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Part 2
 

 

The party was in full swing when there was a murmur and a tall, dark, handsome, well dressed man strolled in through the door with an attitude as if he owned the world. Every one rushed to meet and greet him wanting to congratulate him on the achievement of "The Most Innovative Entrepreneur" Award awarded by the international construction industries from all over the world. People clamored to reach him. There was such a frenzy that people watching from far could not understand what was happening in the center. But the man, whom people wanted to see, was searching for that one person closest to his heart. 

His eyes roamed across the hall searching. Finding that person, he immediately went across and bent down touching her feet. And that person, to whom he bowed, was none other than Savitri Devi. 

"Dadima", Maan said.

"Maan, how are you beta"?

"I am fine. Thanks, Dadima."

"How was your trip?"

"OK"

"How was your journey?"

"It was long and tiring."

 Maan Singh Khurana was a man of few words. He never ever willingly talked with anyone on his own, but always replied pleasantly when asked. After replying to a few more questions by Dadima he glanced across the hall for the most boisterous crowd in the hall from where the most chatter and laughter could be heard. As he sauntered across the hall he could hear the teasing going across the group, the group which consisted of Adi, Pinky, Geet, Dev, Naintara, Meera, Vicky Pari and Sameera, Sasha and Tasha.

"So tell me Geet, who was that man with you?" Vicky teased Geet.

"About whom are you talking, Vicky?" Geet asked

"Tell us Geet, was he your new boyfriend?" Meera sided with Vicky in teasing her.

"Meera, tu bhi na, kis ki baaton mein aagayi?"

"But Geet woh to tera deewana hai." Vicky could not help, but pull her leg.

"Hai re Babaji! (Looking up) in logon ko kab akal aayegi. Are yaar, woh toh mera boss hai na."

"Boss hai toh kya hua, hai toh insaan aur tera deewana." everyone started laughing and teasing Geet more hearing Pinky's words.  

And Geet could do nothing except blush. Luckily for Geet, the person about whom everyone was teasing her about was busy with someone else.

part 3



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