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Fanfic: second chance chap16,17lastchap pg 32,33 (Page 9)

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Posted: 17 September 2011 at 2:55am | IP Logged
chapter 5
 
PRESENT:
"I dont know why he is here, perhaps only for work." tried misha to calm me down.
"Yes, I think you are right."
"When will Sameer fetch you?" she asked now to change the topic.
"At seven." I looked at my watch and jumped.
"Shit, Im late. Sorry misha, I have to get ready." I called and left the house.

"Wow, you look amazing, piya said Sameer as I opened the door.
"Thank you, but you look also good." I smiled.
"These are for you." he handed me chocolates.
"I couldnt take flowers, as you are working in a flowershop."
"Thank you so much." I put them inside and grabbed my bag.
"Ok, lets go."
We went to a lovely little restaurant and I really had fun with Sameer. He was so charming, funny and just a great accompany.
"So, may I ask you for another date?" he asked as he walked me home.
"This date isnt even finished and you ask for another one?" I asked suprised.
"Sure, I mean befor anybody else askes you to got out..." I giggled.
"And? What about another date?" he asked with a puppy look on his face.
"This would be great." I answered turning red.
"Great!" he called, at this moment my mobile went off.
"Hello?" I asked
"piya? Thank god. misha here. Rohan had an accident, were at the hospital, come fast!" called misha and hung up.
"What has happened, piya. You are so pale." asked Sameer concerned.
"Rohan is at the hospital, I have to go there immediately." I said in shock.
"I just parked around the corner, Ill drive you. But who is Rohan?" He offered a bit confused.
"Thank you, Sameer." We ran to his car and drove off.
In the car I could think about nothing but Rohan, misha had sounded really desperate.
"Please god, safe him." I whispered over and over again.
"Calm down, piya. Im sure hes ok, but who is Rohan?" he asked again.
I looked at him and thought if I should tell him or not, but then I decided to be honest.
"Rohan is my 4 year old son."

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Posted: 17 September 2011 at 2:57am | IP Logged
Oh God Abhay married 2 another womanShocked thts bad but y he did tht?ConfusedOh I feel bad 4 Pia.Poor gal.I guess there must b some reason 4 Abhay doing this crap.Plzz revel & show us Abhay's present point of view tooEmbarrassed
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Posted: 17 September 2011 at 3:01am | IP Logged
res againLOL
edited----actually i am swayed by ur storyLOLso no words r coming LOL


Edited by ilove99 - 17 September 2011 at 3:23am
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Posted: 17 September 2011 at 3:03am | IP Logged
I wanna see Abhay's POV... Shocker... Dan Dan DAn camera focusses on Sameer's face thrice in a row ekta style lols.. PM me... !!!
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Posted: 17 September 2011 at 3:11am | IP Logged
nice part dear but I guess tumne yeh story already kahin likhi huyi hai coz in FF u forgot 2 change Abhay's name waha robbie likha tha but now I really wnt 2 read Abhay's point of view.Y the hell he did tht 2 pia?Confused
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Posted: 17 September 2011 at 3:13am | IP Logged
Haww...Abhay married to some other women..
Rohan's accident..i want to read Abhay's POV too...
update soon..and thanxx for the Pm..
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Posted: 17 September 2011 at 3:21am | IP Logged
awesome update. But want to know why abhay got married to someone else. Wonder when abhay and piya will meet again?
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Posted: 17 September 2011 at 3:36am | IP Logged
wonderful updates...Thumbs Up
loved every bit of it...
OMG!! Shocked
abhay's mom is such a ruthless woman...she has no concern for his son's love... Angry
awww...abhiya flashbacks were dreamy & passionate .. Day Dreaming Embarrassed
i also want to know abhay's story..i'm sure .. he didnt hurt piya on purpose! Smile
i like sameer ... but i really want to see abhiya together.. Wink
i hope..rohan is fine!! Confused
thanks for the pm..dear Big smile
continue soon
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