The Mumbai Trip (A Two Part Maaneet Fic )- Part I - Page 6

Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by Jass.KN


great ...very well explained 

plz go for my FF yeh rishta trea yeh rishta mera also 




Thanks Jass. Will read it when I have the time.
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by mandymore


Beautiful os.
Thanks mandy
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by -Parisa-


Beautiful opti..

Very well written...Loved it...and i really hope you continue with this...
i hope Cvs show something like this..."sighhh"
Thanks Parisa. Have added another part to this fic.
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by Armu4eva


Wohhaaa.. opti.. good one πŸ‘πŸΌ

Love the flashback bit n the involuntary action of the heart.. before the head stopped him n made him withdraw..!! Fab fab πŸ‘
Thanks Tanu.  Yeah, the problem arises when the heart and head are not in synch.
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by princess163


awesome
thanks
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by Pixie-Dust


WOW!! This was brilliant!!! Im left speechless...πŸ‘
Thanks Pixie Dust.
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by Lily201


@Opti-- Its a truly lovely OS that delves into the matter of the dynamics in a relationship when one person is estranged from their life & journey together by amnesia πŸ˜ƒ
 
It really touched me how each and every sentiment passing through Maaneet was extrapolated with a proper reasoning as well -- as too how one suddenly grows close and far too😳
 
The situation suited MG perfectly though you mentioned it as adapted--so Kudos for a great workπŸ‘ 
Thanks Lily.  I'm floored by your compliment.  I had to modify part of the original (which was a mammoth fiction about the hero falling for one sister and accidentally marrying another) to suit the partial amnesia track of this show.  Wrote a follow up to this part.  Hope you read that too.
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by -sum-


A beautifully written OS...I would love to see something just like this in the show...GurTi would pull this off effortlessly and make it look passionate and beautiful...would love to read more of your work😳...
Thanks Sum. Yes, Gurti can pull this off effortlessly and scorch our screens with their chemistry. Have added another conclusive part to this one.
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by NANDY_BRU


awesome
thnaks Nandy.
Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by DDbiggestfan


Its awesome 😳 😍
thanks.

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