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Poem...woh ek shakhs

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Posted: 01 September 2011 at 1:29pm | IP Logged



Soch k canvas per jab kuch lakeeray khichain
"Ghaur" se dekha to ek tasveer hai bani

Us tasver kay "tayvaron" mein meri mohabbat hai "chhupi"
Us "shakhs" "ki" "ankho" mein meri zindagi hai saji

Woh ek "shakhs" "jis" k "hone" se "mukammal" ho mera "wajood"
Woh ek "shakhs" jis ke "aghosh" mein "simat" "jayein" do "jahan"

Woh jo "mere" dard ko khushi, ansoo ko muskan day
Meri khamoshi ko "zuban", mere "lafzo" ko Moqa day

Jo meray sath ko jannat, ishq ko "imaan" kahay
Jo meri "rooh" ko taskeen, meray khawabo ko "jahan" day

Woh jo "Chha" jay saveray ke tarah meri raato mein
Jo "mujh" apna, khud ko mera libass kahay

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Posted: 01 September 2011 at 11:00pm | IP Logged
fabulous poem dear
lovelyyy

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Posted: 02 September 2011 at 5:48am | IP Logged
Beautiful! Clap
Especially loved the last stanza. :)

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Posted: 02 September 2011 at 11:40am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Ameres

Beautiful! Clap
Especially loved the last stanza. :)
thnks aloot
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Posted: 02 September 2011 at 2:04pm | IP Logged
very very beautiful poem Fiza.
fantabolous.Thumbs Up
loved it.Heart
kaash main aisa likh sakti Day Dreaming
keep writing.
i wanna read more n more poem like this.Big smile
waise tune pmkyun nhi kia Angry
very bad.Unhappy
next time i want  pm...samjhi ...warna Evil Smile

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Posted: 02 September 2011 at 3:40pm | IP Logged
n here ppl talk abt friend-shipStern Smile...jab ki pm karna jaruri nahi samjhaOuch...!

outstanding piece...so intense...i loved it...!

p.s...never forget to pm...!

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Posted: 08 September 2011 at 6:19pm | IP Logged
woahhh what a beautiful romantic poemm!! Day Dreaming
greatly done C:

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Posted: 16 September 2011 at 11:13am | IP Logged
kya main jaan sakti hoon mujhe iska pm kyun nahi mila??Ouch

but... beautiful poem fiza-ji... Heart

agli baar se pm karein plzzEvil Smile

~jiya~


Edited by --jiya-- - 16 September 2011 at 11:14am

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