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Posted: 12 years ago
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                                    PART - VI

 

Geet comes out of office and saw Pari waiting for her little tensed''..''.. Geet thinks that why not make Pari little more tensed'''. Geet comes near Pari and says Hi Pari''.. Pari says forget Hi first tell me what happened???? Geet says forget Pari I think I am not worth for that job'. They want someone experienced and I am not the one'.. Pari says how dare they do to you first of all that khadoos boss of this company what does he thinks of himself'''who itne bade company ka malik hai to kya kuch bhi bolega kya mai abhi jake uski khabar leti hu'' Geet thinks Pari is getting more serious so she says Pari forget it yaar anyways tomorrow also you are coming to drop me right'' Pari gets back to normal and says what??? Oh so you were teasing me you wanted to see how much I get angry wait now I will show you'.. and she starts hitting her and then both hug each other''.. Pari says you know very well tu to meri jaan hai and I cant see you upset phir bhi yeh natak ja I wont talk to you''.. Geet says ok sorry yaar now I wont do this promise'.. acha chal lets go home everyone must be waiting for us'''

 

 

Anvesha College

 

Anvesha and Arjun both were sitting and discussing about the syllabus for their exams''.. Arjun tells Anvesha lets go and have some coffee as I want to talk with you something'' Anvesha says ok ''.. They where about to leave to canteen for coffee and Anvesha receives a call from home''.. Anvesha answers saying yes Mom'' Saviti Devi says where are you??? Anvesha your college timings are over long back and you have not reached home'' Anvesha stammers and says Mom actually had some work in college just leaving now to come home''.. Savitri Devi says come fast before your bro is at home and hangs the phone'''.

 

Anvesha thinks what to tell Arjun but looking at the expression of Anvesha Arjun says Anvesha you go home we will have coffee some other day''' Anvesha says sorry Arjun have to go but definitely we will go next time''.. Anvesha says Bye and goes off'''.

 

 

Geet Home

 

Pari drops Geet home and says will meet you later and don't trouble anyone one at home like you did to me'' Geet says no how can I do that but yes to you I have full right'''..

 

Everyone is waiting for Geet at home'' Chachu says why are you all so tensed apni putar bohot intelligent hai use job zaroor mil jayegi dekhna'.. and Geet enters the room and every one starts asking her, Geet says if you all will go on like this, how can i tell you about my first day in office.'' Papaji says now be quite chalo Geet putar tell us what happened''.. Geet thinks if I tell them that what actually has happen and the boss is totally khadoos Papaji wont allow me to go''.. Mummy comes and says Geet we are asking you something what are you thinking Everything went on well or not, the people working there are good na''' Geet comes to senses and says ya mummy everything went on well and is it possible that I go and my work is not done''.. I got the job and I have to join the office from tomorrow'''.. Everyone gets happy and hug her'''

Mummy starts explaining to Geet to be careful of everyone you have never been to outside world so take care''' Geet interrupts and says Mummy mai koi jang ladne nahi ja rahi hu and I was staying in hostel during my studies''' Chachi comes and says Geet your mummy is used to  taking tension'''And you know very well everyone are so possessive about you & thats the reason y she is telling you to be careful''.''.. now tell me were you hiding something about the interview''' Geet says no chachi seriously everything went off very well''''. Chachi says ok you take rest you must be tired I will call you for dinner in some time''.. Geet self thought  am so happy that I will leave my own life I will get accustomed to the life outside this house'''. Ya only problem is that khadoos who doesn't even have a smile on his face pata nahi kya khata hai jo humesha gusse me hi rehta hai'' ya but Adi Sir and Pinky were so nice to me they helped me a lot'''.

 

 

Maan Home

 

Savitridevi, Anvesha and Vicky were talking to each other'' Vicky was telling them about the shopping done by him and Meera''''. Savitri devi was asking Anvesha, Ani why you took so long to return from college''  Ani says Mom that I was with one of my friend discussing about the syllabus for exams'''the exams are nearing that's the reason we were discussing'''.. While they were talking Maan enters and says Oh Ani when are your exams starting''.. Everyone looks at Maan''''. Ani says Bhai next month''' Maan says so very little time is left how are your studies going on'''. Ani says Bhai its going on'''. Maan tells Ani like always I want you to be a topper this time also''' I have been noticing that now a days you don't concentrate much on studies'.. and I just heard mom saying that you come home also late from college''. Ani says no Bhai I will not let you down I will try my level best'' Vicky changed the topic and said Bro how was the presentation and everything went''' Maan says it went off very well''. So are you coming tomorrow to office'''.. Vicky says yes Bro I will be in office tomorrow and before coming to office I will also go and check the progress of our on going project and give you the report in the office''.. Maan says ok Vicky'''. Savitridevi says Chalo everyone get fresh and come to dinner table fast'' Ani and Vicky leaves and Maan was just about to leave and Savitri Devi says Maan''' Maan turns and says yes mom''' Savitri Devi says tell me finally have you appointed Geet or not''' Maan looks at her and says yes Mom I have appointed her she seems intelligent''''.. Mom looks at Maan with a smile and says oh so you have started praising her waise Maan who buri nahi hai, waise dikhne mai bhi achi hai app kahe to and she stops'''. Maan says mom no way she is not at all my type and he speaks to himself pata nahi khud ko samajti kya hai usse to koso dur hi rehna acha hai''.. and he leaves'''. Savitri Devi smiles to herself '''''..



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Edited by ana1411 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
good friendship between pari nd geet.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@Ana....

!!! Lovely update !!!



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Posted: 12 years ago
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πŸ˜› SuPeRb UpDaTe πŸ˜›

PlSsS CoNtInUe SoOn πŸ€—
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thANKS FOR UPDATE AND IT WAS REALLY GOOD AND MAANS MOM WAS REALLY SO CHWEEET
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey Ana thanx for pm...

Ana...shall I suggest u one thing...when u are writing dialogues
...write everyone's dialogues in seperate lines like---

Maan--...

Savitri Devi--...

Anvesha--...

like this it will be very easy to read and readers will know where one dialogue ends and where second person dialogue starts...and in between u can explain their thinking process in paragraph...this is my suggestion only...sorry if I have annoyed u..


Coming to update...it was beautiful...after getting Job Geet is in good mood...Savitri Devi is planning fast to get Maan hooked to Geet...let us see how much time Maan-Geet will take.
Edited by tushti-kiran - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
#37
awesooome...
fab...
loved the upd.
thanx for the pm..
take care..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
awesome update!!!
Luv
TC
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Posted: 12 years ago
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           Very Nice Ana , πŸ‘ πŸ‘

       Please carry on . πŸ˜›

Edited by manesha76 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
me likeyy
cont soon
thanks for the pm