Originally posted by rightchoice
They need to tighten the script and screen play. They need to cut all the scene obvious in Indian soaps. They need to eliminate the popular jargon and buzz words of Hindi serials from the script in order to give fresh and original look. As of now, I feels same old recycled dialog and acting. The element of impact or drama is missing.
If they cut off obvious scenes, then pace of the story will pick up...No hindi serial has started with so much of negative or sad story line. I really doubt if it attracts the viewers of 9:00 PM slot. Its a mediocre show for the time slot allotted to it.
If you ask me, the story they have covered so far should have been done within first 3 or 4 episodes at max. In fact intro episode was very impressive...
I totally agree! I could see this coming from the first episode but most people on here were bashing me for saying it! The structure really needs work for people to want to watch it! To be honest after last nights performances especially the MIL i was thinking that the script really needs work as well! The intro was really impressive and we were all keen to get into something after the loss of Gulaal, but many found themselves bitterly disappointed that this was all we got! THe CGI on the explosion was really cheep as well! It looked like the layering was all wrong!
I do hope that something picks up in the show and it gains some momentum but as I said when it first started the signs are not good! Look at little further under all the pomp and promos and what we find is a very weak drama! I have seen productions with tiny budgets that are amazing so they can't blame it on the money either!