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The Mumbai Trip - Part II (Final Part) (Page 5)

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Posted: 11 September 2011 at 2:22am | IP Logged
Amazing !!! The way you reason out each emotion is simply marvellous !!!
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Beautiful...
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Posted: 11 September 2011 at 3:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mrk_1

wow part 2 !! i loved it completely ...
thanks
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Posted: 11 September 2011 at 3:30am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mysterygurl1427

why can't there be a 3rd partAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngryAngry lolz..
3rds a charm no?LOL
brilliant brilliant job!!!!CryCryCryCryCry loved it...thanks for writing itTongue
Thanks Shivi. I did not take this story any further because then I would have to write more than just another part for I need to bring in how Maan 'rises' in love with Geet which would tax my brain too much.  Thanks. I hope those are happy tears.   

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Posted: 11 September 2011 at 3:31am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Armu4eva

Bootiphoolll part Opti Day Dreaming
 
especially
 

Geet smiled at him and said, "I know I will not, for I have faith in my love. My love is strong enough to bring you to me and I will wait to become one with you in mind, body and soul." 

Thanks Tanu. Glad you liked it.
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Posted: 11 September 2011 at 3:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by minnie_tweetie

awesome
loved it
superbly written
i guess this can be extended further

Thanks Minnie.  No, I'm not extending this any further.
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Originally posted by harshithaaa

nice update...
thanks harshita.

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