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Posted: 30 December 2012 at 8:32am | IP Logged
Awesome parts Punam.
I read last 3 parts in one go.
I don't have enough words to appreciate you darling.
You are wonderful.
starting from Riddhima's labour pain to the inauguration of New Sanjeevani and naming ceremony of AR's twins,everything was mindblowing..
Armaan's concern for Riddhima during her labour pain was described very nicely.
The shock for Armaan with the beautiful surprise of the arrival of twins into AR's family was astonishing for me as well.
I'm so happy for AR.
Shanky ahaan..I can't stop laughing the way Armaan curses Shanky.
AR's cute romantic moments were fabulous.
The whole naming ceremony was very nice.
I love Rishima so much.She is an angel.
Why did Armaan deny Shanky's offer?I'm so much curious now.
I'm extremely sorry for the delay honey.
I hope you'll forgive me.
I've been extremely busy with exams and studies due to which I could not comment.
Anyways plz update the next part as soon as possible.
Love u
Take care!

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Posted: 30 December 2012 at 11:10am | IP Logged
Superb update Punam!
loved AR moments!
why did Armaan declined da head post?
eagerly waiting 4 next part! update soon
thnx 4 pm

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Posted: 30 December 2012 at 1:11pm | IP Logged
Awww...Punam sisi...Hug longgg longgg time yaar...i missed u n ur FF...Embarrassed
Wowie...the story is proceding so well.. Ammy is soo cute.. Love the essense of love between AR , still so fresh and rejuvinated..Embarrassed lols.. Mother of Ammy's kids..hayye..har dialogue mein romance n wonderful..Big smile
Lols..Shanky..yeh word sach mein meri jubaan par bhi chap gaya hai..ismein Ammy ka bhi kasoor nahi..LOL Lovely and amazing work. as always sisi...thanks alot for sharing..Love AR..and love u sooo much!!! Muaahh..keep writing n rocking the way you always do..Tc..Hug

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Posted: 30 December 2012 at 9:29pm | IP Logged
nice part...
cont soon dear...

PS - me fine dear and hope the same from u...

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awesome updateSmileSmile
loved ar mometsHeart
and thanks for the pmBig smile
continue soon...:-)
sorry for the late replyHug

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awesome update ClapClap

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hey PoonamT,  sweetkajen,  TANVI_SEXY,  vidu87,  KaJen_addiction,  crazy4KASH_AR ..thanks a lot friends for your lovely comments,for inspiring me ,encouraging this update,i am posting 2 parts... part 34 and part 35. (the last part)...again thanks a lot for liking my ".gunahon ka devta".

chapter --34


Arman replied in a low voice…."sir,ye to mera sapna tha…but sorry sir,mai ye responsibility nahi le sakta…

Gunahon Ka Dewta


All were in a shock hearing it!!…..dr. sashank asked surprisingly…"but why?aap bahut responsible and kaabil hain,I know it…..and ye sirf mera nahi management ka decision hai…. phir kya wajah hai?"

Arman : "sir,ye haq dr. anjali ka hai….wo mujhse bahut jyada kaabil hai …please sir,aap usey ye responsibility den to jyada behtar hai….

Dr. sashank confused…."but…

Arman : "sir,maine aapse sirf aapki beti riddhima ke siwa kuch nahi manga..please aaj mujhe aur ek gift de den…please announce dr. anjali's name as the head of new sanjiwani…

Dr. sashank looked at him once and turned towards the members of committee…….they were discussing about it in a low voice……

Dr.sashank apologized to the audience and went to the committee for final decision.

All were waiting for the decision …anjali's heart was beating rapidly…her dream was to be head of the sanjiwani ,god gave a chance but she also knew that papa will not change his decision so easily.

But riddhima was in her seat calmly…she knew that whatever arman is doing surely his motive is good behind it..…and papa always takes right decision.arman gave her a nervous look but riddhima assured him through her eyes.

…anjali kept finger crossing…….after 15 minutes dr. sashank came back in the stage and said…"ok, there is a little change….dr. anjali is the head of new sanjiwani and dr. arman is the incharge of old sanjiwani and dr. riddhima bhi old sanjiwani me hi join karengi,keunki mai janta hun mai un dono ko alag nahi kar sakta….

All laughed at this joke….arman bowed and touched dr. sashank's feet…dr. sashank patted his shoulder….


Now it was the party time…all had their plate in their hands and enjoying their favorite food with chatting to friends in a low voice…

Anjali : "arman,thanks a lot …tumne mujhe kya diya tumhe khud pata nahi,ye mere life ka sabse bada dream tha…

Arman smiled and gave a side hug to her…"you are my best friend beauty queen…bhul gayi,sabse pahle sanjiwani me tumne hi mujhse friendship ki thi?

Nikki :"kya!! Aur ye atul,muskan,rahul aur riddhima?

Arman : "muskan and rahul ne bahut baad join ki and atul ,sapna ,riddhima ka ek apna gang tha,they hated me….

Atul : "aisa mat bol mere bhai…aur tu kitni saitani karta tha bhul gaya?pata hai nikki,ye sabse jyada riddhima ko tang karta tha….

Anji laughed:"dono tom and jerry ki tarah ladte rahte…meri ridhzi toh paresaan ho jati thi is saitan se…

Arman twittered : "achcha!! Tumhari ridhzi bhi kuch kam saitan nahi thi…uska dimag medical line me kam meri leg pulling me jyada rahta tha…

Atul : "but jo bhi ho arman,ridhzi thi bahut pyari..bahut innocent,isliye to tum uske pyar ke giraft me na jane kab aa gaye ,tumhe pata hi nahi chala…

Arman smiled and nodded his head…."ya,you are right atul….

Muskan chuckled : "means ab ridhzi pyari nahi hai?

Atul : "nahi muski mera ye matlab nahi…abhi bhi hai but thora mature ho gayi hai….

Arman pointed his finger on atul and made a fake anger face: "dekh atul,meri basket ke baare me kuch mat kahna..wo abhi bhi utni hi pyari hai jitni internship time thi…

Riddhima came…"kya hua arman?tum atul se fight keun kar rahe ho?

Arman made an innocent face: "mai kahan kar raha hun? Your beloved jijju is fighting with me…wo meri pyari shonu si wifey ke baare me pata nahi kya kya bol raha hai…

Riddhima frawned : 'never! Atul aisa kuch nahi kah sakta,tumne hi kaha hoga kuch….

Arman kept his hand around riddhima's waist and pulled her towards him…"leave it …pata hai basket,I was missing you so much….

Nikki : "haan riddhima,kahan thi ab tak? Dekho ,arman ne kuch khaya bhi nahi…apna plate hi nahi liya,kahta hai basket ko aane do….

Riddhima gave a loving look to arman and said…"mai abhi plate lekar aati hun…aaj mai arman ko apne hathon se khilaungi….

All friends together…."oyye hoyye basket!!!

Riddhima smiled and went to take food…..

Anjali : "arman,meri baat to incomplete rah gayi…please tell me,tumne itna bada offer chod keun diya? As I know,tumhara bhi yahi sapna tha..sanjiwani ka head banna….

Arman smiled :" yes anji,tha…but ab nahi…

Muskan and rahul both surprisingly…"kun!! Aisa kya ho gaya!!

Arman looked at them and smiled: "kuch nahi,bas ab mai apni family ko thora jyada time dena chahta hun……do you know? Maine rishima ki bachpan dekha hai…maine bahut jyada time spend kiya uske sath…kabhi usey jyada der tak akela nahi chodta tha..ek wahi thi jo mujhe basket ki yaad dilati…..but sath hi mai usey dekhte hi basket ko khone ka pain feel karta…bahut takleef hoti thi…jab bhi sochta basket kisi aur ki ho gayi hai,lagta tha jaan de dun..but is rishima ne mujhe marne nahi diya…mai usey akela nahi chod sakta tha….

Anji : "aur riddhzi janti thi ki uske bina tum ji nahi paoge isliye rishima ko tumhare god(lap) me daal di thi….khud ko chahe kitni bhi takleef ho…

Arman : "wo hai hi itni achchi,meri basket..aur mai ab chahta hun ki mai riddhima aur bachchon ko jyada time dun…..isliye itni badi responsibility lene se mana kiya….

Rahul : "but arman,kya tum aur aage badhna nahi chahte? Means high achievement?

Arman : "dekh rahul,hum progress keun karna chahte? Keunki usse humey khushi milti hai…aur mujhe sabse jyada khushi abhi apni family ke sath loving moments collect karne se milenge…

Anji caught arman's hand…"but arman,tumne mera sapna pura kiya,kuch gift tumhe lene honge mujhse…

Arman smiled…"ok,beauty queen…I will tell you later about my gift…

Anji ; "sure arman…jo chahe mango…

Arman smiled in his heart… he knew that anjali was screamed to hear about his gift….anjali didn't notice it but atul surely…..

Atul (with a doubting look) : "arman , mere bhai… tu kuch gadbad karne wala to nahi meri biwi ke sath?

Arman laughed : "haan to? Meri Sali hai wo,mera haq banta hai…..

Atul : dekh arman!

Arman : "to kya,tu apni Sali ke sath kuch bhi kar sakta hai aur mai nahi?

Atul : "dekh arman! Riddhima meri Sali se jyada best friend hai,tu bhi ye janta hai aur maine aisa kuch nahi kiya uske sath!

Arman laughed : "champ!! Tu gusse me bada handsome lagta hai…

atul : "topic change mat kar arman!!

Riddhima ,who came in between ...said in an upset tone…"arman!! Tum phir atul se lad rahe ho?tumhari ladne ki aadat kab jayegi?

Arman pulled riddhima in him and uttered lovingly…"kya karun jaan! Tum to ab mujhse ladti nahi ho,to tumhare pyare jiju hi sahi!

Riddhima : "atul,ye arman pahle bhi pagal tha aur aaj bhi hai, please uski baat ka bura mat manna…

Arman was trying to say something but before it riddhima stuffed his mouth with his fav. Aloo ke parathe…..


chapter --- 35 (epilogue)

After 1 week

 It was a pleasant morning…Riddhima was very busy with her dress and in searching ,arranging files . arman came silently and hugged her from back….

Riddhima (in an irritating voice) "armaaan!! Chodo na,dekho mujhe paresaan mat karo…

Arman dropped a kiss on her neck…"ok,to pyar karta hun….

Riddhima pushed him…"chalo chodo…har waqt badmasi…mujhe kaam karne do…

Arman again hugged her from back...…"basket,tum apna kaam karo aur mai apna…

Riddhima tried to free from his grip…"chodo mujhe,jab dekho lipatna…ye nahi ki meri help karo…

Arman freed her and sat on the bed…"ok batao kya help karna hai…arman apni jaan dene ko bhi taiyar hai meri jaan…

Riddhima :" mere files and all nahi mill rahe,itne dino hospital nahi gayi to pata nahi sab kahan rakh diye….

Arman got up.."to ab koun hospital ja raha hai?

Riddhima : "oops! Sorry,mai batana hi bhul gayi..kal se mai bhi join kar rahi hun….bachchon ko to ananya mom and billy dad sambhal lenge…

Arman smiled…"nahi riddhima ,tum abhi hospital nahi jaogi..

Riddhima (surprisingly) : "keun? mai ek doctor hun aur is tarah ghar par baithe rahna kya achcha lagta hai? 

Arman came towards her and gave an envelope  in her hand….

Riddhima (curiously) : "ye kya hai?

Arman : "khud hi dekh lo….

Riddhima opened the envelope  and yelled surprisingly…"ye to tickets hain, switzerland  ke!!

Arman smiled…"hmmm….bhul gayi,next week humari marriage anniversery hai…

Riddhima : "toh!!

Arman made closing her…"to humara 2nd honeymoon,in switzerland….

Riddhima pushed him…"tum sachmuch pagal ho, humare 3 bachche hain..unhe lekar…

Arman cut her words in the middle…."basket,meri jaan!...

Riddhima  frowned : "kya hai?

Arman caught her hand and kissed…"kya aapko pata nahi ki honeymoon par only love-birds jate hain?

Riddhima glared him :"tab bachche nahi hote…wo just married hote hain…

Arman pulled her close to him…."to hum dono bhi just married hain..aur rahenge…koi bhi aaye humare life me ,humey koi farak nahi parega….

Riddhima (confusingly) : "but….

Arman caressed her hair…"don't worry,maine baat kar li hai …mumma aur dad  hain and padma mom,nani ji sab hain na…wo sambhal lenge humare 3 gems ko…

Riddhima : "wo to thik hai arman,but tumhe hospital se leave mill gayi?kaise?and maine papa ko kah diya kal se join karungi…

Arman slipped his hands around riddhima waist and started to slow dance…."don't worry….. sab manage ho jayega….do you know basket,tumhara hubby kitna intelligent hai? 

Riddhima peeped in his eyes…."keun? aapne aisa kaam kiya?

Just then phone rang….arman picked up the phone and said…."yes,anji…haan ,mill gayi leave? Thanks anji…see you, bye…

Riddhima : "ye di kya kah rahi thi?

Arman caught her by waist and twirlled…."us din ke liye anji mujhe kuch gift dena chahti thi,to maine usey kaha ki sasurji ko mana le humari leave ke liye…and she managed……..

Riddhima  looked at him lovingly  and uttered : "mai bhi tumhe thanks kahna chahti thi arman,tumne di ka sapna pura kiya..i know ye sapna tumhara bhi tha,but tumne di ke baare me socha….tum bahut achche ho arman…..

Arman peeped in her almond eyes…"sirf achcha hun! Aur kuch nahi?hot,handsome……

Riddhima kept her head on his chest and started to sing closing her eyes…"

Sa re ga re ga ma ga re sa
Sa re ga re ga
Zindagi mein aaj lamhe khaas aa gaye
Aate aate dono ke dil paas aa gaye

(please ,watch this vm which is made for specially this ff)

Sa re ga re ga ma ga re sa
Sa re ga re ga
Zindagi mein aaj lamhe khaas aa gaye
Aate aate dono ke dil paas aa gaye

Tere kadmon pe hi rasta thehra hain mera
Meri aakho ki toh manzil chehra hain tera

Tu hi tu hai, Tu hi tu hai
jeene ki adaa
Tu hi tu hai, tu hi tu hai
saanson ki hawaa
Tu hi tu hai, tu hi tu hai
Khwabo ki duaa
Tu hi tu hai, tu hi tu hai
Ek mera Khuda..

Ye dil seene mein tha par
Kabhi dhadka nahi tha
Ye teri aahatein isey de gayi dhadkan

O kyun udti hai ye neendein
Kyun aankhon mein hai karwat
Hui pehli baar ye uljhan

Tu hi tu hai...tu hi tu hai
 ek mera khuda…

Sitaare bhi wahi hai
Wahi ye chand bhi hai
Magar ab roshni hai kal se kuch zyada
Ki teri hi nazar ne dikhaye lakh rung hain
Tere bin tha ye mausam kal talak saada

Tu hi tu hai………. Tu hi tu hai, Tu hi tu hai
jeene ki adaa
Tu hi tu hai, tu hi tu hai
saanson ki hawaa
Tu hi tu hai, tu hi tu hai
Khwabo ki duaa
Tu hi tu hai, tu hi tu hai
Ek mera Khuda..

Arman kissed her hair and joined with her………

………. Tu hi tu hai, Tu hi tu hai
jeene ki adaa
Tu hi tu hai, tu hi tu hai
saanson ki hawaa
Tu hi tu hai, tu hi tu hai
Khwabo ki duaa
Tu hi tu hai, tu hi tu hai
Ek mera Khuda..

**thanks a lot to all readers for their lovely ,inspiring comments and like tabs….love you my friends……**

Love you all

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WOW di u r awesome
nd d updates are superbly awesome
luvd dem 2 core
thnx 4 sharin such a beautiful ff wid us
thnkuuu innaaa bbaaddaaa

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