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Posted: 15 September 2011 at 12:10pm | IP Logged
@Bharti yup its a fault and has been rectified.

@All
How's the starting of the story?

@Jhum What's ff? I am new to this forum so you must give me some time to get involved with these lingos.

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Posted: 15 September 2011 at 12:24pm | IP Logged
@bengali 
FF means fan fiction ... the story u riting is k/a fan fiction 
n ya the starting is gud 

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Posted: 15 September 2011 at 12:48pm | IP Logged
Chapter 2: The Subject

"Is Mr. Chopra is in?" asks a man in his mid 30s, all suited in black.
"Yes, do you have an appointment, sir?" says the receptionist lady.

Man:"Oh yes, I do. Tell him Mr. Patil is here."

Recep:"Sure thing sir, he's is waiting for you only."

Mr. Patil enters the room. Its a big office cabin with expensive decorations and a man who is looking at the big glass aquarium, blankly.

Patil: "Enjoying the view, Chopra?"

Chopra turns around. Dhanraj Chopra, a man in his 40s but still look quite mid 30s. Clean shaved and bears that edgy look. Wearing a rim-less glasses he looks suave and enigmatic.

Dhanraj with a grin smile "Fascinating creatures, these fighter fishes are. Fights and kills even its own siblings. No mercy at all. But the best part is they don't kill others if not needed, they just love to be the king of the arena, whether its a sea or an aquarium. Just like me..." the smile increases a bit.

Patil in a shaky fearful tone, "I find the connection amusing." Dhanraj goes to his bar in his room and makes drink.

"I didn't call you here for amusement, Patil. Drink?"

Patil:"Sure, no ice, only wat..."

D: "I know your choices well, Patil..." and he hands the drink to Patil, "...but lets talk about mine. What happened?"

P:"Court granted you a rehab in ICPMF."

D:"ICPMF?? But me no criminal, I am not. You know that Patil."

P: "I know, but court had a different notion on murders. They thought your testimony was not properly balanced."

D:"I didn't murder anyone. I saw it. Just saw it. But they are putting me in some nuts medical facility! Why they didn't hold on Rakesh?"




Edited by bengalscott - 15 September 2011 at 12:49pm

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Posted: 15 September 2011 at 12:53pm | IP Logged
new charctr? Nyc. My D always best. Love him. I lv cute villains.
Btw pls cpy d link in d addres bar and pm or msg to d member in this forum
bhartikhushi
jhum
charu
abhi
histroylover
peihu.

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Posted: 15 September 2011 at 1:02pm | IP Logged
nice part 
continue soon

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Posted: 15 September 2011 at 1:17pm | IP Logged
Continued from previous post...

P: "Don't get impatient. Atleast court sent you for a rehab. Not acquitted you for the murder."

D: "Did I do the murder? Why the acquisition then?"

P: "Anyways, your bail term ends today. The police will be here any moment. Get ready."

Dhanraj looks at Patil. That stone-cold look of Dhanraj just sends chill through Patil's spine.

D:"I once read a mystery fiction that a murderer kills his victim with poisoned ice in their drinks."

Patil bit feared asked "W-What's the connection with your rehab?"

Dhanraj smiled, "You are a very bad lawyer Patil and I am glad you don't have ice with your drinks. Good bye Patil."

Dhanraj leaves the room leaving Patil all in sweats behind as Patil's hand shivering holding the glass of drink.

Continued...

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Posted: 15 September 2011 at 1:23pm | IP Logged
wah nyc part
dat lyn chill through patil's spine.
Ths nyc part. Poisnd ice wala cmmt nyc

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Posted: 15 September 2011 at 5:47pm | IP Logged
ye mr.P kaun hai???

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