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SS: Baby of Mine Imp Note pg36 Oct26 (Page 3)

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Posted: 06 September 2011 at 12:06am | IP Logged
awesome jaz . loved it . can't comment more as i am speechless. plz continue soon .

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Posted: 06 September 2011 at 12:08am | IP Logged
continue this soon yarr...

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Posted: 06 September 2011 at 12:12am | IP Logged
nice dear

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Posted: 06 September 2011 at 12:19am | IP Logged
Hey jaz, me again bugging u Big smile Let me tell u that this weekend i finished reading ur works,everything...hamesha saath was the last one...a master piece...mindblowing concept,i tell u my hear enjoyed reading that,it was perfect,amazing,original,beautifuly written,no other words to tell how much i loved it! U r simply god gifted i tell u...i love ur work,the best writting style ever,the best writer...u know how to show both pain and happiness...what u do its art...like a painting coming to life with ur words! Thank you!!

Now coming to the ss, i loved the concept and the poem...clever writting,i liked it!
Love the way u show maan affected by geet,everything tgat happens to her...and like the details,the one with geet clutching the saari by her stomach...wonderful, continue soon, i love this, thanks again jaz!

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Posted: 06 September 2011 at 12:21am | IP Logged

Hi Jaz...thanks 4 da pm ! Congrats on da SS Party! All da best Hug! The poem was wonderful. It was intense, emtional n sad SS! Poor Geet, has nt forgotten the lost of her baby. It will always b der! Geet was in so much of pain! Dadi consoles Geet. Maan wants to know y Geet is so upset n sad bt nobody will tell him nything! Beautifullly written...update soon Wink

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Posted: 06 September 2011 at 12:55am | IP Logged
Awww, you stopped it at the worst part! I need to find out what will happen next. can't wait to see how maan reacts when you update next week. great story so far. Clap

I'm happy that you decided to write this amnesia ss, because we're not really getting much from maan in the show beyond his getting angry/suspicious/trying or what have you, and the show is moving at a snail's pace regarding other truths of their pasts. I really want to see him react to other events that happened in their lives beyond his reaction to finding out they were married. this baby thing and the whole dev debacle were two things i want to see maan's reaction to, and hope the show will tackle before he gets his memory back. b/c once he does, it's game over.

Even if they don't do that, i'm glad i was able to read this fanfic and see how he might have reacted. Thumbs Up

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Posted: 06 September 2011 at 12:57am | IP Logged
Beautiful..besutiful Jaz! 
I'm eagerly waiting for the next part...This is even better than the showDay Dreaming

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Posted: 06 September 2011 at 1:37am | IP Logged
awesome, brilliant update
 

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