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ArHi SS/FF - With Or Without You- Chp 61/Pg114-Last Chp (Page 74)

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Posted: 24 September 2011 at 2:05pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by -RushTrip-

Arre yaar..

i will ask you to write only if you are feeling up to it

jaan hai toh jahaan hai...

so not only take care of yourself first... but only if you feel good do you want to even start writing..

Gabbar nahi toh aa raha hai india...

Aur pata hai... bachcha jab..raat ko rota hai toh...ma kya kehti hai?

Ki beta so jaa nahi toh ...

I know. Sorry for tht stupid outburst. I was having slightly low Bp. I tend to blab when I have low bp. Sorry. Cry

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Posted: 24 September 2011 at 3:08pm | IP Logged
omg i love it!!!

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Posted: 24 September 2011 at 3:23pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Lip-a-Licious

by the way as this has crossed 54 chapters...
it's officially a FF not SS LOL



I know darling...

i am wanting it to get over already...and in that hope i have still kept the title short story..

but yeah i know..i tend to write more than i even speak..so..there...

i should change it to just FF...


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Posted: 24 September 2011 at 3:23pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sakuraa

omg i love it!!!


Thank you so much!
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Posted: 24 September 2011 at 3:32pm | IP Logged
This was so cute & HOT! Loved it so much...love naughty Arnav imitating Kushi on the phone... that was brilliant! I can actually visualise that scene! LOL.
 
PLEASE update soon, and more Cute ARSHI scenes please with lots of romance and some hotness thrown in as well...I think they need to confess their feelings soon. Kushi needs to tell him she loves him, coz I feel he is not sure of her feelings and visa versa...waiting on the update!

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Posted: 24 September 2011 at 3:57pm | IP Logged
Thank you!

You have read the whole story?

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Posted: 24 September 2011 at 4:15pm | IP Logged
OH.MY.GOD!!!!!!!!!!

Boy, do you have a way with words!! Vrush, you are one of the best writers I've come across on IF! Your writing is very eloquent and elegant so at no point does it seem vulgar...which is quite an achievement considering some of those scenes! Clap

And my my my were those scenes were just Blushing Thumbs Up Blushing Hehehe kahan se soch laati ho yeh sab scenes lol?!

I also like the story you have going on...I really liked the beginning...how Khushi is a confident young girl, with clear goals of helping her family and how Arnav had an instant attraction to her...but then the whole brother-sister/cousin thing happened  and I was like what the hell is wrong with you?!! How can you even put him through that and I was gonna stop reading even though I knew they weren't really cousins...but then I just wanted to see where you would take the story next...and boy am I glad I kept reading!! Because it only got better from there!!!

I really like the characters you've developed:

- Arnav with his on and off switch, which hopefully will change soon after everything is in the open with him and Khushi

-Khushi who is having her dreams come true and falling head over heels in love with Arnav, but still holding her own! And I like the fact that she realizes that something is going on with Arnav and questions him gently, but leaves the matter for a later date when he doesn't fully respond.

-Lavanya as a self-respecting, intelligent, and real girl was a pleasure to read!

-Just happy that Shyam is normal!!!

-Payal and Akash were really cute! Glad Payal at least does something by helping out with the sweet shop! (She irks me in the show so I always get happy when she is productive in ffs lol)

-Nani is quite the old lady and has wisdom and experience exuding her! I can't believe she noticed the bra under the pillow...if only Khushi knew that, she would die of embarrassment!! I am happy you made her make Arnav say at least a goodbye to Khushi before she left for Lucknow. I really appreciate that she is a cool old lady!

I'm just wondering, are you from Lucknow? You seem to know quite a lot about the city...and do you happen to be in the fashion industry? Because you describe Khushi's designs in such detail..!

I love the ArHi romance! I'm so glad he came to see her in Lucknow...please let him tell her about Tanirika before she finds out for herself from the evil woman! What kind of a woman is out to ruin her own child's life... Dead...Ugh! By the way, how did you come up with her name? I've never heard of that name before...

And please update sooonnn!!! Because after reading 54 chapters together, I don't think I can wait too long for an update! Toh thoda reham karna mujh bechari par aur "rush" kar ke update karna Tongue LOL

Best,
Smarty

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