Hi sorry for the delay in the update
This part is the continuation of the previous scene I thought to update it on next date but I couldn't so here is the update
Scene 6:
Ram and Priya are surpised by looking at the picture
Ram:yeh photo kis ne liya hai
Priya:main bhi wohi soch rahi thi
Ram goes to intercom and dials number and asks to send bansi kaka to his room, as soon as bansi kaka enters the room Ram fires him with the question at the same time Rishabh also enters the toom
Ram:yeh kis ne bheja for which bansi kaka was about to give the answer Rishabh interrupts
Rishabh:kya hua bhai kis ne kya bheja
Ram:kuch nahin tu yahan' kuch kaam tha
Rishabh:kuch nahin' kya mila aap ko' bhabhi ne kuch gift diya hia kya aap ko
Ram:aisa kuch nahin hai yaar tu ja na'
Rishabh:arreh bhai aap ke haath mein kya hain
Ram:kuch nahin tu ja yahan se
Rishabh:bhai kuch secret tho nahin and turns to his bhabhi and asks her:bhabhi aap ne aisa kya gift diya hai bhai ko jo woh kisi se bhi share nahin karna chahthe hai
Priya:nahin wohh maine nahin diya woh tho..
Rishabh:kya hua bhabhi aap rukh kyun gaye bathaiye na
Ram:kya chahiye tujhe'
Rishabh:kuch nahin' bahi woh aap ke haath mein kya hai kya main dekh sakta hoon plz
Ram irritatied:le dekh le and he again asks bansi kaka:ye kis ne bheja
Rishabh tells bansi kaka to leave, once bansi kaka leaves Rishabh turns to his brother
Rishabh:kya hua bhai aap ko nahin pata yeh kis ne bheja lekin jis ne bhi bheja na wah kya kamal ka photo liya hai, kitna pyar hai aap dono mein' is mein tho saaf dikh raha hai
Ram:chup kar tu, tune bansi kaka ko kyun bhej diya mujhe janna hai ki yeh kis ne bheja by the time Vikram and Neha enter the room
Vikram:kya hua Ram tu kya janna chahtha hai
Ram:kuch nahin yaar tu yahan kaise he want to send away Vikram and Neha bcoz he knew once they see this picture they'll also start to pull their leg as though Rishabh was not enough
Rishabh:woh Ram bhai na yeh pooch rahe the ki yeh photo'
Ram:kuch nahin tu chup kar
Vikram:kya hua Rishabh kaun sa photo
Rishabh:yeh photo and was about to show to them but Ram took it from him
Ram:kuch nahin tu batana.'
Vikram:main' main kya batao batana tho tujhe hai yeh kaun sa photo hai' kiska hai
Neha:haan fatty dekho na photo and before Ram can hide it Neha grabbed it from him and was joined by Vikram and Rishabh all of them were looking at the picture
Neha:fatty kya baat hai kitna romantic picture hai kab liya yeh picture
Vikram:haan Ram tum aur bhabhi bahut acche lag rahe ho
Ram:woh mujhe nahin pata
Vikram:nahin pata matlab..
Ram:yeh photo gift aaya tha wahi pooch raha tha main bansi kaka se ke kis ne gift diya
Vikram:kyun uss par naam nahin hai kya jis ne gift bheja
Ram:nahin hai yaar isisliye tho pooch raha tha' arreh woh jisne bhi gift bheja na uss mein itni akal bhi nahin hai ki apna naam likhe
Rishabh:bhai aap mujhe kyun daath rahe hai
Ram:maine tujhe kaha daata maine tho uss photo bhej ne wale ko' ek minute kahin tune yeh sab kiya tho nahin
Rishabh going behind his bhabhi:bhai woh maine aap ko koi gift nahin diya na aap ke shaadi ke din tho iss liye maine yeh photo bheja aap ka gift
Ram:tune' yeh sab tune kiya hai'
Rishabh:woh bhai kal raat ko jab maine aap ko aur bhabhi ko saath mein dekha tho mujhe laga ki yeh pal aap dono ke liye hamesha yaadgar rahe issi liye maine photo liya aur aap ko gift bheja aap ko mera gift kaisa laga'
Ram:tu rukh abhi tujhe batata hoon' kab se pooch raha tha main ki yeh photo kis ne bheja with that he goes to catch Rishabh but he was hiding behind Priya
Rishabh: bhabhi mujhe bachayiye please
Ram:aaj tujhe koi nahin bacha sakta tu mujhe mil tho sahi'
Rishabh:nahin bhai main nahin aaoga aur maine kya kiya hai maine tho sirf aap ka photo liya hai woh bhi memorable wala' hai na Vikram bhai
Vikram:haan Ram Rishabh bilkul sahi keh raha hai tu usse itna naraz kyu hai
Ram:tu chup kar..
Vikram:kya hua kahin uss ne tumhare private moments ko disturb tho nahin kiya na
Neha hits Rishabh on his arm:tumne unn dono ko kyun disturb kiya arreh woh tho newly wedded couple hai unn ke kuch private moments hote hai tum bhi kuch samjho unne disturb nahin karna chahiye
Rishabh:arreh mere baat tho suno..
Vikram:kya sune tumne yeh bahut galat kiya unhe iss tarah se disturb kar ke
Neha:haan Vikram sahi keh raha hai tujhe disturb nahin karna chahiye tha dekho ab fatty kitna naraz hai tujse
Ram:oye tum dono bus karo aisa kuch nahin hai
Rishabh:haan wahi tho main bhi keh raha tha maine unhe disturb nahin kiya woh maine apne kamre ke window se dekha' tho maine photos liye I swear maine disturb nahin kiya kyun bhai
Ram:chup kar
Vikram and Neha together:toh phir theek hai
Neha:waise Priya tum dono na iss photo mein ek doosre ki taraf kitne pyaar se dekh rahe ho kya baat hai humare samne tho hamesha ek dosre se dur rahte ho par..
Priya:nahin aise koi baat nahin'
Neha:tho phir kya baat hai hume jo dikh raha hai woh kya hai turning towards Vikram:mujhe lagta hai hume na inko akele chod dekna chahiye chalo
Vikram:haan tum sahi keh rahi ho chalo turns towards Rishabh:tumne yeh photo dikhane ke liye phone kiya tha subha subha
Rishabh:haan Ram angrily looks at Rishabh
Vikram:bahut achi photo hai
Rishabh:thanks aap ko aur dekh ne hai mere pas aur bhi hai par yeh mujhe bahut accha laga isilie maine is ka frame karvaya hai
Vikram:chalo hume aur photos dekaho..
Rishabh:haan par uss se pehle na aap dono mere help kariye na jis ke liye maine aap dono ko bhulaya hai
Neha:help' kaisi help
Rishabh:main chahtha tha ki iss frame ko na hum iss kamre mein laga de par aap tho bhai ko jaanthe hai isiliye maine aap ko bhulaya hai
Neha:kya idea hai' yeh photo perfect hai is room mein lagne ke liye
Ram:nahin yeh mere room mein nahin..
Neha:kya fatty ab tho tumhari shaadi ho gayi hai na tho Priya ka ek photo tho hona chahiye na
Vikram:haan Ram Neha aur Rishabh sahi keh rahe hai and after a lot of argument Ram finally agrees and Neha decides the place and keeps the frame
Vikram:yeh bahut accha dikh raha hai Neha chalo hume chalna chahiye Rishabh tu chal hume aur photos tho dikha
Rishabh:haan dikhata hoon
Ram:tu unhe kuch bhi nahin dikhayega jab tak main na dekho
Rishabh:haan bhai kyun nahin maine aap ke liye ek separate copy banvaya hai yeh lijiye and he hands over an envelop to Ram
Ram opens it and is shocked to find so many pictures of them:yeh sab'
Neha:tune yeh kya kiya hume bhi tho dekh na hai
Rishabh:mere paas aur ek copy hai mere kamre mein desk par aap chaliye main aata hoon hearing that both Vikram and Neha leave
Ram:tu rukh tujhe main abhi batata hoon Rishabh still behind his bhabhi
Rishabh:dekhiye na bhabhi'
Ram:Priya tum beech mein se niklo
Rishabh:bhai bhabhi ko sambhaliye pushes Priya towards Ram he moves towards door
Ram holds Priya and both look at each other and Rishabh clicks some pictures and says thanks with that they both look towards Rishabh who were lost in each others eyes and they both look at the pictures which were on the floor showing them once again how close they were the previous night.
Originally posted by: shamma92Loved the update...thanks! Can't wait for the next part!
Ram entered his room after a tiring day in the office, Priya came to the room to say something but Ram shouted at her without even listening to what she was trying to say Priya too returned back the favour but it was not the end of it from then onwards there were not in talking terms, its been more than a month of their marriage.
Ram would work till late night by the time he returned Priya would be asleep and by the time he wakes up she would leave the room even while going to the office he couldn't see her this was the routine followed by them so that they need not face each other same was with Priya she was angry bcoz he would never listen to anything just would shout at her without any fault of her this time she started to completely avoid him, even though she would be awake she would pretend to be asleep and she kept herself busy by going to the coaching classes,NGO and other works, this continued for a week and the next day was Sunday both Ram and Priya would be at home, they didn't want to face each other Ram tired ot be out of the house but was unsuccessful in arranging his meeting where as Priya was successful to go to her home but she didn't tell this to Ram
Ram as usual came late from the office didn't find Priya in the room he was surprised that Priya was not asleep today wondered what could be the reason for it he checked in the washroom she was not there he didn't know what to do whom to ask as it was almost mid night he didn't want to disturb anyone nor can be quiet he took out his mobile to call her to know where she was but then he stopped himself. There in the Sharma house Natasha was out of the country so Priya and Ayesha were sharing the room they were recalling there old golden moments in that room suddenly Priya remembered how she told Niharika that she wants to go to her home for 2 days and she said yes she didn't tell anything to Ram then realized that Ram would be at home by now he would be tensed not finding her in the room though they were not talking to each other still she knew he would be concerned about her then she doubted would it really matter to him then she thought for some time made her mind took her mobile went out of the room and called Rishabh
Priya: Rishabh tume ne khana khaya
Rishabh:haan bhabhi aap ne iss waqt call kiya' kuch kaam tha
Priya: haan tum ek kaam karoge
Rishabh: ji bholiye na bhabhi
Priya:please tum apne bhai ko kehna ki main humare ghar par hoon
Rishabh: par bhabhi aap hi keh sakti hai na' kahi aapka aur bhai ka koi jagda tho nahin hua hai na
Priya: arreh nahin aise koi baat nahin hai maine call ki tha dopahar ko' lekin unka phone busy tha' shayad meeting mein the abhi bhi call try kiya tha lekin' abhi bhi busy hai isiliye tumhe keh rahi hoon aur bansi kaka ko kehna ki unka kahan garam karde warna woh tanda khana hi khalenge
Rishabh:kya baat hai bhabhi aap hai tho wahan par lekin aap ka pura dhyan tho bhai par hi hai' before he could say anything Priya interrupted
Priya:nahin main tho bas'
Rishabh:main bhai ko keh doonga ki aap apne ghar par hai' aur mujhe lagta hai ki mujhe aapko jyada thang nahin karna chahiye' shaadi ke baad pehle baar aap bhai se dur hai tho aap ko waise bhi bhai ki yaad satarahi hogi aur main bhi aapko thang karo tho theek nahin hoga na
Priya:nahin woh' aur jo maine kaha woh karo goodnight
Rishabh:ji bhabhi goodnight he immediately went to bansi kaka and asked him to warm the food for Ram
Ram was surprised that the food was warm and asked bansi kaka about itwho said that Rishabh asked himto do it and he had his dinner came to his room checked his mobile but there no messages or any missed calls he was irritated so he decided to call her
Ram:kahan ho tum but Ayesha picked the call as Priya went out of the room
Ayesha:arreh jiju aap' kya hua di ne aap ko nahin bataya kya
Ram: Ayesha tum' Priya wah ghar par hai kya
Ayesha:haan di tho ghar par' aap ko nahin bataya di ne ya phir aap mere di ko inta miss kar rahe hai kya
Ram: nahin woh main bhool gaya tha theek hai bye in the mean time
Ayesha:ek minute jiju di se baat nahin karenge
Ram: nahin its k main kal baath karlunga bye
Ayesha:bye goodnight Priya entered the room and saw that Ayesha was talking to some one
Priya:tum itni raat ko kis se baath kar rahi thi
Ayesha:jiju se di
Priya: jiju matlab' not able to believe that Ram called her
Ayesha:di aap bhi na aap ke pati aur mere jiju
Priya:kya keh rahe the Mr.Kapoor
Ayesha:di jiju aap ke bare mein hi poonchege na lagtha aap ko miss kar rahe the theek hai di bahut raat ho gayi hai mujhe needh aa rahi hai aap bhi so jayiye good night
Priya:good night and was trying to sleep
Rishabh came to Ram's room:bhai aap ne dinner kiya
Ram:haan tu abhi tak nahin soya aur tune kaha bansi kaka ko khana garam karne ke liye
Rsihabh: haan bhabhi ne kaha tha aur aap ke liye ek message hai
Ram:kya hai
Rishabh:bhabhi ne aap ko batane ke liye kaha ki aaj raat who apne ghar par hi rahenge do din ke liye aaj aap koi meeting mein the kya
Ram:nahin meri koi meeting nahin thi kyun aur mujhe pata hai maine abhi call kiya tha Priya ko
Rishabh:ohh aap bhabhi se ab baat kare bina nahin reh sakte hai kya
Ram:chup kar aur tu kyun poonch raha hai meeting ke bare mein
Rishabh:woh bhabhi keh rahi thi ki unn hone ne aap ko call kiya tha lekin aap ne phone lift nahin kiya tha
Ram:haan yaad aaya main meeting mein tha
Rishabh:abhi bhi aap busy the kya bhabhi ne kaha ki abhi bhi try kiya tha aap ko call karne ki lekin aap ka phone nahin laga
Ram:haan aur kuch kaha
Rishabh:nahin bhai good night
Ram:good night and he was angry that Priya didn't call him but instead called Rishabh he went to his bed to sleep but he couldn't sleep he wondered why it bothered him so much that Priya didn't call him then his eyes got stuck to the sofa where Priya used to sleep he felt there was something missing in the room but couldn't understand why he was feeling so he tried to sleep again by turning to the other side but then again he saw the mirror he remembered how Priya stuffed her ears with the cotton then he didn't know why she was stuffing cotton at that time he wanted to ask but thought it was better not to ask and later he got to know why she stuffed cotton on that day when she showed him the video of his snoring he recalled all the moments where he asked her to delete it she refused to do so, he mentally kicked himself and again tried to sleep but was unable to he thought of taking pills then again recalled how Priya told him it was not good for his health he was irritated that he was remembering Priya seeing each n every thing in the room how come one can remember the person who has entered his life just few days back and now it seemed to him that she was here in this room from a very long time he didn't realize when and how he became attached to Priya, always he used to fight with her or shout at her but today why was he missing her presence in the room, was he falling for her thinking about it he went to sleep.
Priya was unable to sleep she too was remembering Ram n how she was falling for him she had never expected that she would fall for Ram when she meet him first time and for several meetings they usedto fight always but now she was so used to him she was thinking only about him but was it same with Ram also she wondered does he like her this was going on in her mind feeling heavy with the thoughts she went to sleep
Next day both Ram and Priya kept themselves busy but in the evening Priya didn't want to spend the night as she spent the previous night so she decided to go back.Ram came late and was thinking whether to go or not in his room he thought he would sleep in the guest room today so he entered his room and was surprised to find Priya sleeping on the sofa with a book in her hand smiling he went towards her and took book out of her hands and realized how happy he was to find her back in the room he had never thought he would be so happy to see Priya back in his room he went towards his bed and retired to sleep as she was in the room
Next day morning Priya as usual woke up early and got ready and left the room even before Ram woke up she went downstairs and was requested to prepare breakfast by Rishabh so she prepared it while preparing breakfast she also prepared Ram's favrouite breakfast even though they were not talking she.Ram ordered breakfast for him in the room itself Priya asked the person to take the breakfast prepared by her to the room and here Ram knew the breakfast was prepared by Priya the moment he tasted it, he knew it was his mistake for shouting at her but was unable to apologize for it, for a moment he thought Priya prepared the breakfast specially for him and was happy but he dismissed the thought remembering that she was still not speaking to him he had no meetings today so he decided to stay at home today and would say sorry to her.Priya entered the room
Ram:Priya breakfast acha bana tha
Priya:hmm..
Ram:Rishabh keh raha tha kit um 2 din ke liye gayi thi lekin jaldi aa gayi
Priya: haan mere kuch books yahi bhool gayi thi isiliye
Ram:k good
Priya:ji' good matlab
Ram:kuch nahin' taking his phone he calls Vikram and moves out talking to him
Vikram:haan bol Ram
Ram:tujse ek baat poochni thi
Vikram:haan bol na'
Ram:nahin rehene de main khud kuch karunga
Vikram:arreh call kiya poonch na kya poonchna hai
Ram:agar tu Neha par chillatha hai bin uske galthi ke tho' tu use kaise manatha hai
Vikram:main neha par chillatha hoon kya wahi mujh par chillathi hai aur tu ye kyun poonch raha hai
Ram:arreh bata na
Vikram:main use hug kare kiss de ke sorry boltha hoon tho woh maan jathi hi kahin Priya tujhe se naaraz tho nahin hai
Ram:haan' maine uss pe chillaya tha
Vikram:tub hi wahi kar jo maine kiya hai
Ram:chup kar main hi kuch sochtha hoon and he cuts the call
Priya and Ram were in their room enjoying the silence between them a servant entered the room with a bouquet of flowers and said these were for Priya
Priya was surprised:kis ne bheja
Servant:nahin pata handing her the flowers he walked out
Priya walked to the sofa and kept the flowers on the desk beside then remembered : sorry main bhool gayi thi main abhi isse bahar bhej dethi hoon
Ram:nahin its k but Priya walks out of the room with it here Ram curses hiself that he couldn'tell her that it was sent by him in the mean while Priya enters the room
Ram:Priya tumhe kuch kaam hai
Priya:nahin kyun
Ram:kyat um mere saath bahar chalogi
Priya:haan kab chalna hai
Ram:sham ko
Priya:theek hai main ready ho gaungi
In the evening both Ram and Priya are at the beach enjoying the sunset
Ram:Priya mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai and she looks at him
Ram:I m sorry mujhe pata hai galti meri hai par main itni jaldi nahin manta kya karo main aisa hi hoon I ll try not to shout at you can we be friends
Priya:sure we both are friends from today
Ram:ab hum friends hai tho tum mujhe Ram bulaogi
Priya:k thoda mushkil hai par koshish jaroor karungi after spending some more time they both leave to their house and they are in their room
Priya:thank you
Ram:kis liye
Priya:bouquet ke liye
Ram:tumne dekha
Priya:haan aur maine yeh bhi suna ki aap Vikram se kaise tips le rahe the
Ram:main tips nahin
Priya:maine suna
Ram:tho tumhe pata than a phir bhi
Priya:haan aur maine ye bhi notice kiya ki kaise aap subah se mujse sorry kehne ki koshish kar rahe the
Ram:tumne jaan bhuchkar
Priya:main dekh na chahthi thi ki Ram Kapoor kaise kissi ko manatha hai
Ram:tumhe abhi batata hoon rukho tum he goes behind her and she is trapped between the wall and Ram
Ram:tum kuch keh rahi thi
Priya:kuch nahin mujhe jaane dijiye
Ram:kyun kya hua
Priya saw Ram was so close to her she thought to touch him but she could she didn't know what Ram felt for her she closed her hands into fist and was controlling her
Ram was also looking at her it was first time they were so
close he wanted to touch her but he didn't know what Priya felt for him he
moved away from her trying to control himself both went to their places and slept with thoughts about others what they were thinking
Next part:Ram talks to Priya about his feelings
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