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Dilwale dulhe le jayenge-(FF) Last part updated (Page 2)

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Posted: 17 September 2011 at 7:16am | IP Logged
Part 4

NIGHT  .10.00pm PH

Naina returns PH.She enters her room turns back to close the doors.Dakshu is near the door with a Combination of daksh and KP lookAngry
Naina looks at him, leaves the door and goes inside. daksh comes inside her room, goes to naina( F2F)

Daksh; Naina, kaha chali gayi tum? mein kitna paresan ho raha tha..
Naina;(IN AVERY CASUAL MANNER like she is not bothered) woh client ke saath meeting tha

Daksh; haan akruthi ne bataya mujhe..lekin itn bhi fursat nahi ki ek baar call karke bata nahi sakti.Subhe se kitni baar phone kar raha hoon tumhe..lekin tum ,ek msg tho kardeti..

Naina; daksh; mein koi choti bachi nahi hoon, apna khayal khud rakh sakthi hoon,tum mere chinta karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hey,Rahi baat phone calls ki tho hone pehle phone silent par tha, phie meeting mein hoon tho..uta nahi payee...bas

Daksh ( angry), bas?? mein yaha paagal ho raha tha aur tum keh rahi ho bas...naina tumhe kya hogaya hai? kyu aisa behave kar rahi ho

Naina; choti si baath ka issue mat banavo daksh..meine kaha tha phone karne ke liye? aur woh bhi utni baar..Tumhari galati hain.ar kya zarrorat hain itna paresan hone ki?

Daksh is shocked by the way naina is responding.He goes near her , holds her with his two hands with lot of force and says
Daksh;(WITH LOT OF PAIN IN HIS EYES) AngryCryhaan teek keh rahi ho..meri galati hein, tumse pyar jo karta hoon, tumhara khayal rakhan chahta hoon..yahi meri galati hain.. aur kya poocha tumne pareshan hone ki zaroorat kya hain? zaroorat issliye hain damnit because I love u..pyar karta hoon mein tumse...khud se bhi jyada.Big smile.samjhi, aur maaf kijiye madam ayindha se aap ko meri taraf se koi disturbace nahi hogi...saying this

Daksh leaves room with pain and anger anf after that naina crys whole heartedly venting out her pain of hurting her loved one and loosing himCry

Daksh in his room is utterly upset with naina's behaviour and he holds the love  globe, stand near his fav place(window) remembering how harsh naina was with him and healing wounds of  his hr8 with naina tere sad song in back ground

Next day morning

Daksh plans to inform naina about his discussion with ayi
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Posted: 17 September 2011 at 7:29am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweetaish

boy am i gladLOLLOL thnkuLOL. vaise if i wana put up dat dat emo wala FF [TongueTongueTongue], wer d'u suggest i put t...

Of course yaar, put it down..no issues..SSBN dekhne se jyada emotional turmoil kuch bhi nahi hey aaj kalLOL

Uske samne sab kuch acha lagega and I really want to see ur emotional ff, kyunki romantic FF mein tho u are mindblowingClap aur pls agar kuch chance mila pls sohini watt lagana apne FF MEIN..PLSLOLWink

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Posted: 17 September 2011 at 7:54am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Rashmi_Nair

Nice story. Keep writing... Btw I'm Rashmi... coz we've nvr talked before.

Hi rashmi..thanks 
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Posted: 17 September 2011 at 8:34am | IP Logged
Originally posted by lucky.m

Originally posted by sweetaish

boy am i gladLOLLOL thnkuLOL. vaise if i wana put up dat dat emo wala FF [TongueTongueTongue], wer d'u suggest i put t...

Of course yaar, put it down..no issues..SSBN dekhne se jyada emotional turmoil kuch bhi nahi hey aaj kalLOL

Uske samne sab kuch acha lagega and I really want to see ur emotional ff, kyunki romantic FF mein tho u are mindblowingClap aur pls agar kuch chance mila pls sohini watt lagana apne FF MEIN..PLSLOLWink
 
thanku dahlinHug...but prob ye he ki me use kaha lagauTongue...mayb i'l creat a new post wit a statutory warning..."heavy stuff : enter @ own risk"WinkLOLLOLLOL
 
 
loads f smilSmiles,
 
aish
 
ps : i hate sohiniAngry...FF me bhi unka nam nahi lena he mujeAngry...2nd prob, writer's block ho gya haiOuch...atak gayi me, Dakshna ko emo tangle me dalke me khud phas gayi...ab niklu kaise...poor meUnhappy...
adhe raste pada hai storyLOL
mostly end me kahungi 'sry'LOLLOL
baki...jusht immaginTongueTongue [my std endingLOL]
 
 


Edited by sweetaish - 17 September 2011 at 8:56am

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Posted: 17 September 2011 at 9:29am | IP Logged
it is awesome...i really liked it..glad of reading dakshna scenes here at least..coz of this CVs serial going down..Angry..i wish ayi would change..Big smile

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Posted: 17 September 2011 at 11:57am | IP Logged
Too good Lucky... gt8 dialogues...Clap bahut hi senti hai Cry
whatz next... 

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Posted: 17 September 2011 at 8:59pm | IP Logged
lucky very nice yaar...continue soon wid ur later partsSmile

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Part 5

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P-ZOO

Daksh gets ready and comes out of his room and looks at naina's room finds door closed.He is about to knock.Just then ayi comes there 

Ayi; chintu..chal nasta karne ke liye, saying this she goes and knocks naina's door and calls her for brkfast
From inside room naina says; ayi, Mujhe thoda waqt lagege..mein aajavungi
Ayi; teek hain beta..jaldi karna 

She starts moving.Daksh is still standing there looking at naina's room.Ayi notices this and says; chintu..tu chal,yaha kyu khada hain?? chal mere saath

Daksh ek sad sa expression lekar waha se nikal tha hainConfused

Dining table

Sare zoo ke members aagaye..sabki khana lag gaya.Daksh is not interested in eating and keeps looking for naina.As usaul rohini shuru ho jaati hainAngry

Rohini' Lagta hain..kisi ka intezaar ho raha hai..kyu daksh?
Daksh gives a dnt care lookLOL and continues with his search.Just then naina comes.Daksh ke chehre pe smile aa jata hainBig smile

Daksh' good morning
Naina; looks at him but says..goodmorning everybody and she gets her reply from all zoo members

Dakshu expects naina  to sit besides him as usual..but no..naina goes into the kitchen,picks her coffee and sits with akruthi who in on the other dining table and they start discussing clients..etc and naina doesn't even look at daksh..daksh is disappointedOuch.He completes his brk fast looking at naina and feeling the pain of her ignoranceCry

Every body is done with brk fast aur sab log apne apne cages mein jaane ke liye disperse ho jaate hainLOL.Daksh is about to leave from there,just then he over hears aku and naina's words

Aku; naina, tumne woh file liya..jo designs kal humne dekha.tumne yaad dilane ke liye kaha
Naina' arey haan, akruthi..mein tho bhool gayi.mein abhi lekar aata hoon..
Aku' pehle naasta tho khatam karo...and naina agrees

Dakshu gives a very small smileSmile  and leaves from there

Naina  comes to collect the file and is about to go into her room, daksh holds her hand pulls her into his room and closes the door.Naina is shocked and worried 

Naina; daksh ye kya kar rahe ho..mujhe jaana hain

Saying this she goes near door but daksh comes between her and door

Naina; daksh...
Daksh; Naina..pls meri baat suno..mujhe tumse jaroori baat karna hain and I promise maam ka jyada waqt nahi lunga.
Naina ; Teek haina..jaldi kaho
Daksh comes near naina..and naina hr8 starts beating fasterHeart
Daksh takes naina's hands into his hand and says

Daksh; Naina..mujhe pata hain tum kal raat ki baat ko lekar gusse mein ho..Mein maanta hoon kal kuch jyada react kiya tha mein ne..sorry.lekin mere gussa bewaja nahi hain

Naina starts feeling bad as she was one who was very rude to him aur ye bandha.usko sorry keh raha hain..bt she doesn't show it on her face and daksh continues...

Daksh; naina.samjhne ki koshis karo..I was concerned and worried about u,tum itni late hogayi aur upar se phone ya msg nahi.woh bhi shubha se..ek baar bhi tumhara chehra dekhno ko nahi mila..aur..aur.

Naina; aur..

Daksh puts in his both palms on nainas' cheeks and says; 

Daksh;Naina mein kuch bhi bardaash karsakta hoon..lekin tumse door rehna mere bas ki baat nahi heinDay Dreaming aur pata nahi mujhe kuch dino se aisa  lagraha ki, tum mujhe purposefully avoid kar rahi hoConfused aur ye ehsaas ki tum mujhe ignore kar rahi ho...mujhse bilkul bardaash nahi hota..bilkul nahi..iss liye kal...tum samaj rahi hona...

Naina( in her mind); mujhe pata hain daksh..ki tumhe kaisa lag raha hain.tumhe kitna taklif ho raha hain lekin mujhe ye karna hoga  ayi ke liye..I am sorry..

Hall - p-zoo

Fox aur cow( Joshi aur supriya aate hain)..lol.After all greetings etc etc...joshi asks about  wedding arrangements and he aks about daksh..Ayi aks sanket to call daksh

Daksh's room

Naina; haan sabkuch samaj rahi hoon..agar tumhari baat khatam hogayi  tho mein javoo.She starts leaving and daksh holds her hand

Daksh; Ek aur baat hain naina..
Naina turns back; ab kya hain daksh?
Daksh; woh maine kal ayi se hamare baare mein baat kiya aur...

Just then sanket comes and knocks the door and informs about visitors and his needed presence.Daksh says he will be there in 5 min and sanket leaves

Naina; daksh ..mujhe jaana hain..pls
Daksh; naina. suno tho sahi  ayi ne kya kaha

Naina opens the door and says; abhi nahi baad mein and she goes into her room.Mean while ayi calls " chintu" aur daksh needs to leave with no option left.He reaches hall and greets MR & Mrs.joshi

Joshi says and says theres very less time left for marriage and they need to hurry up  nad what about wedding planner and where is their PG.Daksh is about to say something.Just then naina comes and says

Naina; Dnt wry, Mr.joshi, shaadi ki saare arrangements ho jayenge aur mein khaas khayal rakhungi..aur waqt se pehle ho jayenge kyunki maine already themes pe kaam karna shuru kardiya..Angry

Daksh  shockedShocked and he looks at naina with same shock , every body else is happy and naina leaves to her office.Daksh is furious Angrywith confusion whats happening with him...and with naina, but he controls his emotions and waits till Doosre Zoo se aaye huye visitors chale gayeLOL

Once they left daksh picks up his keys and his bag and goes out near his car,throws his laptop in his car and with Kp lookAngry he looks at naina's office aur woh dheere dheere apna khadam bada raha hein
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