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Guys.. this is my first maneet ff... hope u guys like it... plz plz hit d like button if you like it... n plz do comment... it means a lot to me...
              CHAPTER 1

        It was early in the morning. Adi was busy making some arrangements of a tour. It was for his boss and it was not arranged as was ordered. Adi became very nervous- "Pata nahin, Maan sir kya kahenge! Aj to meri naukri gayi!!!" OuchHe came to meet his boss, Maan Singh Khurana. He entered into the Khurana Mansion and asked Nakul- "Maan sir kahan hain?"

-" Sahab to upar hain, who saayed exercise kar rahe hain."

-"Thik hai, tum jao. Main dekh lunga."

Adi came upstairs and knocked on Maan's room.

-"Come in."

Adi entered into the room and said- "Maan sir, good morning. wohh.. wohh.. flight ka ti..ti..ticket nahin mil raha hain."

Maan had just completed exercise, he turned angrily and said- "What? Adi, tum suva suva mujhse majak kar rahe ho kya?

-"Nahin sir mera itna majal !! DeadSachme ticket ka intejam nahin ho paya"

-"Adi, tume pata hain na, mera mumbai jana kitna jaruri hain?"

-"Ha..haan sir"

-"Kuch bhi karo,, mujhe kisi bhi haal mein Mumbai kal tak pouchna hain."

-"Sir ek rasta hain."


-"Sir, agar aap train se chale jaye to..."

-"Adi! Tumhara dimag kharap hain kya? Main, Maan Singh Khurana train se jau!"Angry

-"Sir, iske siva aur koi rasta nahin hain. Aap car se bhi nahin ja sakte, kyunki raasta bichme baris ki vajah se baandh hain."

Maan thought for some time. It was very important for him to attend the seminar in Mumbai, Especially for his younger brother, Dev. He had promised Dev that he would come and Maan was a man of his promise. Dadima also insisted him to go there. Dev had completed M.B.A and he with his friends is participating in this seminar. Here they would give a presentation and thus would have the opportunity to work with any company which would be highest bidder to the project. He also had business in his mind. He often employed fresh students; they always performed well and had very new concepts about business and Maan appreciated that. He finally nodded- "Okay Adi, but sabse best ticket hi lena. Aur iss bareme koi problem nahin chahiye mujhe."

-"ye..yes sir. Koi problem nahin hoga. Main ab jau sir?"







Geet was preparing her luggage and talking to herself- "Inn namuno ko to dekho.. sab mujhpe chor ke 2 din pehle Mumbai ghumne chale gaye sablok. Jaise mujhe ghumse ka saukh nahin hain." She stumbled on the side of her bed and got irritated- "Ab tu bhi mera dusman ban gaya hain? Saare papers collect karo, uparse project ka kaam khatam karo aur use leh bhi aao, aur uhan sab masti mar rahe hain!"

And she started singing- "Dost dost na raha...pyaar pyaar na raha."Broken Heart

She suddenly stopped-"Aree main pyaar ko kuyn kos rahin hoon? Pyaar hain kahan meri life mein? To sirf. DOST DOST NA RAHA.. DOST DOST NA RAHA"

She completed her packing and started to get ready for her journey to Mumbai. "Pata nahin kaisa rahega humara project! Babaji, kash hum logoko kahin achhisi job mil jaye. Babaji dekh lena thora ish bechari bachhi ko.Ermm

Then she looked at the clock and screamed- "Hey babaji, kitna late ho gaya hain!!!! Shockedagar main iss train ko miss kar gayi na, woh sab to mujhe kaccha chaba jayenge.. aur mujhe avi taiyar bhi to hona hai.. chal geet, ab jaldi kar".  She rushed to the bathroom to get ready.



Chapter 1

Chapter 2






Edited by Netz - 31 May 2012 at 10:54am

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hei nice startClap... geet s really soo cuteEmbarrassed n Maan is khadusErmm... still love himHeart

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hey netz 
really nice start , plz continue 
& must say , 
it will be intresting to watch Maan Singh Khurana travelling in train 
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lovely ...Interesting.
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continue soon


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nice start..Smile continue soon...Cool




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great part...

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