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HEARTBEAT: Part 14 updated [ EXAM FEVER ]

~~ MICK ~~ Goldie
~~ MICK ~~
~~ MICK ~~

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Posted: 09 September 2011 at 3:28pm | IP Logged

Part 1- page 1
Part 2- page 5
Part 3- page 7
Promo- page 11
Part 4- page 14
Promo- page 17
Part 5- page 20
Promo- page 25
Part 6 - page 28-29
Promo- page 36
Part 7- page 40
Promo- page 45
Part 8- page 49
Part 9- page 58
Part 10- page 63


Part 11- page 78
Part 12- page 88


Hi friends, this is Mick. M writing my version of D3. Hope you like it

Part 1:
Situation: Rey is ignoring Kriya and she is not liking it at all. She tries to convince him that she is the Asstn GS and has some kinda role too in making decisions. But Rey is still very much stuck on his plan to ignore her.

Then out of frustration Kriya decides to meet Rey alone to clear up and ask why is he doing all this.

She pulls him at the FIRE EXIT just like Rey ( n Armaan) did before.

Rey: whooo.. Yahan kyu layi ho mujhe??
Kriya: Baat karni hai mujhe tumse.
Rey: But mujhe tumse koi baat nahin karni.
Kriya: Karni padegi.
Rey: kyu?
Kriya: Kyuki mein keh rahi hun issiliye. Assistant hun  aapki. Baat toh karni padegi.
Rey: Acha kaho. But jaldi haan.. itna time nahin hai mere paas.
Kriya: haan haan janti hun.. GS jo ho aap college.
Rey: ab kaho bhi kya kehna hai.
Kriya: Mujhe CHABILAL se baat karni hai..
Rey: Hain?????? (Is very very happy from inside but does not show that to her) Tumhe achanak Chabilal ki yaad kaise
aa gayi itne din baad.
Kriya: bas aa gayi. Mera mann hai. Kabhi bhi yaad kar sakta hai.
Rey: But tum usse baat nahin kar sakti.
Kriya: aisa kyu?
Rey: Kyuki ab wo nahin hai.. marr chuka hai.
Kriya: Rey plz aisa mat kaho. I know tum mujhse gussa ho. (Rey gives her a stern look). Sorry Bahut zyada gussa ho
but iska matlab yeh nahin ki tum mere saath aise behave karoge.
Rey: Mein chahe jo karu, tumhe thodi na farak padta hai meri feelings ke baare mein. Chabilal rahe ya na rahe tumhe
usse kuch farak nahin padna chahiye
Kriya: Mein janti hun ki tum uss slap wale incident ke baad se aise behave kar rahe ho. Na theek se Rose day Party pe dance kiya.
Rey: well tum sab janti hi ho toh cool.. Ab kya fayda baat karke.. Jo hona tha, ho chuka.. Bhool jao uske baare mein.
(turns off away from her)
Kriya: Mein nahin bhool sakti Rey, but i want ki tum usse bhool jao
(She holds his hand gently n stops him n makes him sit on the staircase)
Kriya: Rey, uss din meine gusse mein aakar mera haath tum par uth gaya. Jaan ke nahin kiya tha. Bas unintentionally ho gaya
(She has tears in his eyes while she is saying all this. N Rey sees this n wipes them off n puts her hair behind her ears)
Rey: But tum ro kyu rahi thi uss din??
Kriya: Please Rey. Ab bas aur baat nahin karenge isske baare mein. Ab toh mujhe CHABILAL se milwa do? (Now she has a big smile on her face as she says so.. Goshhh i love her smile)
Rey: (Is in cheerful mood as well) Chabilal ko zinda karna padega. N yeh kaam sirf ek person kar sakti hai.
Kriya: kaun mein??
Rey: Nahin Ramaira..

AAGE KA BAAD MEIN.. i know thoda filmy ho gaya hai, but let it be.. Do post ur comments if u like it..

Edited by ~~ MICK ~~ - 31 January 2012 at 10:45am

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the_writer_21 Senior Member

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Posted: 09 September 2011 at 3:43pm | IP Logged
awww this is so cute! i wish something like this could happen in the show! <33

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Posted: 09 September 2011 at 3:44pm | IP Logged
Awww!! That was SOO cute! <3 <3

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Posted: 09 September 2011 at 4:50pm | IP Logged
Since we are not getting Kriyansh scenes..looks like we need to IMAGINE and DREAM up their scenes.. hehe

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Posted: 09 September 2011 at 5:25pm | IP Logged
omg thats too adorable
loved it!!..
if something like this happen on the show (i wish too)
we all will be out of
thanx 4 sharing  =) =) =)

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Posted: 09 September 2011 at 6:12pm | IP Logged
Wow!! Very nice..dreamy dreamy...

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Posted: 09 September 2011 at 6:32pm | IP Logged
in typical indian style
aaye haaye
ur dreams are in complete filmi ishtyle and i am luving itThumbs Up

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singhkhusboo Senior Member

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Posted: 09 September 2011 at 8:16pm | IP Logged

so cute

so cute

so cuteDay Dreaming

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