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Posted: 15 September 2011 at 9:55pm | IP Logged
Heyyy Bengalscott!!!! First of all, a warm welcome to da forum and CGM family... Hug  Hug  hope u have a good time n get a lot of besties here... (that makes u reveal ur real name soon!!!!) LOL lol!!! just kidding haan dude!!!! I so so sooo love ur DP (display pic) re!! Calvin & Hobbes!!!!! Approve they have always been my fav comic characters!!! Dancing
woahhh!!! Radhi talks about us!!!!!! Embarrassed that's really sweet of her... *hugs* to u Radhi... Hug

Coming to ur story - ahaaa... i m glad it's not a simple love story but includes some darkness too!! (mostly simple love stories bore me Dead
wow!! this is da 2nd story of which i m a part!!!!! Party Thanx a ton!! Hug In Aru's story also i m one of the characters!!! (thanx to u as well, Aru Hug) but not able to follow that for a while.. actually I'm extremely busy till mid November so avoid reading any FFs, coz i get addicted to it then!!!!!!!! LOL So i m not sure if i can comment on ur updates regularly D'oh but yaa... as i have already finished reading ur 2 updates, now i cannot stay away from this!! so gonna read this for sure... Embarrassed
All characters sound interesting!!! 
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Chapter 1 - woahhh!! i loved how da story started!!! Clap I loved Radhika's confident attitude... Radhika always wanted to know criminal minds!!!!! no wonder!!!!!! ROFL so u know Radhi quite well, huh!! hehehee!! 
i loved R n C convo a lot!! shows da perfect comfort level!!! loved my 1st dialogue too!!!!!! ROFL that was sooo Charuish!!!!! LOL 

Chapter 2 -  
Dhanraj Chopra - wow!!! loved his persona!!!! Clap A man in 40s but still look quite mid 30s Shocked Radhi ki nikal padi!!!!!! LOL 
I just loved how u used Fighter fishes to tell us about D's attitude towards life!!! Clap Thumbs Up D is gonna b in ICPMF Shocked OMG wat's da story behind this??? cant wait to see!!!! 
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Something about ur writing - ahaa.. Thumbs Up very good piece of writing, dude!! This isn't ur 1st time, is it? I loved ur command over language... perfect placement of words and perfect use of separators like comma, full stop, etc.. that makes it easy for a reader to understand things... Clap Approve

Loved ur story, quite different and interesting as well.. Do update soon... just cant wait to see 1st meeting of R and D!! 


Edited by Charu21 - 15 September 2011 at 9:56pm

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Posted: 15 September 2011 at 10:02pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by jhum_86

ye mr.P kaun hai???
that's Mr Patil, Dhanaraj's lawyer... 

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Posted: 15 September 2011 at 10:06pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by radhikarani


btw charu n bharti. I guess bhargu wl kill me by hearing ths.
So bhargu, peihu, indu, abhi, ritu, spardha, aru, polly, are all gd frnds of mine.. Who stl exits. Sory if i miss any name. Hope all of thm join u sn. I hv 2 msg d link to thm.
 Radhi, tu buri fasi!!!!!! 
Originally posted by radhikarani

thnx abhi 4 liking
lol!! Abhi is at his best when it comes to hit like and then just disappear!!!!!!!  LOL & u r best to catch him doing this!!!!!!! lol!!!!! ROFL

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Posted: 15 September 2011 at 10:14pm | IP Logged
mr.patil shw k kaunse character hai??

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Posted: 15 September 2011 at 10:19pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by jhum_86

mr.patil shw k kaunse character hai??
ohhh!! u were asking that way!! sorry i misunderstood!!!! LOL
that even i donno... LOL

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Posted: 15 September 2011 at 11:48pm | IP Logged
hehe thnx charu. Ya i want to meet D soon n fall in love and romance. Hehe.
Yuppu really buri fasi.
Seriously yaar abhi lagta h sukhu ko dhundte ate h. N nirash hokar lyk marke chale jate

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Posted: 16 September 2011 at 1:13am | IP Logged
@Charu Thanks a ton for such wonderful critical appreciation of my first 2 chapters. There will be much more twists with your character. Clap

@All As I told before that I need suggestions for characters. So just suggest me who will suit Mr. Patil? Its just a cameo but a very important one. So think about it and suggest. Smile

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Posted: 16 September 2011 at 1:20am | IP Logged
amatya raksas aur kaun?

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