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You were like God to me

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Posted: 06 September 2011 at 11:34am | IP Logged
You were like god to me     

I remember you were the one
who were like God to me
I trusted you more than my soul
I respected you more than my respect
I worshiped you
I followed your words like the truth of heaven

But what you did to me
you defamed me
you ignored me as if I have no existence
I always thought how can you be wrong
but you smiled at my ignorance
You showed me your wickedest face
and laughed at my ignorance

Before I could recover from one
you kept on giving shocks to me
I was so broken when I saw your evilness
But it was too late
till I was know to your every face
I was no more an ignorant soul
but a witness of your different faces

different faces you have
which to believe
the cheerful one
like the new leaves of spring
or the wicked one
like the storm which destroys everything
The best solution is to
acknowledge you as the part of my life
whose name also make the dying wounds new
though its quite impossible
But the best way is to forget you

A small try from my side hope you all will like it

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Posted: 06 September 2011 at 11:44am | IP Logged
wonderful Sur.. potrays Runjhun's feelings very well

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Posted: 06 September 2011 at 11:47am | IP Logged
Sur meri jaan awesome ClapClap perfectly suits Runjhun's present mental situation regarding the evils M&Ms.  Love ya Hug

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Posted: 06 September 2011 at 11:52am | IP Logged
verry niceClap
big hug to youHug
no words to sayDancing

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Posted: 06 September 2011 at 1:03pm | IP Logged
awwwesum ..amazing yaar Clap

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Posted: 06 September 2011 at 2:58pm | IP Logged
Clap I LOVE IT

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Posted: 06 September 2011 at 8:07pm | IP Logged
Very well said Sur - i like it.

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Posted: 06 September 2011 at 8:20pm | IP Logged
beautiful

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