Dilwale dulhe le jayenge-(FF) Last part updated - Page 5

lucky.m

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: LadyMystique
Dont cut it into so many parts!😔 just go on writing will u? u know i cant wait with patience😳

Btw...nice story...nice to see daksh acting smart!😛

Dnt wry. dear.just 3 to 4 more parts...and a happy ending..Soon😉

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lucky.m

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Posted: 12 years ago

contd...

PART 10

Shaadi ka din...

Muhurat; evening 4.00PM( daksh ki), 3.45 pm(aku ki shaadi ka muhurat)

Naina's darjeeling train; 6.30 pm

(2.00pm P-ZOO)

All arrangements are done...sab log mandap ke liye nikhal rahe he,Aku comes and asks naina when is she coming..naina says she will be there in 1 or 2 hrs as she just completed arrangements and will take time to get ready...

..Every body leave except naina.Sablog gaadi mein beth rahe hain..aur naina apne room ki kidki se dekh rahi hain.

Suddenly daksh ki nazar upar jaata hein, both share a eye lock.😳.tears spill out of naina's eyes😭 and she goes away from window

Daksh within himself; bas aaj shyam tak ki baat hain naina..I promise uske baad tumhare annkhone mein asu kabhi nahi aane doonga..kabhi bhi nahi aur humare zinadagi sirf khusiyan hongi

Naina's room

Naina apna luggage pack kar liya and she takes one last round of her Patwardan house( Didnt refer as P-zoo as its from naina's point of view) remembering all her moments with ayi , baba and all members and the day she entered PH and her fights with daksh and later their pyar❤️.. judai and crys out😕.😭cursing her fate..

After sometime naina comes back to thoda normal stage..looks at watch..3.30pm..

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Naina; bas adha ghantha aur..shaadi ho jayegi( with pain)

,she takes her luggage, writes a letter( U can imagine the contents..Some urgent work came out in darjeeling and she needs to leave)..She knows ayi will cover up later part...She leaves to railway station..as she dnt want to get hurt more, by memories..

Naina travel plan' first to kolkata in train..then to new jalpaiguri and next darjeeling

5.00 pm..

Mumbai railway station

Naina takes her ticket goes and sits in her seat..lost in thoughts..Just then..somebody comes and says

Excuse me; ye mera seat hai..

Naina lifts her head and gets shocked😲..lol..its dakshu😆

PS;; More parts coming up shortly,

Contd...

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DakshnaFan

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Posted: 12 years ago

Oh Wow Lucky 👏... Apna FF wala Dakshu is truely a smart lawyer 😉

Naina ka part while reading felt very sad for her 😭 ... but end of FF 10 bought smile on my face 😊

Aab jaldi se batau how he did?😃... and i am waiting for those tappad wala scene and apne dakshu ke bhari dialogues...

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: DakshnaFan
Oh Wow Lucky 👏... Apna FF wala Dakshu is truely a smart lawyer 😉
Naina ka part while reading felt very sad for her 😭 ... but end of FF 10 bought smile on my face 😊

Aab jaldi se batau how he did?😃... and i am waiting for those tappad wala scene and apne dakshu ke bhari dialogues...

same here...ditto again😆😆...

lucky yar...lajawab...luv dis smart dakshu...luvd d 10th wale ka esply😆...waitin 4 d rest...

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Neethu

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Posted: 12 years ago

wow!! superb! superb!

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lucky.m

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Posted: 12 years ago

Contd...

Part -11( sub part 1)

Naina is shocked to see daksh😲.Daksh casually comes and sits in opposite seat of naina and says,

Daksh; Arey naina. tum! tum bhi darjeeling jaa rahi ho? mujhe bataya kyu nahi , saath mein nikalthe..😆.

Naina is still in shock and daksh says; kya hua?

Naina recovers and says; daksh tum yaha..iss waqt

Daksh; iss waqt ka kya matlab? 6.00 pm ki train ke liye mein kal aakar station mein nahi beth sakta😆

Naina serious;😡 mazaq bandh karo daksh..aur batavo ki tum yaha kya kar rahe ho..shaadi?

Daksh; shaadi? tumhare bina tho mera shaadi nahi hosakti na😛..issliye maine mandap se bhag liya.😆.dekho..mere paas kuch bhi nahi hain..ticket ke alava...

Naina is confused, shocked at daksh's behaviour and even more angry

Naina; kya..mandap se bhag liya? oh..tumhe kya laga? aise karne se mein tumse shaadi karlunga..nahi?😡

Daksh; teek haina..tum mujhse shaadi mat karo..mein tumse karunga..😉.

Naina(;irritated) ahhh daksh..tum ne aisa kyu kiya? sab yahi sochenge ki...

Daksh; ki tum mujhe bhagakar le gayi.😆.sach hi tho hain😆

Naina; daks tum pls abhi yaha se chale javo abhi

Daksh; excuse me, ye tumhara train nahi hein..mere paas bhi ticket hain..nahi javunga

Naina; teek hain..tum chale javo darjeeling..mein jaa rahi, hoo

saying this she takes luggage nad gets down .daksh gives a cute smile😊 looking at her...naina gets down the train..and takes few steps ..is shocked😲 to see members of P-zoo parivaar (ayi, baba, sanket,kaka,kaki.aku). standing before her

Just then daksh come and stands besides naina..holding her hand.😛...

Daksh; (seriously)Agar main shaadi karunga sirf naina se.chahe aap mano ya naa mano..

cONTD...

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lucky.m

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Posted: 12 years ago

Contd...

Part 11(sub part 2)

Naina apna haath chudakar..ayi ke paas jaati hain and says; ayi..mera yakeen maniye , mein kuch nahi kiya..maine daksh ko nahi bulaya..mere koi galati nahi hein

Daksh; ye kya keh rahi ho naina..tumhi ne tho kaha thi shyam 5.00pm station pe milo..shaadi karlenge😆

Ayi; chintu, bas kar..with lot of regret and shame in her eyes she holds naina's hands and says

Ayi ;Naina beta..galti meri hain..humsab ki..jo tumhe galat samaj liya... pls mujhe maaf kardo..meine tumhare saath acha nahi kiya..kisi bahar walo ki baaton mein aakar tum par shak kiya, tumhe apne aap se door kardiya..paraya kar diya.mein apne aap ko kabhi maaf nahi karsakthi.👏.aur tumne sirf mere kehne par apna pyar ko qurbaan kar diya...kitni achi hain tu...pls mujhe maaf kardo👏

Just then kaki comes and says; haan naina..maine tumhe galat samaj liya .tumne aku ke liye itna kuch kiya..aur mein bina sach ko jaane tumhe...aur uss par vishwas kar liya jo akruthi ki zindagi ko barbaad karne walithi

Niana; ayi, kaki..ye aap kya keh rahe ho?😲 mujhse maafi? aur aap sab yaha..aakhir baat kya hain?❓

Just then aku comes in and says'; arey naina tum ab tak samaj nahi payi..dada ki shaadi sonakshi se nahi huyi👏 aur uska asli chehra sabko pata chal gaya.aur ye bhi pata chal gaya ki tumhari koi galati nahi hain aur tumhe phasaya gaya hain😕..aur hum seedha mandap se yaha aagaye tumhare liye😛...ab tho khush ho javo aur dada tumhare saath mazaq kar rahe the😆

Naina turns at daksh and daksh nods his head saying; maine kuch nahi kiya

Naina is still confused( I know u all are..sabr karo..)...

Ayi; naina..mein apna kasam wapas leti hoon , agar mere chintu ki zindagi mein koi uski patni banegi aur meri bahu tho sirf tum..kya tu mere paagal chintu se shaadi karegi?(at last kuch tho achi baat kaha apne)

Naina's hr8 jumping with joy, surprised and shocked with happiness; tears of happiness and she says; ayi

Ayi; mana mat karo...Naina nods her head saying yes...sab log khush ho gaye😃

Sanket comes forward and says; naina rohini tumhare saath jo kuch hi kiya..uss ki taraf se main maafi maangtha hoon..woh apne khudh ki nazaro mein itna gir gayi ki uss mein tumhara samna karne ka himmat nahi raha...

Baba.comes forward and says; naina beta..tu darjeeling chali jaa aur chintu bhi tera saath chalega.. hum ek do din mein pahuch jayenge

Naina keeps an expression Y?❓

Ayi; arey pagli..anajali ji se chintu aur tere shaadi ki baat jo karna hain.😍..daksh comes for ward and ayi takes naina's hand and puts in his hand...(bahut pehle karna chahiye tha)🥳

contd...in next page..dnt miss)

Edited by lucky.m - 12 years ago

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lucky.m

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Posted: 12 years ago

Contd...

Part 11- sub part 3

Daksh aur naina ki chehre par 20,000 watt bulb wala smile aajata hain😃( dil ye dance maare..so happy in my hr8 dil dance maare re)

Baba; vibha..mujhe lagata hain hume daksh aur naina akele chod kar ab jaana chahiye...( wah baba, agar koi samajdhar uss Zoo mein tho aap)😉

Ayi nods her head and says; chintu..mere bahu ka khayal rakhan aur koi badmaashi nahi..samjhe..😆

Daksh; haan ayi,mein kuch nahi karunga agar, aapki chothi bahu ne kuch badmaashi kiya tho..😆

Naina; nahi ayi!

Everybody leaves from there smiling😛

❤️Daksh and naina turn towards each other ang hug eact other tightly( ek dum emotional hug🤗 jo film ki climax mein hota hain, with tears in eyes😭 and camera rolls around them.)Daksh kisses naina 's fore head😳..Sb passengers dekh rahe hein tho dono iss duniya mein aate hain.❤️

Daksh; paagal..mujhe chod kar jaa rahithi..apne daksh ko😍..woh bhi meri jaan tumhare saath le kar.😍. aur tumhe laga mein tumhe jaane doonga..saying this again he hugs her and agian he says aur mujhe uss psycho ke haathon mein chod kar😆( Even daksh feels the same like us..lol😆)

Naina;(question mark face); psyho?❓

Daksh; mera matalb hain sonakshi..😆

Naina comes out of her happiness and says; daksh pls mujhe batavo ki hua kya hain? shaadi kaise rukh gayi aur sab ko sachayi kaise pata chala❓..pls..ab aur tang mat karo..pls batovona❓

Daksh; looks at watch; 5.30 pm; abhi bahut saara time baaki hain..mere saath coffee peene chaloge tho batavunga😍..aur waisa bhi rahi baat sachayi sabke saamne laane ki tho, tumhare honewala pati itna smart lawyer ki😛..kya batavu?😉

Naina; haan haan..very smart...chale😛

Daksh and naina sit in coffee shop nearby to railway station and daksh starts narrating what happened in shaadi ka mandap actually and how he exposed sohini

PS; OK GUYS ..Hum almost climax tak pahuch gayi and next part will be exposure of sohini.. I know u all are excited about next part..even I was when I started typing that..Coming up shortly..on the way..so get ready...😉

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DakshnaFan

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Posted: 12 years ago

oye oye Lucky sachi dil dance maar raha hai mera U made my day...

Loved Dakshu ke dialogues... kitna nautanki 😉😆

Loved when Daksh holds naina's hand and says I want to marry her whether u like it or not😃... Dil khush hogaya to see Dakshu dear like this

Aai ka pachtava in each dialogue very well written 😊

Please jaada intezaar maat karav yaar suspense khol do abhi 😍 please ⭐️😍

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 12 years ago

lucky...ilu 4 dis🤗...baki kaha hai...cnt wait cnt wait...

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