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ArHi SS/FF - With Or Without You- Chp 61/Pg114-Last Chp (Page 110)

Jyo. IF-Rockerz
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Posted: 12 December 2011 at 1:55am | IP Logged
Loved both the updates <3 Love you for not dragging the revelation to Khushi for too long! I thought there was going to be this massive break before the truth came out but you surprised me =P Update soonnn :) Missed this FF like crazy. 

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sharneil92 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 12 December 2011 at 2:03am | IP Logged
Originally posted by -RushTrip-

yeah Shalu!

i am trying to weave a suspense where something has to make them want to say it out that they matter more to each other than their pasts... which has hurt them both..

awww!! that's such an awesome concept! Embarrassed yes, they have overcome all of their differences, fight of all their past demons, if they truly wish to fall in love! Embarrassed

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Priya_128 IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 12 December 2011 at 2:20am | IP Logged

Vrushyyy...
Brillliant two updates...
I love how even after all this while the story is as well paced as before...I for one found no disconnects...
U've perfectly blended in the mystery factor with tanirika and her ploy to extract money with arnav's quest to protect his wife...and khushi's 

And the cliffhanger u've left us in..aaa :D
I shall be less greedy and not ask for updates today...but hope u do update sooon :)

Missed ur writing vrush...glad ur back

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Posted: 12 December 2011 at 2:33am | IP Logged
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Posted: 12 December 2011 at 2:46am | IP Logged
wow..that was quick..loved the update..it was really good.

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Posted: 12 December 2011 at 2:48am | IP Logged
that woman is going to use khushi past against them hope she does not win
love the update awesome thanks for the p m 
                                           

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Posted: 12 December 2011 at 2:55am | IP Logged
ur back with a bang
loved both the updates
please don't end this ff,its my favourite
continuw soon

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Posted: 12 December 2011 at 2:56am | IP Logged
Hey Vrushali!
 
Just caught up with youre FF, and seriously, Im absolutey in love with youre writing! I do remember reading your other work (Wishful thinking) a while back, but never managed to comment, however, Im so glad Ive finally gotten hold of your FF now :) Im still wondering how I could have missed it! lol But better late than never ;)
 
As for the story, I love how youve depicted and narrated the entire progression in Arnav and Khushis marriage and also, their characterization, individually. Absolutely marvelous! Now Im loving the blend youre adding in with Khushi's mom. Im very curious as to how shes going to react...but Im sure only you can tell us that. Do update soon! And dont forget to pm me Smile
 
- Dee


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