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The Mumbai Trip (A Two Part Maaneet Fic )- Part I (Page 4)

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Posted: 10 September 2011 at 7:27am | IP Logged
Beautiful os.
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Posted: 10 September 2011 at 7:30am | IP Logged
Beautiful opti..

Very well written...Loved it...and i really hope you continue with this...
i hope Cvs show something like this..."sighhh"
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Posted: 10 September 2011 at 7:35am | IP Logged
Wohhaaa.. opti.. good one Thumbs Up

Love the flashback bit n the involuntary action of the heart.. before the head stopped him n made him withdraw..!! Fab fab Clap
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Posted: 10 September 2011 at 7:42am | IP Logged
awesome
Amerra IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 10 September 2011 at 7:50am | IP Logged
WOW!! This was brilliant!!! Im left speechless...Clap
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Posted: 10 September 2011 at 7:53am | IP Logged
@Opti-- Its a truly lovely OS that delves into the matter of the dynamics in a relationship when one person is estranged from their life & journey together by amnesia Big smile
 
It really touched me how each and every sentiment passing through Maaneet was extrapolated with a proper reasoning as well -- as too how one suddenly grows close and far tooEmbarrassed
 
The situation suited MG perfectly though you mentioned it as adapted--so Kudos for a great workClap 
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Posted: 10 September 2011 at 8:47am | IP Logged
A beautifully written OS...I would love to see something just like this in the show...GurTi would pull this off effortlessly and make it look passionate and beautiful...would love to read more of your workEmbarrassed...
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