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.::Poetry Writing Contest::. Nomination ::.

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Posted: 05 September 2011 at 5:10am | IP Logged


                                                   


Heloo All..

Guys..Im finally back with our Poetry ContestEmbarrassed

I read each and every poetry...

I would like to congratulate and appreciate everyone for their entries and participationHug

Bravo GKDiansClap  We have lovely talent hereEmbarrassed


So GKDians...

Here are the entries...

You will have to vote for best oneBig smile





Entry One

Kabhi dil ke dar pe wo roz aaya karte the,
                 kitne khaas hai hum unke liye ,
                 ye ehsaas dilya karte the.
                 zeena seekh liya bas unhi chand lamhaton ke sahaare,
               jab se wo ye keh gaye ,
                "paagal hum to bas zee behlaya karte the".

Entry Two


Whenever i looked back , you were there with me,
you were there in up and downs, to support me,
you were there whether i ask for or not,
you were always mine,

whenever look in myself,
you are here, in these eyes,
you are here, in my victories,
your are here in my losses,
you are here in my heart, in my soul,

let them say,
 you are gone, you are not with me,
let them say I am alone,
they never understand our relation,
our emotions,
how can they understand that-
"You are me & I am you"

Entry Three

Kuch yaadein humme hasati hai,
Kuch yaadein humme rulati hai,
Par yeh yaadein wohi hai,
Jo hamare saath hamesha ke liye reh jaati hai,
Chahe woh achhi ho ya ho buri,
Zindagi ko ek pyara sa paigam de jaati hai,
Chahe humme inse ho koi gila ya ho koi shikwa,
Yeh hamari zindagi ko ek naya makam de jaati hai,
Chahe ho pasand ya ho napasand,
Koi na koi seekh humme de jaati hai.

Entry Four

You leave the trace of your burning steps
On my perplexed eyes
My stressed mouth
Which have still faith upon your far promises
Your fingers which are still awaiting thoughtfully
Your veins which lost their ways
You could have never come this day.

Entry Five

In my room
Everything is
as you left them
The rug you loved
Still on the ground
...
With the trace of your feet
the prettiest patterns ever
The windows are with the same
Everything still smells your hands
You are not here and there is no word but silence.




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Edited by prash_t - 05 September 2011 at 5:38am

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Posted: 05 September 2011 at 5:33am | IP Logged
Have Voted , all r very nice... SmileClapClap

 May b if AS has time , v cud send him n see which one he likes, make him d final judge aftr d votes or smth ... wat say guys ?? (just an opinion as he himself writes well)

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Posted: 05 September 2011 at 5:38am | IP Logged
wow all nice  yaar
i think i vote for all  eh


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Posted: 05 September 2011 at 5:39am | IP Logged
@CG- can v do tht??

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Posted: 05 September 2011 at 5:54am | IP Logged
prash u can send the link to ashish via twitter but then let it be dont pester him

and btw did udo what i told u to make

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Posted: 05 September 2011 at 5:59am | IP Logged
I told my friend abt it

bt i need atleast 10 pics

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Posted: 05 September 2011 at 6:03am | IP Logged
prash al the pics r in gallery and if not in gallery u can get from his fb profile na
and now he has made new fan page
u wud get pix there

what size u r getting it maid

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Posted: 05 September 2011 at 6:09am | IP Logged
I dunno..

wht is the ideal size??

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