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SURROGATE RELATIONS # 4, PART 33 ON 13/10 (Page 107)

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Posted: 09 October 2011 at 3:24am | IP Logged
Originally posted by aashluvsmaan

Originally posted by bangalores

Originally posted by aashluvsmaan

Cry


why the sad face coz u cudnt stalk?Smile
yeshCry
 
i was slleeepingCry
 
me will cry littleCryCryCry
 
then sulkEmbarrassed
 
then remeber that u had a bare chested maan in the update..Day Dreaming
 
thoda drool karisDay Dreamingv
 
waise hi precap ke baad haal bura haiDay Dreaming
 
 then come back to comment...LOLLOLLOL


haila...

i was wondering how to proceed after that scene...now i can break off to another part...but tlc for sure...Smile and another shot at bare chested maanEmbarrassed


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Posted: 09 October 2011 at 3:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mchopra

I am confused...last ch we read he left for office and this upadte he is hurt...u ate up something or did i miss a ch in bw..Ermm


the marriage and the wake up scene r really a flash back...started with maan's thought once he packed brij off to jail...that is chapters 28 to the present chapter...
brij encounter happens in parts 26 nd 27...which is 2 days after maan's return from abroad...nd parts 28-31 happen during those days...Big smile

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Posted: 09 October 2011 at 3:34am | IP Logged
I really did not expect that you would update on a sunday!!!!! So i was totally thrilled when i saw the update!!!!!!!! Thanks a lottt for that...

The update was tooo goood... I totally loved it!!!!!!!!!!! I loved the way Maan was trying to comfort her and tell her the truth and make her understand... and daadi is a sweet heart... am totally loving the post marriage maaneet bonding,,,,,, 

Brilliant, awesome and sweet update... waiting for the remaining tom!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 09 October 2011 at 3:48am | IP Logged
oh ok...i shall read them again...thnks..

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Posted: 09 October 2011 at 4:21am | IP Logged

loved it

And thanx for that note
I was really confused at first
but now confusions cleared and I also know what papers Maan put in front of Brij
 
Awesome work dear
You actually weaved the story and all the parts so well
 
 

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Posted: 09 October 2011 at 4:25am | IP Logged
loved th teaser diii, ab jaldi se update bhi dedijiye Wink and how come you gave an update on sunday... thanx for taking that risk...Smile

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Posted: 09 October 2011 at 4:36am | IP Logged
awesome..
fabulous..
i so wanted their conversation to continue..
but this small candy will do till we get the longer part..
plz continue soon

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Posted: 09 October 2011 at 4:36am | IP Logged
Geet is so innocent n luvly,maan did a grt job by puttng brij in jail

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