Fan Fictions

   

ff Love,Lies and Deceit-LLD A Maneet Story (Page 3)

Post Reply New Post

Page 3 of 152

crystal-rose

Goldie

crystal-rose

Joined: 15 August 2011

Posts: 1290

Posted: 15 September 2011 at 6:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by neeraj.kataria1

G8 intro add me
 
thanks

Dear Guest, Being an unregistered member you are missing out on participating in the lively discussions happening on the topic "ff Love,Lies and Deceit-LLD A Maneet Story (Page 3)" in Fan Fictions forum. In addition you lose out on the fun interactions with fellow members and other member exclusive features that India-Forums has to offer. Join India's most popular discussion portal on Indian Entertainment. It's FREE and registration is effortless so JOIN NOW!

lil.mizz.smexii

IF-Rockerz

lil.mizz.smexii

Joined: 22 July 2011

Posts: 9350

Posted: 15 September 2011 at 7:47pm | IP Logged
Awesomeee start
cont soon
thanks for the pm!

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

crystal-rose

shah10

IF-Sizzlerz

shah10

Joined: 03 May 2010

Posts: 19508

Posted: 15 September 2011 at 7:58pm | IP Logged
wow..superb update.
love it

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

crystal-rose

crystal-rose

Goldie

crystal-rose

Joined: 15 August 2011

Posts: 1290

Posted: 16 September 2011 at 3:56am | IP Logged
Originally posted by lil.mizz.smexii

Awesomeee start
cont soon
thanks for the pm!
 
thank u for encoraging me

crystal-rose

Goldie

crystal-rose

Joined: 15 August 2011

Posts: 1290

Posted: 16 September 2011 at 3:56am | IP Logged
Originally posted by shah10

wow..superb update.
love it
 
Thank you

crystal-rose

Goldie

crystal-rose

Joined: 15 August 2011

Posts: 1290

Posted: 16 September 2011 at 9:20am | IP Logged
 
 
Part 2
 

 

The party was in full swing when there was a murmur and a tall, dark, handsome, well dressed man strolled in through the door with an attitude as if he owned the world. Every one rushed to meet and greet him wanting to congratulate him on the achievement of "The Most Innovative Entrepreneur" Award awarded by the international construction industries from all over the world. People clamored to reach him. There was such a frenzy that people watching from far could not understand what was happening in the center. But the man, whom people wanted to see, was searching for that one person closest to his heart. 

His eyes roamed across the hall searching. Finding that person, he immediately went across and bent down touching her feet. And that person, to whom he bowed, was none other than Savitri Devi. 

"Dadima", Maan said.

"Maan, how are you beta"?

"I am fine. Thanks, Dadima."

"How was your trip?"

"OK"

"How was your journey?"

"It was long and tiring."

 Maan Singh Khurana was a man of few words. He never ever willingly talked with anyone on his own, but always replied pleasantly when asked. After replying to a few more questions by Dadima he glanced across the hall for the most boisterous crowd in the hall from where the most chatter and laughter could be heard. As he sauntered across the hall he could hear the teasing going across the group, the group which consisted of Adi, Pinky, Geet, Dev, Naintara, Meera, Vicky Pari and Sameera, Sasha and Tasha.

"So tell me Geet, who was that man with you?" Vicky teased Geet.

"About whom are you talking, Vicky?" Geet asked

"Tell us Geet, was he your new boyfriend?" Meera sided with Vicky in teasing her.

"Meera, tu bhi na, kis ki baaton mein aagayi?"

"But Geet woh to tera deewana hai." Vicky could not help, but pull her leg.

"Hai re Babaji! (Looking up) in logon ko kab akal aayegi. Are yaar, woh toh mera boss hai na."

"Boss hai toh kya hua, hai toh insaan aur tera deewana." everyone started laughing and teasing Geet more hearing Pinky's words.  

And Geet could do nothing except blush. Luckily for Geet, the person about whom everyone was teasing her about was busy with someone else.

part 3



Edited by crystal-rose - 27 October 2011 at 4:09am

The following 80 member(s) liked the above post:

thahukrishna.sriya89akku68maaneet05honeyboney1Candy_jsneetugarg123annbellsweetmelonfatiya52110preetianand2101leothelionasmi123ariz2000ammyicycoolPaingel-divya-bhakbhartifan-Elfin-Moon002ElizaKawaDazlingdivyamamatha.fullyfaltudiyachillsheetalvasanaamteegsakadafiixiaaflowing_rivershruthiruchsstar_777LadyArwenmystique_girlkhushboo22teju2292dh_ritiprema_ksshristi1myedward12Mina420Anvi2009iqbals4everAmbibambyninavicyum321kabslocksNeejuShimmerrNANDY_BRUritzy09-Veritaserum-ammu5Mishti13Awari_Maanmaaneetsangelmrk-1sanu3108rupzloveuLuvScoobyanjucoolMehek25esha143_Jyothi_lil.mizz.smexiiaamirkhanfanshah10anshra*Dakoo_Minzy*Shalve--Ratna--punam2712_BlackPearl_honeygrape6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6---nishu---tabby999IsleOfCapriNeelambari..

maaneetsangel

IF-Rockerz

maaneetsangel

Joined: 09 March 2011

Posts: 8780

Posted: 16 September 2011 at 9:37am | IP Logged
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

crystal-rose

aamirkhanfan

IF-Sizzlerz

aamirkhanfan

Joined: 17 October 2009

Posts: 11106

Posted: 16 September 2011 at 10:23am | IP Logged
nice part...

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

crystal-rose

Post Reply New Post

Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Topic Starter Replies Views Last Post
love love love(ar,rm,aa)part 5 pg 21updt

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 26 27

mithilalovesksg 211 73350 07 December 2013 at 10:24am
By ksgandjsg21
Arranged ya Love {AIMEE's love story in AR's way}

2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10

arshluver_15 79 21700 26 February 2012 at 5:27am
By nikky_angel
~Deceit and revenge~pt-4pg-25(31/8)Hpy bday nij :)

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 28 29

krati.mehra 226 17103 10 December 2009 at 2:19am
By sushi1987
FF: Hate Or Love 2: P49: True Love: Pg 4

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 11 12

-Jwalamukhi- 93 35386 07 September 2009 at 7:06am
By aati1429
FFTo love or not to love.pt20 pg 22 31/10

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 23 24

KC294 184 29738 04 November 2008 at 6:06am
By sweet cherry

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category

Active Forums

Fan Fictions Topic Index

Limit search to this Forum only.

 

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.