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Posted: 11 September 2011 at 7:46am | IP Logged

Hiii!!!! Friends, m new to dis forum, n its my 1st story, n m a big fan of daya sir, I dedicate dis story 2 ol f u n specially 2 daya sir' I hope u ol wud like it'.

If there r any mistakes in dis, plz inform me I will correct it'

 Here story center is our lovely daya sir' Sr. In. DAYA

 

                                     "MAHANGI DOSTI"

  SCENE-1

 (night scene at daya's house)

 Duo were taking dinner, it was a late night'

 Abhi: yr kafi tym ho gya ek sath dinner kiye hue, par aj vo din bhi aa hi gya..

(both laughs J)

 Daya: han yr sai kha, par next tym tumhare ghr hoga dinner, mujhse nai banta khana vana, nxt tym tum bnana.

Abhi: to permanent khana bnane wali le aao..

Boss tumhe pta h muje servants k hath ka khana acha nai lgta   (says innocently)

Abhi(making faces): yr tum CID officer ho kr ajib batein kaise kr sakte ho.

 Ajib nai pagalon wali(abhi thinks n whispers)'

 Daya: yr ab kya ajib batein ki, aur tum kya bad bara(murmer) rahe ho man me'

Abhi: nahi kuch nai, tumhari tareef'

            Aur bhai sahib me servant ki nai apni bhabhi  ji  ki bat kr rha hu..

Daya: kaun bhabhi ji(again innocently)..

Abhi: yr tumhari tabiyat to theek h..

Apni wife ko to bhabhi ji kahunga nai, of course tumhari wife hi meri bhabhi ji hongi'

(shyness on daya's face)

 Daya: tum sudharne wale nai ho.. pehle tum to karo shadi, meri shadi k peeche pade ho'

Abhi: yr kam se kam maine ladki to dhundh rakhi h, tum to.. ek gal frnd tak nai h..

Daya: ehemm ehemm..

(abhi smiles n blushes)

 Daya: oh ho to sahab ko sharmana bhi ata h' rahi bat meri,  yr koi milti hi nai.. kuch meri kismat itni achi h..

Abhi: yr ek kam krte h kal kahin bahar chale h fir vahan tum smile krte rhna, dekhna kitni ladkiya ready hongi..

Daya: bada experience h, tumhe.

Abhi: han meri smile tumse achi h to, experience jyada ho gya'

Daya(holding cell in his hand): acha tareeka ko bta dun, tumhare nay experience k bare me..

Abhi: a..a..are yr kya kr rahe ho, marwaoge kya, jutte padenge..

 Den both laughs a lot(u culd imagine guys)

Abhi: acha yr chalta hun, late ho gya..  (forgot 2 take his cell)

Daya: qun tareeka wait kr rai h ya koi aur'

Abhi: yr nai tumhare liye ladki jo dekhni h' isliyeee'.

(both laughs)

 Daya takes abhi to da gate n says gud bye' swt drmz of tari'

Abhi stares him lyk he is going to eat him, So daya didn't completed da sentence(rather says abhi didn't allowed him')

 

Daya closes the door'

Daya directly goes to his bed room..  so he had also not seen abhi's cell lying on the table..

 

After 15 minutes,

Door bell rings, it was almost mid night'

Daya thinks is tym kaun aa skta h, pehle to aisa kabhi nahi hua, lagta h abhi hoga' uska man nahi laga hoga mere bina'. J

The door bell was continuosly pressed without a wait coz sum1 was clicking it again n again'

So daya suspects n thinks abhi aisa qun kr rha h, lgta h koi aur h'

He opens da door'

But was shocked'n feeled uncomfortable..

 A gal hugged him tightly like she was feared by somethng n holds him wid the objective never to leave him..

Daya: k..ka'kaun ho tum, aur yaha kya kr rahi ho'???

Gal: mujhe bachao unse, muje mar dalenge'(feary tone)

Daa: kaun mar dalenege btao to'

Gal (she was continuosly speaking) : mujhe bachao plz..

Daya (Stopped questioning) : acha aao andar aao..

 Before he completes his sentence.. the gal pushes daya wid her inside the house'

Daya: acha pani piyo(furiously)

(gal didn't let him go away, she just gripped his hand)

 

She took sum water'

Daya: acha ab tum daro mat aur btao mujhe kya hua, kaun tmhare piche pada h????

Gal: me apne office se aa rai thi.. to'to 3 4 log mere piche pad gye.. vo pehle bhi 2 3 bar mere piche pade the'..

Daya: lekin vo tumhare piche qun pade h.. koi khass baat?

Gal: han vo mujse mere bhai k bare me puch rai h..

Daya:tumhare bhai ki kuch dushmani hai un logo se..

Gal: par mera bhai to out of india h, kuch kam k silsiley me'

Daya: to tumne apne bhai ko nahi btaya un logo k bare me, unse pucha nahi tumne..??

Gal: sir maine fone kiya tha lekin, unka kuch pta nai chal rha, un k doston se bhi pucha..

Firr unki diary me mujhe unke doston k names me se apka naam mila, vahi se address mila muje'

Daya: tumhare bhai k pass mera naam aur address.. tumhare bhai ka kya nam h??

Gal: Vicky.. usne muje pehle bhi apk bare me btaya tha, ki ap CID officer h, fir maine socha ki ap meri kuch madad kr sakte ho. Isliye me yaha ayi..

Daya remembered about Vicky'

Asks gal tumhara bhai RK Publications me kam krta h '

daya: han Vicky bhi vahi kam krta h'(thinks.. par me iski bat aise kaise man lun,,, boss agr koi lafda hua to )

Daya(hesitates to ask) : tumhare pass koi photo vagareh h apne aur vicky ki'

 

Gal: muje pata tha ap mujh par bharosa nai karenge, she learnt dat she had a pic in his cel' and says to daya, muje pta tha ek CID officer kisi par bhi ek bar me bharosa nai krte'.

Daya: nai aisi koi bat nai h, maine to aise hi pucha.

Gal: nai apne sai kiya.. apki to duty hi kuch aisi h'(shows the pic)

Daya was satisfied'

Daya: acha chalo me tumhe tumhare ghr chod k aa jata hu..

Gal: nahi me nai jaongi, muje dar lgta h, me ghr me akeli hu, muje bhot dar lgta h' plz ap meri madad karo sir plzz.. me apse request krti hu'

She cried a lot'

Daya is so emotional as every1 knows, she consoles her n said arre dekho meri baat suno tumhe kuch nai hoga..

Gal: par me yaha se nahi jaungi' ap hi muje bacha skte hain..(again cries)

Daya: acha thk h tum yahan reh skti ho..

(thinks dat its nt right , he thaught he shuld tell it 2 abhi)

Daya: acha me abhi apne baki k officers ko bula leta hu, hum tumhari madad karenge'

Gal: plz ap kisi ko mat btana, agr kisi tareh ye baat un gundo ko pata lag gyi to..

Daya: arre CID officers kisi ko kuch nai btate..

Gal: plz plz ap kisi ko mat btao, muje dar laga rahega'

Daya: after thinking, acha thk h'acha apka nam kya h

Gal: srishti

 

Sumbody knocks at the door'

 

Daya luks at the door..

Gal: shyd vahi log honge..

Daya: tum daro mat me dekhta hu..

Suddenly gal rides and stands behind the wall due to fear, she tried to hide herself..

 

Daya opens the door, he finds abhi at da door'

Abhi: are bhai gun qun le kr aye ho, maroge kya.

Daya: nai muje laga..

Abhi: kya laga.

Daya: kuch nai, (luking inside) kya hua achanak aise

Abhi: yr me apna cell bhul gya..

Daya: dekhta hu..

 

Takes the cel n give it 2 abhi widout calling him inside'

Abhi: yr kuch ajib h, isne muje andar nai bulaya'(shyd bhul gaya hoga)

Daya: ye lo boss'

Abhi: acha chalo me chalta hu..

Daya: kk boss'

 

SCENE-2 

(Duo in car' of course quails, bt dis tym its black..)

 Daya was looking very tensed  L

Abhijeet stares at daya continuosly n thinks whether to ask him or not'

N decides 2 ask'

 Abhi:  kya hua yr, koi pbl h kya???

Daya: n..na..nahi..qun puch rai ho??

Abhi:  yr agr kisi ki shakal(face) pe 12 baje ho, to koi puche bhi na kya hua>>

Daya: kiski shakal pe 12 baje h, hum dono k alawa to koi h nai, is car me..

Abhi: ab natak kam karooo.. nahi to'

Daya: nahi to..

Abhi: mere pass aur bhi taariike h.

Daya: yr kuch ho to btaun na. tum to peeche hi pad gye.

Abhi: mere jaisa dost kahi milega bhi nai peeche padne wala.. hmmm k..ke..keh deta hun.

Daya: han ye to hai, boss.(smiling forcefully)

 U can see guys da topic was changed'

At  beaureu..

 Fredrics:  tujhe pata h vivek agar me CID me na hota to'

(interupting)

Vivek: sir to ap kaha hote..

Fredi: tu puri bat sune bina apni baat bolta h'

Vivek: acha sir boliye'

Fredi: to CID pta nahi kha hoti, sab apne baal nooch rahe hote'

Vivek: sir aisa qun..

Fredi: yr tuje ye bi nai pta, adhe cases to maine hi solve kiye h, me jab bhi kuch btata hu to hamesha sahi hota h'jisse case ek dum solve ho jata h..(proudly)

Vivek: acha sir, muje ap se bhot kuch sikne ko milega.

(fredi proudly puffs his chest..)

Vivek:sir me ek kam krta hun baki sab officers se puchta hu, unko to pta hi hoga'akhir 13 saal ho gye ek sath kam krte krte..

 

At da same tym duo enters'

 

Abhi: kya hua vivek tum ye achanak pichle 13 salon ki baat kyo kr rahe ho'

Vivek: haan sir me keh rha tha..

Fredi puts break: sir kuch nai'ye to aise hi'

Vivek: naii sir me puch rha tha ki kya aadhe cases freddi sir ki help se solve hote h.

Abhi: ye tumse kisne kha

Daya was thinking sumthng'

 

Vivek: sir freddi sir ne kha abhi abhi..

Abhi: han to galat kya kha, sahi to h, hum aj jo h freddi ki vajah se h..

Freddi:dekha.. maine kha tha na'

All smiles at freddy's childish behavior'

 

A man calls acp:  sir me chandu bol rha hu, sir vo christley k bare me pta chal gya' meenal bar k pass wale chawl me milega, chawl no 11' kuch dino se bahar tha kal hi lauta h'

Acp: acha thk h chandu.. achha kam kiya acha inaam banta h

Chandu: thanku sir'

 Acp 2 officers: acha christley ka pta chal gya!!!

Abhi: sir vahi na jo jail se farar h, bhot jana mana terrorist h.

(daya was disturbed by sumthng)

Acp:daya tum vaha jao aur pta karo, abhi tum bhi jao'

Abhi: yes sir!!!

            Daya chalo'

Daya: kahan??

Acp luks at daya

Abhi: yr aur kha christley k ghr'

Daya: han han chalo.

 

(in the car)

Abhi: daya kya ho gya tumhe??

Daya: kuch nai yr..

Abhi: chalo thk h nai btana to

(me kya btaun isse srishti ne muje mana kiya h)

Daya: kuch nai yr' bs aise hi thoda sir me sard h (it was an excuse to divert da mind)

Abhi: dawai li??

Daya: le li yr' thk ho jayega, tension mat lo'

Abhi(little bit confused): acha thk h yr, tum khte ho to..

                                                                                        SCENE-3

At the chawl dey ask abt christley

One man told- haan sahib yahi rehta h..

In the house- no 1 was there'

They searched the home...!!!!

They found a dead body of a man..

Oh god!!!

Par ye christley kahan gya..

Abhi: lagta h hmare ana ki khabar pta lag gyi hogi use, isliye bhaag gya.., par pata kha se lagi'

 Daya Checked the body'

Daya: isk pass to koi identity bhi nai h.

Abhi: apne records me dekh lenge'

Abhi calls 4 ambulance'

Daya found sumthng'

Daya: ye dekho boss ye christley rinku bar ka lifetym member h to vahan har roz ata jata hoga'

Abhi: chalo chaltey h rinku bar ..

Daya: chalo firrr'

 

(his cell ranged, he picks it n goes 2 corner)

It was a call 4m srishti'

Daya: han bolo kya hua'

Srishti: muje bhot darr lag rha h,plz tum aa jao, plz help me shyd vo aas pass h'

Daya:acha suno me thodi der me ata hu, tum khidki darwaze band kr lo..

(after thinking)

Daya: yr tum kisi aur ko le kar jao me thodi der me ata hu'

Abhi: qun kya hua?

Daya: arre kuch nai yr ..

Abhi: acha thk h

              SCENE-4

At rinku bar!!!

 Abhi to manager showing the photo: isse kahin dekha h, ye apk yahan lifetym member h shyad'

Manager: 1 minute sir, let me check'.

Yes sir ye hamare yahan kafi tym se member h'

Abhi: gud, isne koi pata to likhwaya hoga'

Manager: han sir, wait a minute(checks 4m computer')

            Yes sir' iska address h'

            Road no 2, city hospital k pass, malad'

Abhi: Nikhil pata karo ki address sahi h ya nahi'

Nikhil: acha sir me dekhta hu'

 

 (daya at home)

Gal opens the door..

Gal: acha hua ap aa gye..

While going inside gal's leg slipped and daya holds and saves her'

They have a sudden eye contact'

Daya: tum thk to ho..

Gal: han, me thk hu, thank u.

Daya: koi aya to nahi yahan par'

Daya: acha tumne jo muje btaya tha un logo k bare me, maine pata krvaya un logo ka par kuch pta nai chala..

Gal: shyd vo log chup gye honge..

 It was around 8:00 at night'

Suddenly abhi calls him and asks kam ho gya tumhara' aur hum logo ko rinku bar se christley ka address mila h. Nikhil gaya h pta krne' usk bad me direct ghr jaunga to kal milte h yr'

Daya: acha thk h boss!!!

 Gal: acha me tuhara khana laga deti hu..

Daya: tum aaram karo me kha lunga, tumne kha liya..

Gal: nahi..mera man nai h.. aur aj to khana me hi lagaungi, ap vaise bhi thak gye honge..

Daya: acha ek shart par tumhe bhi thoda to khana hoga..

Gal: ok boss..

Daya smiles after he listens boss 4m the gal'

Gal: tumse hi sikha h naya word, acha h'

 

At the dinning table..while taking dinner

Daya: tum aur kuch bta skti ho, unk bare me..

Gal: muje jitna pta tha maine ap ko bta diya..,vasie ek bat boloun apki smile bhot cute h..

(daya blushes)

Daya gets a call.

Daya on phone: acha me ata hu, tu vahin ruk..(call cuts)

acha ab tum aram karo' me chalta hu..

Gal: un gundo k bare me pata krne..

Daya: han, aur tum darwaza ache se band kr lena'muje shyad tym lag jaye

Gal: nahi me akeli nahi rahungi, me bhi chalti hu apk sath

Daya: acha me jaldi hi aa jaunga, tumhara bahar jana khtre se khali nahi h. tum aram karo

Gal: acha par jaldi aana'

Daya: okkk..

Gal compltes the sentence boss'

(both smiles)

Daya at some road to man: kya khabar laya h'

Man: sir jin logo k bare me apne btaya tha unka to kuch pta nai chala.

Daya: kya paise nai milte kya tuje..

Man: sahab kya baat kr rahe ho, apse gaddari karunga to..

Daya:" acha acha thk h, natak mat kr, dahyan rakh kuch pta chale to btaiyo..ye rakh..(giving 500 rs note)

'

Daya rushes home'

The girl was waiting 4 him'

Daya: tum soyi nahi ab tak

Gal: nahin mujhe dar lag rha tha.. socha tumhare ane ka intzar kr lu'

Daya: chalo ab me aa gya, aram kr lo..

Gal: ok boss' par ye boss word tum par jyada suit krta h'

 

Next morning'

Daya goes to ask from the informers.. bt he didn'd get any of the information'

  SCENE-5

 At beaureau'ol were present accept daya..

Daya comes..

Abhi: kha reh gye the yr!!!

Daya: yr bs kuch kam me fas gya tha..

Abhi: aj kal bacchha bhot mehnat kr rha h..acha to uss christley k address ka pata krne gye the, jo rinku bar se mila tha'

Daya: nahi'.uska pata to Nikhil karega yr'

Abhi didn't questioned again.. but he feels daya is hiding sumthng'

Abhi: isse to ab bat krni hi hogi, bhot pareshan lag rha h..

 Nikhil comes: sir vo addresss galat h, vaisa to koi address h hi nai..

Abhi: acha to ek kam krte h, iska christley ka phone no nikal wate h, aur fir uska fone tap kar k isse pakadte h'

 

Acp gets a call: han chandu bol, aur kya nyi khabar mili.

Chandu: han sir' is christley k sath ek ladki bhi mili hui h, suna h nyi nyi ayi h,iss line me'

Acp: acha kuch pata h us ladki k bare me'

Chandu: nahi sahib, ab tak nyi..

Acp: acha muje btate rhna,'

Cuts the call.. n tell every1 wat chandu said..

 

Kajal: sir us bar k manager se number pata chal gya..

Acp: gud work, Vivek no lo aur pta karo isss no ka, kha h ye no..

Aur sachin tum iss no ki sari details pata krwayo, kab call aya kab call kiya gya, sab pta krwao..

Iss bar ye hamere hath se nikalna nai chaiye..

 

Aur daya, abhi tum iss ladki k bare me pata karo, sab khabriyo ko laga do isk piche, hm bhi to dekhe, kaun h ye ladki, jo CID se panga le rai h..

 

Duo in the car..

Daya has a smile on his face..and thinking abt the gal..

Abhi: yr kya ho gya h akele akele hans rahe ho, humein bhi bata do'

Daya: kuch nai yr..

Abhi: tum mujse to kuch chupa nai skte, acha thk h koi baat nai'

Daya: yr plz naraz mat ho'

Abhi: didn't replied..

Daya: acha yr btata hu'kuch khass baat nai h..

           Abhi was keen 2 knw the thing, daya tells ol the thing abt the gal, srishti'

Daya: yr ab un gundo ko dhundna jaruri h aur vo pta nai kha chup gye mil hi nai rhe

Abhi: tumne khabriyon se pucha, unse kuch nai chupa hota

Daya: han yr pucha' magar same result

Abhi: arre yr tum to mujse bat hi mat karo, itna kuch hua aur keh rahe ho kuch nai hua, aur muje kuch bataya bhi nai'

Daya: yr srishti ne muje mana kiya tha.. vo bhot dari hui h..

Abhi: oh to madam ka nam srishti h, acha nam h..

Daya: hmmm

Abhi: kya hmmm(smiles)

Daya: kuch nai, kuch nai(seems like he said it by mistake)

 

Abhi: hannn kuch to baat h, kya pyar vyar ho gya kya'

Daya: arre nai nai yr, tum bhi'

Abhi: yr ab tum mujhse nai chupa skte'

Daya: yr bas achi lagti h aur kuch nai'

Abhi: acha to achi lagne tak baat aa gyi, kya to aage bat chalao..intzzar kis baat ka'

Daya: yr isse pehle ye to janu ki..

Abhi: ki vo bhi tumse'han han smjh gya..

Daya blushes again'

 

Daya: yr par pehle unko dhundna padega..un gundo ko..jo srishti k peeche pade h'

Abhi: hmmm'

 

They reached the destination'

They goes to get information abt the gal who is supporting chrisley..

Khabri: aaiye sir'

Abhi: dekh iss baar mamla najuk h, christley ko to janta hoga, use ek ladki support kr rai h, usk bare me pata kr aur bata'

Khabri: thk h sir me jald hi pata krta hu'

Daya gets a call..

 

salunkhe: daya tum dono jald se jald meri lab aa jao'

Daya: thk h Dr. sahab hum aate h..

 

Goes 2 the lab'

 

 

                        SCENE-6

 

Acp was already there with sachin, kajal and Nikhil'

Salunkhe: boss tum logon ko jo christley k ghr body mili thi, uspar muje..

Acp: are salunkhe btao to kya mila iss admi ki body se

Salunkhe: yr bata to rha hu, kya ghode pe sawar ho kr aye ho, puri baat to bolne do'

Acp raises his eyebrows n smiles'

Salunkhe: han to me bata rha tha ki iss admi ki do baar maut hui h, isse goli mari gyi h aur jahar bhi diya gya h'

Sachin: sir iska mtlb isse do alag alag logon ne mara h..

Salunkhe: ho bhi skta h aur nahi bhi..

Kajal: ye bhi ho skta h ki pehle isse kisi ne jahar diya aur ho skta h iss par jahar ka asar na hote dekh goli bhi mar di'

Acp: han ye bhi ho skta h'

Tarika: ek baat aur sir, iss admi k pet(stomach)se humein thodi wine mili h aur check krne par mila ki ye wine koi mamuli wine nai h bhot mahangi h, aur ye har jagah nai milti..

Kajal: naam kya h iss wine ka

Salunkhe: kajal iss wine wine ko red wine bolte h naam h 'Beaujolais''

Acp: 'Beaujolais' yr iska nam to pehli bar suna h'

Freddy: han sir maine bhi pehli bar suna h'

Acp: freddy ye to hairani ki baat h humne pehli bar suna to kuch nai hota par tumne pehli bar'

Freddy: sir muje apk kehne ka mtlb smjh nai aya..

Abhi: kuch nai yr sir ka mtlb h itne bade officer ne bhi pehli bar suna h nam, jo sare cases solve krta h'

Freddy gets embarrases and think abt wat he said to vivek in the morning'

 

Acp(whispers): abhijit ye daya ko kya ho gya' kuch bol qun nai rha

Abhi: sir kuch nai' hona kya tha'

Again raises his eyebrows'

Acp: to hum ek kam krte h, iss wine ko dhundte h, apne ap pata chal jayega ki admi tha kaun'

          

All the team runs 2 find the wine shop..

 

Abhi goes 2 a famous shop with freddy: dekhiye jara 'Beaujolais' nam ki wine apk yahan milti h..

Shopkeeper: han sir ye hamare yahan hi milti h, apko ye kahin aur nahin mlilegi.. to boliye sir kitni dun'

Freddy without thinking'. Han 1 bottle de do'

Abhi: kya freddy pagal ho gye' tumhari wife ko fone lagaun

Freddy: (in confusion) nahi sir'

Abhi: tau' aur jara ap ye bataiye(showing the photo) ap isko jante h.. hm log CID se h..

Shopkeeper: s'sir ye to hamara regular customer h' par ap use qun nahi puchte jo isk sath ata h.. vo bhi hamara regular customer h'

Freddy: nam kya h uska

Shopkeeper: sir shyd unka naam christley h..

Abhi: acha iss admi ka nam, address aur phone do'(showing the photo)

         Freddy jara note down kr lo..

Freddy: jee sir'

 

SCENE-7

 

 

Acp, daya, abhi, sachin n kajal goes 2 the given address'

They found nobody there nd searches the home'

Daya: sir ye diary mili h, isme 2 addresses likhe h.. ek to kisi ghr ka h aur ek kisi mill ka h' sir ho skta h ki yahan mill me hmein christley mil jaye'

Acp: han daya ho skta h..

           To jao iss mill me'

Suddenly daya gets a call,

Mujhe bachao, plz jaldi aao'

(it was a call 4m srishti)

Daya: kaun h, tum darwaze khidki ache se band'

 

Suddenly Calls gets cut..

Daya:hello' hello' (nobody was there, on the call)

           (it looks like daya is going 2 cry')

Acp: kya hua daya??

Abhi: sir bhot lambi kahani h(he understood that call was 4m the gal, who is staying in daya's house from few days)

 

Daya: sir mujhe jana hoga

Abhi: me bhi chalta hu..

 

Acp: tum dono itne pareshan lag rahe ho, acha thk h tum dono jao..

They goes'

Acp says: ye ho kya gya daya ko? Kuch to gadbad haiii, kuch to gadbad hai'

 

Duo takes the car and reaches 2 daya's home in a hurry'

They both were so tensed'

They reached there..

 

Daya clicked the bell.. nobody opened the door'

Daya : todna padega lgta h..

Abhi: to soch kya rahe ho'

 

Daya breaked the door..

 

Nobody was there..

Abhi: yr yahan kya earthquake aya tha, sub kuch bikhra hua h..

Daya: han yr par srishti kaha h

 

Both searches the home'

Nobody was there'

Daya was going 2 cry like he has gone mad'

they tried every possible place' bt they found no1..

abhi: dekho daya tum ghabrao mat srishti mil jayegi'

daya: par ja kha skti h'

 

acp calls abhi: han kahan ho tum dono, aa jao un dono addresses me se 1 galat h aur ek shayd christley ka h.. hum log vahan ja rahe h, tum bhi pahauncho'

abhi: thk h sir hum ate h

daya: kya hua

abhi tells everything..

abhi:yr ab kya Karen kahan jayen'sir ne hum dono ko bulaya h' sir ko keh du hum nahi aa rahe..

daya: nai yr duty pehle ati h chaley h'mill me

 

 

                                                            SCENE 8                                     

     (in the mill s)

All ready with the guns, but daya was little bit embarrsed, wat 2 do wat nt 2 do'.

But duty comes first then emotions..he controlled'

 

they found whole gang of christley in the mill'

They all got inside'

They all heared a sound'

Aao CID walon aao'

Tumne muje akhir dhundh hi liya.. shabash me khush hua'

Par yahan se vapas kaise jaoge'

Firing stared..4m both the sides..

Bt CID was safe nd sound'

 

Daya was shocked he had seen srishti there tied with the ropes.. kidnapped by christley'

Suddenly he saw christley firing on srishti'

Daya runs and pushes the gal and a bullet shooted him on his arm'

Abhi n acp shouts: dayyaaa'!!!!

Abhi shooted christley, they ol thought like christley was dead..

Ol reaches to daya

Both acp n abhi asked daya, thk to ho..

Daya: han sir bs hath par goli lagi h'

            Then christley stands n said hath k jakham bhar jayenge par dil ka kya hoga'

All listens the words said by him carefully' like he is saying sth special

Daya: kya mtlb h tumhara'

Acp breaks him n said: acha to tum jinda ho to bata kr hi marna ki tumhare sath kaun si ladki mili hui h'aur tumne apne ghr admi ko kaise mara'

 

Christley: vo mera hi admi tha, vo mujse gaddari krne ki soch rha tha, fir kya mara gya bechara'aur acp  jisse abhi abhi tumhare honhar officer Sr. Ins. daya ne bachaya h vo hi vo ladki h' bechari gyi kisi aur kam k liye thi, par daya se pyar kar baithi'to muje isse uthana pada

 

            Again he tries to shoot'but abhi killed him with 1 more shot'

 

but daya was in sudden shock, like thunder thrashed him like a bolt'

He fells down'

Acp: kya hua.. daya'

Abhi tells all the thing to acp'

 

Acp: daya jo ho gya use bhul jao...aur tum sab  in logo ko hospital pahonchao.. jo jinda h

Abhi didn't say anything coz he knows daya was broked 4m inside and no benefit 2 say him anything..

All members left and tooked the wounded people of the gang with them'

Acp: daya dard ho rha h'

Daya(tears in eyes): nahi sir me thk hu!!

 

While kajal was taking the girl (srishti) with her'

She says 2 daya: plz mujhe ho sake to maaf kr dena..

Maine tumse jhooth bola ki me Vicky ki behen hu, vo photo bhi jhoothi thi'me sirf vahan CID ki sari jaankari tumse le kar boss ko deti thi' par muje us k beech such me tumse pyar hua

Daya didn't replied bt going to cry, controlling himself, again cry bt he knows he had 2 control'.

Abhi: le jao isse'

Acp to daya: agli bar se jara dekh kr madad aur dosti krna'(little bit anger)

            Chalo abhijeey tum isse hospital le kr jao'

Acp leaves'

Duo alone in the mill'

Abhi: yr tumhe mere ghr dinner pe ana h, me bnaunga khana, tum acha nai bnate'(changing the topic)

Daya: yr me fir dhokha kha gya..(crying like a kid coz he knows abhijeet n he was alone there in  the mill')

Abhi wiping his tears' n their was tears in abhi's eyes also'

Abhi: yr tum CID officer ho kr ro ray ho, log kya kahenge'

Kaun kehta h tum dhokha kha gye me hu na..tumhare liye, me tumhe har roz acha acha    khana khilaunga' aur tum ab chup ho jao vrna kabhi baat nahi karunga

Yr ek baat btao wife kis liye chaiye khana bnane k liye, me khila to rha hu yr'

 

Sum what atmosphere was changed.. with the comedy of abhijit'

But daya was in under pressure

 

 

 

 

Plz if there is any mistake or any part which is wrong in the story, readers tell me, I'll edit it'

And plz do post comments.. so that I got 2 knw abt my writing skill Jand remember it is the 1st tym I had written sum thng'.hehehe' J

 

 

 

 

 



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The Case Of Deadly Betrayal????

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