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This is a Fan Fiction based off of Zee TV's Serial Mrs. Kaushik Ki Paanch Bahuein. The FF will revolve around the love story and Karthik and Lovely. Below this post is a post with members who want PMs. Those that press like on that post will be mailed for updates. If you want to unsubscribe, please repress like, and PM as well!

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Lovely is a girl who gets what she needs by lying. Despite getting caught, and yelled at, she continues to lie. She lied once while crashing into Karthik's car, and soon ends up having feelings from him.

Karthik is the fifth, and last soon who needs to get married in the Kaushik family. Slowly developing feelings for Lovely, he denies to accept her because he know his mother will never allow a deceiving girl walk into the family.

Ghena is the first bahu who walked into the Kaushik family. She is all about getting the work done, and listening to her mother-in-law

Nimmi is the second bahu. She is a fun loving girl who makes jokes her her mother-in-law isn't around.

Simmi is the third bahu. She is all about working at the police station, uncomfortable with household work, such has cooking.

Ria is the forth bahu, who moved to India from London. She is trying to get comfortable with the strict environment in the Kaushik family. 

Mrs.Kaushik is the strict mother in law. The house dances to her tunes and follows whatever she says. No one stays alive when they lie to her.

Mr.Kaushik is the man married to Mrs.Kaushik. He is also unable to speak in high tones to her.
 


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Chapter 1

It was a warm summer day. Karthik came rushing down the stairs. He was running late, and did not wait to eat breakfast. "Wait," said Ghena Bhabi. "First eat, the go. Its fine if you go late just one day." Mrs. Kaushik walked into the living room and told Ghena that he is late, and he will get something from work. He needs to leave. Knowing that anyone who speaks against her mother-in-law is bound to see no tomorrow, she left and wlaked back into the kitchen. Karthik got into his car and drove as quickly as he could so he would not be late. As he stopped his car at the red light, a scooter from behind smashes into Karthik's car. Karthik gets out and goes to yell at the driver. The girl takes of her helmet and swings her hair. "Can't you drive like a normal person?" "You smashed my car and i'm already late." The girl looks around and suddenly replies "My mom is in the hospital. I am in a rush as well. Please forgive me." Karthik decides to let the topic go and he goes back in the car, and the light had turned green and other cars were waiting. The girl is thinking "I got saved today! Very well done Lovely. Who says lying gets you no where!?"

Back at the Kaushik house, Ria, Vimmy, and Ghena are in the kitchen working. Mrs. K comes in saying that she wants Aloo Ke Parathas and ladoos ready for lunch in 15 minutes. Mr. K looks at her and smiles and Mrs.K says " And make sure, the ladoos should be made only for us 4. Nobody else." Mr. K makes a face and turns away. She goes into her room and Mr.K follows. She sees him come in and tells him he will not get any ladoos. Mr.K says "why are you so tensed these few days?" Mrs. K says it is time to get Karthik married. I will not even accept the tiniest flaw in my 5th Bahu. I am going to the panditji today to let him know to start hunting."

Karthik is coming home from work, and see's Lovely again. This time, she accidentally runs in front of the car, by crossing the street without looking. She recognizes him and tries to lie again, but Karthik says it won't work. She apologizes and Karthik lets her go, as he doesn't want to get involved with liars, because of his mom.

Karthik, and the other 4 sons of Mrs. K arrive home. Everyone is at the dinner table. Karthik keeps thinking about Lovely and her hair swing. He is trying to figure out what it is that keeps making him think of her. Mrs. K asks where he is lost and he replies "Voh Lovely..." Everyone stares at him...

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Chapter 2

Karthik switches the conversation by saying: "Voh aaj ka whether lovely hai na?"

Mrs. Kaushik tells hi to eat quickly so that the 4 bahu's can clean up and eat as well. She order Ghena to serve him.


Later that night, Karthik is in his room thinking about Lovely. Mrs. Kaushik comes in and tells him to sleep, because he has work the next day and he should not be late once again.


At that same time, Lovely is in her room thinking about her she once again was successful lying her way out of trouble. She wonders why she can't stop thinking about Karthik, and why she feels so guilty. She decides that if she bumps into him the next day, she will take it as a sign to tell him the truth. Her mom comes in and Lovely tries to talk to her. As usual, her mom is late for another party and ignores her daughter. Lovely thinks about the fact she always sleeps without her mom wishing her a goodnight, and gets a bit upset


**The next day**


Karthik, and his 4 brother come downstairs to eat. Mrs. Kaushik informs them that she will be going to mandir to talk to panditji about Karthik's wedding. This time, she will find a daughter-in-law with all qualities she wants. Karthik thinks about Lovely again, and decides that if he will meet her again today, he will try to talk with her find out their connection. Mrs. Kaushik asks Karthik if he will marry whoever she picks, and Karthik says he will never go against her wish.

Karthik leaves for work. When coming home, his mind is somewhere else. His car looses control, and then see's their is someone standing in the front. He quickly presses the brakes. He looks completely shocked...

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