bought smile on my face Smile
Aab jaldi se batau how he did?Big smile... and i am waiting for those tappad wala scene and apne dakshu ke bhari dialogues...Dancing

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Posted: 21 September 2011 at 3:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by DakshnaFan

Oh Wow Lucky Clap... Apna FF wala Dakshu is truely a smart lawyer Wink 
Naina ka part while reading felt very sad for her Cry ... but end of FF 10 bought smile on my face Smile
Aab jaldi se batau how he did?Big smile... and i am waiting for those tappad wala scene and apne dakshu ke bhari dialogues...Dancing
same here...ditto againLOLLOL...
 
lucky yar...lajawabClap...luv dis smart dakshu...luvd d 10th wale ka esplyLOL...waitin 4 d rest...
 

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Posted: 21 September 2011 at 7:15am | IP Logged
wow!! superb! superb!

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Posted: 21 September 2011 at 8:31pm | IP Logged
Contd...
 
Part -11( sub part 1)

Naina is shocked to see dakshShocked.Daksh casually comes and sits in opposite seat of naina and says,

Daksh; Arey naina. tum! tum bhi darjeeling jaa rahi ho? mujhe bataya kyu nahi , saath mein nikalthe..LOL.
Naina is still in shock and daksh says; kya hua?

Naina recovers and says; daksh tum yaha..iss waqt

Daksh; iss waqt ka kya matlab? 6.00 pm ki train ke liye mein kal aakar station mein nahi beth saktaLOL
Naina serious;Angry mazaq bandh karo daksh..aur batavo ki tum yaha kya kar rahe ho..shaadi?

Daksh; shaadi? tumhare bina tho mera shaadi nahi hosakti naTongue..issliye maine mandap se bhag liya.LOL.dekho..mere paas kuch bhi nahi hain..ticket ke alava...

Naina is confused, shocked at daksh's behaviour and even more angry
Naina; kya..mandap se bhag liya? oh..tumhe kya laga? aise karne se mein tumse shaadi karlunga..nahi?Angry
Daksh; teek haina..tum mujhse shaadi mat karo..mein tumse karunga..Wink.
Naina(;irritated) ahhh daksh..tum ne aisa kyu kiya? sab yahi sochenge ki...
Daksh; ki tum mujhe bhagakar le gayi.LOL.sach hi tho hainLOL

Naina; daks tum pls abhi yaha se chale javo abhi

Daksh; excuse me, ye tumhara train nahi hein..mere paas bhi ticket hain..nahi javunga

Naina; teek hain..tum chale javo darjeeling..mein jaa rahi, hoo

 saying this she takes luggage nad gets down .daksh gives a cute smileSmile looking at her...naina gets down the train..and takes few steps ..is shockedShocked to see members of P-zoo parivaar (ayi, baba, sanket,kaka,kaki.aku). standing before her

Just then daksh come and stands besides naina..holding her hand.Tongue...
Daksh; (seriously)Agar  main shaadi karunga sirf naina se.chahe aap mano ya naa mano..
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Posted: 21 September 2011 at 8:58pm | IP Logged
Contd...
Part 11(sub part 2)

Naina apna haath chudakar..ayi ke paas jaati hain and says; ayi..mera yakeen maniye , mein kuch nahi kiya..maine daksh ko nahi bulaya..mere koi galati nahi hein

Daksh; ye kya keh rahi ho naina..tumhi ne tho kaha thi shyam 5.00pm station pe milo..shaadi karlengeLOL

Ayi; chintu, bas kar..with lot of regret and shame in her eyes  she holds naina's hands and says

Ayi ;Naina beta..galti meri hain..humsab ki..jo tumhe galat samaj liya... pls mujhe maaf kardo..meine tumhare saath acha nahi kiya..kisi bahar walo ki baaton mein aakar tum par shak kiya, tumhe apne aap se door kardiya..paraya kar diya.mein apne aap ko kabhi maaf nahi karsakthi.Clap.aur tumne sirf mere kehne par apna pyar ko qurbaan kar diya...kitni achi hain tu...pls mujhe maaf kardoClap

Just then kaki comes and says; haan naina..maine tumhe galat samaj liya .tumne aku ke liye itna kuch kiya..aur mein bina sach ko jaane tumhe...aur uss par vishwas kar liya jo akruthi ki zindagi ko barbaad karne walithi

Niana; ayi, kaki..ye aap kya keh rahe ho?Shocked mujhse maafi? aur aap sab yaha..aakhir baat kya hain?Question

Just then aku comes in and says'; arey naina tum ab tak samaj nahi payi..dada ki shaadi sonakshi se nahi huyiClap aur uska asli chehra sabko pata chal gaya.aur ye bhi pata chal gaya ki tumhari koi galati nahi hain aur tumhe phasaya gaya hainConfused..aur hum seedha mandap se yaha aagaye tumhare liyeTongue...ab tho khush ho javo aur dada tumhare saath mazaq kar rahe theLOL

Naina turns at daksh and daksh nods his head saying; maine kuch nahi kiya

Naina is still confused( I know u all are..sabr karo..)...

Ayi; naina..mein apna kasam wapas leti hoonDancing , agar mere chintu ki zindagi mein koi uski patni banegi aur meri bahu tho sirf tum..kya tu mere paagal chintu se shaadi karegi?(at last kuch tho achi baat kaha apne)

Naina's hr8 jumping with joy, surprised and shocked with happiness; tears of happiness and she says; ayi

Ayi; mana mat karo...Naina nods her head saying yes...sab log khush ho gayeBig smile

Sanket comes forward and says; naina rohini tumhare saath jo kuch hi kiya..uss ki taraf se main maafi maangtha hoon..woh apne khudh ki nazaro mein itna gir gayi ki uss mein tumhara samna karne ka himmat nahi raha...

Baba.comes forward and says; naina beta..tu darjeeling chali jaa aur chintu bhi tera saath chalega.. hum ek do din mein pahuch jayenge

Naina keeps an expression Y?Question

Ayi; arey pagli..anajali ji se chintu aur tere shaadi ki baat jo karna hain.Day Dreaming..daksh comes for ward and ayi takes naina's hand and puts in his hand...(bahut pehle karna chahiye tha)Party

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Edited by lucky.m - 21 September 2011 at 9:22pm

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