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Moment1...TOGETHER IN TOUGH TIMES!Embarrassed



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Its night..Two days had passed since the tragedy struck the city..people had begun to move on with their lives..except for the families that had lost their loved ones..IN SURAJ'S HOUSE..bhabho walks into the hall..it was to be..suraj's wedding day..but after kavita's death in the blast..the whole household was stunned by the turn of events..Ouch

REACHING THE KITCHEN..bhabho asks the servant-suraj nahin aaya? WHEN SHE SAYS a no..worried bhabho walks away and standing at the door she stares out on the road waiting for suraj to return.. Confused

There on the outskirts of the city u see sandhya sitting by the lakeside..holding the pen the doctor had given to her at the hospital..among her father's belongings..sandhya stares at the letter..S on it and realises that her parents must have bought it for her! Tears streamed down her cheeks as she cries..wondering Why me?..Shocked

SHE HAD NEVER EVER SPENT a single day without her parents..and now when she had the entire life ahead of her without them..sandhya was just left wondering how would she ever come out of their loss ! Right across where she is..u can see suraj..seated by the opposite lake side..lost in his thoughts...he too had never thought that life would snatch away from him his most cherished dream! Cry

Taking out the engagement ring from the fingre suraj stares at it longingly..and recalls how a smiling kavita had made him wear it..SIGHING HE THINKS to himself sadly as tears well up in his eyes-ek hii pal mein itna sab kho jayega..socha bhi nahin tha ki iss tarah se..har khushi..har sapna bikhar gaya hai kavita...tumharey bina..(his voice trails off as he finds it painful to remember the woman he had thought would become his wife and bring happiness into his family)..Confused

THERE SANDHYA too was sobbing bitterly-mujhe akela kyun chod gaye papa..aapke bina..aapke bina main kaise jeeyungi maa?!..Cry

SHE FEELS SOMEONE'S hand on her shoulder and looking up she finds her dad smiling at her..sandhya's lips too curl up into a smile as she says-papa?..main..main jaanti thi aap..aap mujhe kabhi nahin chodogey!..papa aap..Smile

ARVIND EMBRACES HIS DAUGHTER'S face and kissing her forehead..he says-sandhya..tumney sahi kaha..tum akeli nahin ho..har kadam par mera aur kanchan ka aashirwad hai tumharey saath..aur main jaanta hoon meri beti bahot bahadur hai..(sandhya cries moving her head sideways..trying to tell her father she had no strength to go on in life without them at all!..) aur jo hua ussey peechey chod ke..tumhe zindagi mein aagey badhna hoga sandhya..jo sapna tumney mujhe aur apni maa ko dikhaya hai...Tongueussey humri khaatir poora karna hoga!...(still crying sandhya nods her head and as he father goes on.u see suraj gets up and begins to walk upto the exit gate of the lake)...Aur main jaanta hoon..meri iss pyari si raajkumari ko..uska rajkumar zaroor milegaa..(the camera focuses on suraj walking by the lake opposite to where sandhya was as avind's voice says onDay Dreaming)...jo tumharey har sapney ko poora karney mein tumhara saath dega...Tumhari har khushi ko apna samjhega...Aur USKA PYAR tumhey humari kami kabhi mehsoos hii nahiin honney dega!...

Overwhelmed by her father's words sandhya closes her eyes...and when she opens them saying---par papa...SHE FINDS HER DAD WAS GONE...and by her side on the grass lay a white rose...her dad's favourite...Ouch

Picking it up and clinging onto the pen sandhya makes way for the exit too...with a heavy heart...walking a few steps she suddenly feels dizzy...and the whole ground seems to be spinning in fron of her eyes...losing balance she is about to fall down when suraj reaches by her side and catching hold of her right in  time he manages to not let her fallStar...and finds himself staring at an unconscious sandhya!Shocked


Edited by Ashima_Mishal - 08 September 2011 at 11:51pm

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