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One shot: Her wonderful back

LuvKyuMin Senior Member
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Posted: 11 September 2011 at 7:24pm | IP Logged
ok so this is my first attempted at doing a one shot so please bear with me guys.

Runjhun just showered and is drying her hair. After she's done she brushes her hair to the side of her shoulder and her dori of her blouse string is open. At that time guddu comes in sees runjhun's beautiful back. Guddu tries to pretend that he doesn't see her.

R: aap? (you?) aap kab aaya (when did you come?)
G: huh? What? Oh um i'm just looking at the walls
Runjhun has a confused look on her face and goes back to brushing her hair. Guddu then sees a fly land on her open back.

G: saala how dare this fly sit on my wife's back? I'll teach him a lesson.
Guddu goes and smacks runjhun's back. Runjhun jolts and turns Around.
R;ouch! What was that for?!
G: a fly was sitting on your back
R: that doesn't mean for you to hit my back so hardly
G: sorry I got jealous
R: jealous of a fly?
G: well um yeah
Runjhun laughs and turns back around is setting her hair again. She then tries to tie her blouse string but struggles with it.
G: can I help?
R: um ok
Before guddu ties runjhun's blouse string he goes down to kiss where he hit her. Runjhun closes her eyes and blushes. Then Guddu smiles mischievously and decides to tease his wife a little. Guddu keeps kissing everywhere on runjhun's back. As guddu's lips went lower and lower he felt the hooks of her blouse. Guddu groans and quickly unhooks it. Guddu goes up and starts kissing runjhun's bare shoulder pulling her blouse down. Guddu then gently bites her shoulder which drove runjhun crazy. She was loosing her senses, she wanted to touch her husband so badly but he was touching her more which excited her insides. Guddu turns runjhun around and starts kissing runjhun's lips and runjhun kissed him back with full passion running her hand through her husband's silky and soft hair.

Their passion grew stronger, their love for each other grew stronger and then they were in their own la la land.

Hope you enjoyed! So please comment or criticize my creation. Smile

Edited by wasnadivay9 - 11 September 2011 at 7:45pm

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Posted: 11 September 2011 at 7:36pm | IP Logged
It would be awesome if us viewers get to see this one day on screen!

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Posted: 11 September 2011 at 9:28pm | IP Logged
great OS.  well written and romantic.

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Posted: 11 September 2011 at 10:30pm | IP Logged
great os...sweet and romantic
great work wasna

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Posted: 12 September 2011 at 4:03am | IP Logged
amazing os ...do rite more

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Posted: 12 September 2011 at 5:30am | IP Logged
very nice write up. LOL at la-la land

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Posted: 12 September 2011 at 8:21am | IP Logged
Awesome romantic OS Wasna ClapClap do write more

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Posted: 12 September 2011 at 9:09am | IP Logged
[QUOTE=NaiiNa1]It would be awesome if us viewers get to see this one day on screen![/QUOTE


Oh I agree, if we could see this, that would be wonderfulWink.  Great imagination!

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