The Mumbai Trip (A Two Part Maaneet Fic )- Part I - Page 3

great ...very well explained 

Beautiful opti..

Very well written...Loved it...and i really hope you continue with this...
i hope Cvs show something like this..."sighhh"

Wohhaaa.. opti.. good one 👍🏼

WOW!! This was brilliant!!! Im left speechless...👏

@Opti-- Its a truly lovely OS that delves into the matter of the dynamics in a relationship when one person is estranged from their life & journey together by amnesia 😃

 

It really touched me how each and every sentiment passing through Maaneet was extrapolated with a proper reasoning as well -- as too how one suddenly grows close and far too😳

 

The situation suited MG perfectly though you mentioned it as adapted--so Kudos for a great work👏 

A beautifully written OS...I would love to see something just like this in the show...GurTi would pull this off effortlessly and make it look passionate and beautiful...would love to read more of your work😳...

awesome os dear this can be easily shown in the show hope that by chance this goes to cv's and we get a similar type of episodes in mumbai

Originally posted by: misty85

It's really nice... chalo OS mein hi sahi meri rain sequence ki khwahish puri ho gayi...☺️ ❤️

If we are lucky we could still get to see another rain sequence in the show to kickstart Maan's memory recovery.

Originally posted by: Kriyanshlover

This is wonderful

thanks.

Originally posted by: sarkh26

awesome opti

lovely os

pls continue soon

i also read ur destiny's play and all the other ffs like my scenes of parineeta maaneet scenes

everything was really gud pls update maaneet scenes soon

Thanks Sarkh. At present this is a one shot.  Let's see if I can think of a suitable improvisation which will fit the current track.