"HOT ICE" IMP NOTE=PG 19

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Posted: 12 years ago
Hy guys!!! ok so i had this idea for quite some time now and i just wanted to see whether u all will like this... so presenting a OS this time,  consider this a trailer version... i want to finish this in 7 to 8 parts. 
 
 
                         HOT ICE
 
                     The story is about Maan Singh Khurana, 31yrs of age, a successful businessman born with a stubborn streak and winning nature. He has a one track mind and gets whatever he puts his mind to. No past heartbreaks, infact the slate of his heart is clean. He loved being surrounded by the occassional GFs but had never seriously considered them to be part of his life. A very private person by nature, his flamboyant persona hides the real man and the depth that his heart can reach into. A wealthy man, he belonged to a family who were among the movers and shakers of the society.
 
                    Geet is a mischievious, naughty girl of 23yrs, who most often then not jumps first and then looks for a landing spot and so is almost always in a tight situation which have all become second nature to her. She loves her family, her friends so much that she would do anything and everything for them. She is impulsive and very stubborn when she gets something in her mind. Geet is loved by everyone who comes in contact with her.She is very intelligent for her own good and often her childish behaviour fooled people to this facet of her. Born into a very rich and famous family, she is fully aware of her boundaries, but as is her nature she always finds cracks in any and every law laid down for her.
 
                    When these two people meet________ quite by chance, they react like ICE ON FIRE------ HOT ICE, flambyont and mature Maan is intrigued by this spitfire and impulsive Geet who is everything opposite to what he is.  Geet on the other hand finds him overbearing and dominating. But as they say LOVE always finds a spot for itself. Their LOVE would have to conqure not just their hearts but the stigma of society, social barriers and their families...
 
 
 
[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JLQg3SysCX8&feature[/YOUTUBE]
 
 
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                                                                  HOT ICE
 
 
 
 
MAAN SINGH KHURANA
 
 
 
GEET HANDA
 
 
 
                                                 PROLOGUE
 
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She stood there as if listless.

 

How did her life become so complicated?

 

She loved her father and that was the crux of the whole matter, going against his wishes was something she could never think of. Scared she was not, but he was such a prominent figure that whatever she did reflected on him. She knew the responsibilities of being the daughter of such a prominent public figure. And her father had always unconditionally loved her. Allowing her things which other people in his position have never allowed their children. Whenever she had insisted on something he and her Mom had sat down with her and discussed it and then only had they ever taken a decision. Her father had never forced any of his decisions on her. And that is why she felt this restlessness, this guilt.

 

If she understood so many things why was she being so restless??? If she knew her responsibilities and boundaries why was she straining to free herself, looking for clinks in that? What was the reason she couldn't still her heart?

 

A sound from her balcony made her turn and there he stood________ looking at her through the glass partition________ the reason for her restlessness.

Oh God!! What was she to do??

 

He stood there looking at her, the object of his single minded attention. What was it about her that he couldn't think of anything other than her? What was it about her that he couldn't sleep without her essence, her presence any more? He had thought that it was lust as always, but no if that had been the case then he would have been relieved of it by now________ standing there at that very moment he accepted the knowledge that she had become the centre of his universe. He needed the very air she breathed to survive, the twinkle in her eyes she always had whenever she laughed, her smile when she did something mischievous, her touch which not only burned him to devour her at times, but gave him his sanctity--------the peace that he had so yearned for so long.

 

Geet stood there and watched Maan slide open the glass balcony doors and enter her room. Was she surprised? No, one part of her mind had known he would come to her. That he would find some way to reach her. She acknowledged the fact that she had infact been waiting for him to come to her. She had just been fighting with herself to justify them meeting against her father's explicit wishes as she had known he won't stay away from her. The moment she accepted that she understood what she had never accepted in all their squabbles--------- she had become heart and soul his and no amount of denials would alter this fact.

 

Maan watched a slow smile bloom on her lips, he walked towards her and saw her eyes radiate the calm and serenity that he had never found anywhere else. This child-woman, this unruly hoyden, who did things in her own unique way, who held his heart in the palms of her hand_________ and understood that he would walk through fires of hell and back to find a way to make everything right for them, to have her to himself as she was his Misty, his  Wife.

And he closed the distance and enclosed her in a embrace and a kiss they both hungered for.

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LINKS TO THE CHAPTERS (IN dESCENDING ORDER)

CH-2, PG-12
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Preethi-Premi thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome! Continue kush! but promise to update regularly😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow didi ..back with a bang !!! 
continue soon ..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow khushi...
Congrats for ur new story...

Sounds really interesting...
Updt soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome!!  really interesting!!!
update soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Already 12   likes in ur kitty . so, plz continue as it sounds very interesting .
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hi Khushi...Congrats on the OS. 🥳. All da best! 🤗! Y no pm? 😭 Nyways saw the post n had to read! The prologue was superb, mind blowing n awesum! Loved it! Well written! U described Geet's inner turmol beautifully! Maan will always b der for her! Please continue n add me 2 ur pm list! Update soon n pm wen u do...waiting!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice
they are married but her father dont know about it,
what make her made such decision
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Posted: 12 years ago
great prologue dear ,u know i always liked the marriage part 😉 now  it will be interesting to see how story  gets ahead  and the passion ,longing,restlessness will be worth  watching between married cople  in love yet distant 😊 
note:-latkana nahi  jaldi jaldi update karna 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for the comments and to really tell the truth i want to write this OS as i had wanted to write an explosive one for some time now... but then again i want more likes...so come on if this really grips u go ahead press the button...iam waiting with the first update. Edited by khushi_4ever - 12 years ago