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OS: Can I touch you... just once?part3 pg 7 updtd

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This is an OS based on 15th September episode. 


The first touch

I stood there in the middle with hundreds of eyes on me. Where was I? What was I doing here? How did I even get here? I had no idea. I stood near the edge. Uncomfortable. All alone. A shiver ran down my spine and as it did, I tripped and fell. Oh God. I closed my eyes. I should be falling flat on the hard ground. It should hurt. I landed somewhere. It wasn't hard. It didn't hurt. I landed somewhere safe, somewhere comfortable. I felt someone holding me tightly. I felt his arms. I felt his hands. I felt his touch. I slowly opened my eyes. I saw a pair of deep dark eyes staring at my face. 

 

Don't hold me back

As the door opened, I ran as fast as I could without looking back. I had to get out here. Suddenly someone grabbed my arm and pulled me back. No. Let me go.

 

Scattered Pearls

He pulled me back once again. Why wasn't he letting me go? I wanted to go. He grabbed something. The Pearl strings? Oh God. No. He ripped the strings and as he did, his fingers lightly brushed my back. The pearls scattered everywhere. 

 

It's you again

He accused me of stalking him. He thinks I follow him everywhere. Yeah right, in your dreams. I offered to pay him for his wrecked SUV. Instead he took my wrist, handed me a thousand rupees and drove off.


END OF PART 1


index

PART 1 -PAGE 1

PART 2 - PAGE 5

PART 3- PAGE 7



Edited by incandescent - 04 October 2011 at 12:30pm

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wow that was beautiful Clap
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This is beautiful!! Pure brilliance!! You write amazingly! Do continue! Would love to read this story-in-motion soonDay Dreaming

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Super post...

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That was brilliant darling!!!
Very romantic!!
Looking forward to you continuing this.
Do let me know when you update!!!
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Simply beautiful !! Brilliant start.Thumbs Up  Update soon and do add me to your PM list.Smile

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