Fan Fictions


MG FF : MY MYSTIQUE MISHTY~~ PART 24:pg136 (Page 7)

Post Reply New Post

Page 7 of 145




Joined: 16 December 2010

Posts: 3363

Posted: 01 September 2011 at 5:20pm | IP Logged
continue soon...

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:


Dear Guest, Being an unregistered member you are missing out on participating in the lively discussions happening on the topic "MG FF : MY MYSTIQUE MISHTY~~ PART 24:pg136 (Page 7)" in Fan Fictions forum. In addition you lose out on the fun interactions with fellow members and other member exclusive features that India-Forums has to offer. Join India's most popular discussion portal on Indian Entertainment. It's FREE and registration is effortless so JOIN NOW!




Joined: 09 April 2011

Posts: 4523

Posted: 01 September 2011 at 10:27pm | IP Logged
interesting dear...
congrats 4 new ff

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:





Joined: 17 February 2009

Posts: 3098

Posted: 01 September 2011 at 11:51pm | IP Logged
Congrats 4 new ff
Interesting concept
continue soon

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:





Joined: 18 October 2010

Posts: 31114

Posted: 01 September 2011 at 11:55pm | IP Logged


Awesome update..

Add me in ur PM list..

eagrly wtng 4 nxt prt..

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:



Senior Member


Joined: 29 May 2011

Posts: 765

Posted: 02 September 2011 at 12:33am | IP Logged
are wah!!!Cool bhoot wala story...Confused awsm Clapawsm... Thumbs Upcontinue soon...Embarrassed

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:





Joined: 02 April 2005

Posts: 1703

Posted: 02 September 2011 at 1:39am | IP Logged
lovely one do continue
bye sumi

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:





Joined: 01 July 2011

Posts: 14659

Posted: 02 September 2011 at 4:02am | IP Logged
lovely update dear!congrats for ur new thread...
it sounds great...plz continue it dear

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:





Joined: 24 February 2011

Posts: 4258

Posted: 02 September 2011 at 5:53am | IP Logged

THANK YOUUU... for the warm welcome!!!!!!!!!    Hug

Here we go...


Maan saw Abhay and Adi.He came out of the little gang with a slight smile.
Abhay gave him a warm hug.
Abhay: Welcome to Dehradun Maan!
Maan: I hav already been welcomed by this beautiful place...
Abhay: oh! And wat does that mean?
Maan: yehi ki me kal raat ko hi yeha pohunch gaya tha.And u know wat,i had an inner call..
Abhay:but tum to aj aneywale the?
Maan: thats wat i'm tryin to xplain.Kuch tha jo mujhe yeha ki aur kheench raha tha.Thats why i reachd here yesterday nite itself.
Abhay: to phir tumne mujhe bataya kyu nhe?
Maan: wo actually Abhay raat bohat ho gayi thi aur me tumhe disturb nhe karna chahta tha.Isliye i campd in the jungle.And u wont believe i found..
Adi: xcuse me,sir! Ap thak gaye honge.if u dnt m..mind,apke liye jo ghar dekha he wo finalize kar le to!

Maan: ha..lets go.

In the car,
Maan: Abhay ye jo mansion he,Maansarovar wo kiska he?
Abhay: Maansarovar? Mene to iske bare me nhe suna! Anyways leave it,how is ur new project goin?

And the car went far away yet again to a lonely house.A simple house away from the human vicinity as demanded.

Adi: So,Maan sir did u like the house?
Maan: Perfect!
Abhay: Thank God.That means u vl be here for another month?
Maan: Who knows? We dont even know wat will happen in our next breath.As a matter of fact,i'm here at this moment!
Adi: he he he...
Maan: Adi,tum aj hi Delhi jao.Wo Mr.Sen ke sath meeting fix karna and final the deal.
Adi: yes sir.
Abhay: Maan,ab kam se kam is 1month ke liye to aram se raho and forget ur work.

Abhay and Adi left.

At nite,
Maan was all alone in the house.He came out after shower in his black vest and tracks.He was wiping his hair when he found some shadow on the wall.He turned around and found that a girl was sitting on the bed.She had a slender body and was wearing a white suit.Maan couldnt see her face as her silky brown hair was covering her face from him.He walked near her.

 Maan(self-thot): ye Abhay bhi na,apni harkato ko se baaz nhe ayega.Mene ladki dekhne ke liye mana kar diya to usey yeha bhej diya.Wait,koi sharif ghar ki ladki is time yeha thodi ayegi.Kahi ye koi...Let me ask.

Maan: kaun ho tum?

The girl was startled by his voice and lukd at him in fear.Their eyes met for the first time.Maan felt that he would drown in those deep almond brown eyes.She is such a serene beauty that he could meditate thinking just about her...She lukd pure,angelic...the purest being he had ever met..the innocence in those eyes,he felt he was being drawn to her..there was some inner pull...

She asked him in a feeble voice,'A..ap kaun ho?'
Maan: ye acha sawal he.Itne raat gaye,tum mere ghar me,mere kamre me aur mere bed me bhaiti ho aur mujse puch rhe ho ki me kaun hu!
Girl: ye apka ghar? Ye jagah kaun si he? Me kaha hu?
Maan: tum kya kisi pagal khane se ayi ho?ya phir tumhe sunayi nhe deta? Mene kaha na ye mera ghar he..

The girl got up from his bed and walked all around the house exploring the place.
Maan:arey! Me bolta ja rha hu aur tum ye kya ser kar rhe ho...
Geet: shh..ek minute dekhne dijiye me kaha hu.
Maan: huh!

On returning back to the bedroom she finds her reflection on the mirror.
Girl(pointing to her reflection): ye kaun he?

Maan ran his hand back on his hair.This is his second irritating nite in a row.
 Maan:tabse me bhi yehi pata karne ki koshish kar rha hu. Angry
Girl: ye me hu?

Maan rolled his eyes.
Maan:ha ye tum ho.Aur ye me hu Maan Singh Khurana.Ab tum batao ki tum yeha kyu ayi ho?
Girl: wo..apne mujhe bulaya.Isi liye me ayi hu.
Maan:mene? (self-thot)oh,shayad Abhay ne bulaya hoga.Aney do usey,ab to uski kher nhe.himat kaise hui uski?
(to the girl) dekho tum jaisa soch rhe ho,i dont want that.Lekin..u dnt hav to worry.I vl pay u for this nite.I know ek raat ek cal girl ke liye kaafi mehenga he.
Girl: bas! Dekhiye ap bina mere barey me jaaney aisa kaise bol sakte he?

Maan: Then spit it out! Who are u? Tum kar kya rhe ho?
G: me apne apko dhundne ki koshish kar rhe hu.
 Maan:oh! Ab samja.Abhay ne tumhe jaan puchkar mere paas bheja he,mera mazak udane ke liye.
G: me apka mazak kyu udaungi? Me to sach keh rhe hu.
Maan: Just shut up...Wats ur name?
G:wo..mujhe nhe pata.
Maan(smirks): great! Watever, u will stay here tonite.Kal subah Abhay ko aney do phir decide kartey he.

She nodded like an obedient child.

Maan: now why r u standing here? Go and sleep.
She quickly lied down on his bed.
Maan:arey..dekho..naam bhi nhe pata iska,suno ladki yeha nhe...
Before he could complete,she got up.
G:par mujhe neend nhe a rhe he.
Maan: so do u want me to make u sleep?
Geet:no! U can sleep.I vl b here only.
Maan: thats smart! Wat do u think? I vl sleep and u can get away with my things!
G: Ap humesha itni kadvi bate kyu kar rhe ho? Instead of helpin me u are scaring me!
 Maan: Really? Ab jis situation me me hu mujhe tumse pyari batey karni chahiye aur kya bulau me tumhe,honey..darling..ya fir mishty! Angry
G: Mishty? Kya ye mera naam he?
Maan: Ha,aj se tumhara naam Mishty he,samjhi tum!
Maan(self-thot): kya haalat kar di is ladki ne meri.Dimag kharab kar diya he!

After fighting for two more hours,
Maan: dekho ab bandh karo apna ye naatak aur mujhe soney do.
Mishty: me koi naatak nhe kar rhe.Aur me bhi thak chuki hu.

Maan:theek he.Tum us kamre me jake so jao.
Maan: ab kya?
Mishty:me akele dar jaungi.
Maan: to mere sath sone ka irada he kya?
Mishty: ap humesha aisi anab shanab batey kyu kartey ho? I vl sleep in that couch.
Maan:as u wish,mishty (in a mocking tone)
They have an angry eye-lock almost killing each other and they both went to sleep.

Maan:dekh liya! Ab batao?
Abhay:par Maan waha to koi nhe he.

Hope u like this.
Plzz let me know ur response!

NEXT : PART 3 : page 13

Edited by madhubala123 - 05 September 2011 at 5:17am

The following 113 member(s) liked the above post:

ssssmarsnehag10latsatalonerokzzlovelyninicukishroststar432Candy_jssony1990aisha_1998tulip_91fatiya52110sruthi8sonika1974gagsyPaingelasmi123thendral_111mans22prathyusmiling-Elfin-nazsijvarshakhedekararushi_059290860623sheetalvasaBkhasprincess_mimisupernasahuchingamingmamatha.NihsonMaangeetlove7preetymaaneetshruthiruchsjeyanthi123imli95greshuMeghPiyashisanam1234urashgirl000neha512Blushingqueenkhushboo22SphinxLadyArwen-eiya-am_sweet_pariRukhluvMaanamalu123ixraycherieLoverdmg_roks_antaraMina420puthridhz21dreamy4everjazzeretteamzu32Nav2010-SmexySmile-SayaneeH.LecterMsMovieloverangel_smilyShimmerrMayamaankabslocksmaanshiNeejuJeba.Rahmansanghita0000maaneetmaahimaaneetsangelBye_Bye_ifAwari_MaanZohamaaneetritzy09paponecon-Veritaserum-_AngelSonu_Krishnaluv94ramaheshSpeechlesssanu3108ambbihaAsh1991rsroopalinahtani88KaSh-Maneet-Fanshah10-afsha-namita25sweet scorpiomitzi11zaara2212_BlackPearl_seemamaryShalveTyro---nishu---6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6-Mounika-poongs123Little_Mermaid.chavvi16..tanya..tabby999abinash079todayzstarNeelambari..IsleOfCapriKrishna_Sourav

Post Reply New Post

Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Topic Starter Replies Views Last Post
A LOT LIKE LOVE#2-part 40 pg 128(LAST PART)

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 149 150

barkha_90 1198 454397 05 May 2012 at 3:10am
AR love story Part 23 P. 73- LAST PART

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 79 80

..Mira.. 634 270120 17 January 2012 at 1:00am
By chcolaty
FF:Chance pe Dance last part..(part 22) (pg.36)END

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 39 40

MeghAn_AnYaFan 312 55152 26 May 2011 at 10:28am
By sweetnandu
may be(mayur ff)part last part-page 27

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 29 30

adi_gupta 233 75651 06 September 2009 at 5:26am
By Yoshita0411
LOVE - AA ff PART - part 9 updt pg8

2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10

*~sneha~* 76 23488 30 August 2008 at 8:34am
By teenorchid

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category

Active Forums

Fan Fictions Topic Index

Limit search to this Forum only.


Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.