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Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee

The Mumbai Trip (A Two Part Maaneet Fic )- Part I (Page 2)

sarkh26 Goldie

Joined: 13 July 2011
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Posted: 10 September 2011 at 5:34am | IP Logged
awesome opti
lovely os
pls continue soon
i also read ur destiny's play and all the other ffs like my scenes of parineeta maaneet scenes
everything was really gud pls update maaneet scenes soon

punjabi.princes IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 10 September 2011 at 5:35am | IP Logged
yes your back to writing!
plz con't this was great
con't soon
Opti IF-Stunnerz

Joined: 14 October 2006
Posts: 29113

Posted: 10 September 2011 at 5:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by


it's amazing yaar 

do u write a ff ? 

Thanks. this is just a one shot. Here is the link to my other fics on Maaneet, most of which have been improvised from my Michi fics.

Edited by Opti - 10 September 2011 at 5:37am
meravigiliso IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 10 September 2011 at 5:39am | IP Logged
opti, long tym but you made your absence with one shot . that was awesome . as jyothi said cv can well incorparate this . you had beautifully potarayed the unttended feelings of maan and geet . loved it .
myramabin Goldie

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Posts: 1696

Posted: 10 September 2011 at 5:44am | IP Logged
simply superb kaash cvs aisa kuch soch pate  . wish u were the writer  current track would hav been mindblowinggg    cvs wont listen to us but u pls give us the next update soonSmile
Opti IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 10 September 2011 at 5:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by maanluvsgeet

hey, opti after a long time u r back wid a OS.
it was superb n awesome as usual
Opti IF-Stunnerz

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Posted: 10 September 2011 at 5:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by jyoti06

Woww what a mindblowing piece of writing Opti ClapClap ...if CVs can show such a passionate scenario between Maaneet in Mumbai trip ,I m sure we will permanently go in swarglok LOLEmbarrassed...The way u wrote it can b easily shown on Indian TV because the scene in the hotel room is written so aesthetically and knowing Gurti ,they both can oozee passion and desire perfectly in such scenes ClapClap..remember that scene between Maaneet when mSK comes out of bathroom and pins Geet against the wall asking her to confess and then the bathroom scene in Amritsar when Geet comes out wearing MSK's kurta Embarrassed...So Maaneet hv successfully done such scenes with full grace and oozing passion ...I guess your scenario is very much possible Thumbs Up...
thanks Jyo. Yes, Gurti will ace the scene if they picturise it.  They'll make it passionate yet chaste. Their scenes are never vulgar. Lets see what they have in store in this track.

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Posted: 10 September 2011 at 5:49am | IP Logged

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