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Posted: 31 August 2011 at 10:18am | IP Logged

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Edited by Elizabeth Darcy - 31 August 2011 at 10:19am

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For the time being we will follow a format for the review, which will  be as follows:

 

PoV of Overall Epi:

 

Points that we liked:

 

Points that we disliked:

 

Mention Bloopers:

 

Msgs for the lead Actors (Sincere Comments):

 

Msgs for the rest of the cast../team/makeup/costume department:

 

Suggestions for handling of tracks:

 

Other suggestions:

 

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Come here once the epi is done to post your comments! Big smile

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Posted: 31 August 2011 at 10:20am | IP Logged

 

PoV of Overall Epi: Compared to the last two, a serious breath of fresh air. Quick, speedy, to-the-point and very, very crisp! You've managed to capture Kastur's impatience, the family's joy and sense of togetherness, and Mohan's own  feelings at coming home effectively without dragging it too much. 8.5/10

 

Points that we liked: The way the family sticks together in support of someone confronting Baapji. Their closeness to each other AND to Mohan has been portrayed REALLY well, and I'd like to see this continue. LOVED the Mohan-Baapji confrontation to bits! You have finally started giving Mohan's character some meat and flesh by having him take up convincing Baapji as a challenge. 

 

Points that we disliked: The Desai family teasing routine is getting a bit old. With  regards to Kastur the CVs tend to repeat a lot, by which people only tend to lose interest in the character altogether. With this also comes the entire  speculation of whether the degree is fake or not -- if it isn't, that actually adds more depth to  the character, and is useful when we finally see him as an agent for social change. Having him  NOT complete the degree will probably add to the bad-boy  Mystique but it will be another in a pile of inconsistancies regarding Mohan, and given the wealth of characterization from this epi I'd prefer  the former.

 

Mention Bloopers: None that I could see.

 

Msgs for the lead Actors (Sincere Comments): Harshad you were pure GOLD today!! The look HC as Mohan gave Baapji during that tirade itself spoke volumes! Big smile


Aasiya's doing her best in a role that has her doing little but running and heavy breathing. 

 

Msgs for the rest of the cast../team/makeup/costume department: Wonderful job with Mohan's look, I  must say Clap


Suggestions for handling of tracks: 

 Ya know, it would be lovely to see Kastur doing other things as well besides dreaming for Mohan.  Where was the smart gutsy Kastur who took on some arrogant Gujju hater and left her speechless? Where was the confident Kastur who decided she'd practice the Leela in the corridor if they refused to give her the hall?

  

Other suggestions: Good characterization is the key. So far so  good, and the pace is quicker, please make sure you don't drag the epis too much!



Edited by Elizabeth Darcy - 01 September 2011 at 2:02am

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Posted: 31 August 2011 at 10:52am | IP Logged

PoV of Overall Epi:

 I'll rate today epi at 9/10..It picked the pace today... to the point and crisp... beside capturing the entire gala house  bonding & excitement of reunion..  the show stealer execution was the 2 scene btw Mohan and Baapji..


Points that I liked: 

The opening of the episode  from where it endsThumbs Up

Kastur's feeling & recognizing Mohans touch and presence, her sheer happiness  changing to a confused look on seeing the man turn towards a Cig shop.

Kastur's  fighting within herself btw Imaginary and real world.

Mohan's  WT... The lingo that is often used in western part of the worldThumbs Up

Mohan dropping the Cig as soon as hearing Saroj's voice. excellently captured that respect there... & speaking in english... He has just returned & needs to speak that language..Thumbs Up

Kastur's desperation. excitement of learning Mohan in her room... (Asiya brilliant job...there)

Bhanu and fly reaction... on learning that Baapji has agreed,,, Saroj unable to believe the acceptance and knowing something is kept under wraps...


Mohan entry at the door with one eye... fantastically done...! Wanting to know how thing are before he enters... happy to learn how excited the fly is see him back.. Fantastic expression of innocence by HC


Bonding with Aditi on screen Thumbs Up

The show stealer sceen btw baapji and Mohan...Clap Please bring on more scenes like those..

HC was killer in those expression...Only Hc could have pulled it off...Clap


 

Msgs for the lead Actors (Sincere Comments):

Asiya... is good so far

HC... ur a rockstar.. keep it coming


Clap

Actor playing Baapji... we love to Love/hate you...U and Hc are the key to the show..Clap

Gopiben.. U still rock..at this age.Star


 

Msgs for the rest of the cast../team/makeup/costume department:

Dialogue writers... Fantastic job.. Keep the one liners they add essence to Mohan and baaji 

Give Muji Jha some liners too.. He is fab in tat arena


  Blooper: no MBA course & degrees is only for 2 years & not 4 years


Suggestions for handling of tracks:

Cv's am happy so far...

Please pleaseee keep the MBA Degree of Mohan for real.. That will add the depth to his Char and make it more interesting... for the viewers to keep figuring out..

 let the story pick up that pace. and get us Mohan;s frame of mind..what he thinking, why is he back, what next now that he is back In India

More Subtle FB on his survival in UK and how & why he developed those bad habits. 

Need to know how did Kastur got to know abt the alliance... how did she agree to it and what made her quit studying...?




 




Edited by purvimeh - 31 August 2011 at 7:26pm

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PoV of Overall Epi:  7/10 A lot Better episode Finally  The story Moved. Theys showed us a bit of mohan's thought process. They gave us a hint that saroj might be unaware of Mohur,mohan enetred his own house did a bit of masti but again shown that he didn't forgot his sanskaar so good. OH & He did got the degree so i guess that's good and our assumptions were wrong. Pheww. Now baap ji will melt as he said at the end of the day main bhi unhi ka pota hoon. I always had the is feeling Baap Ji is more Angry caz he thinks they deceived him and all he wants in a sincere apology. so i think it'll work out 

 

Points that we liked: Mohan's Relationship with the whole gala family it was adorable. Mohan on purpose hugging baapji and speaking english to see the reaction.

HC & aditi's bonding onscreen it was so so so cute>3 

 

Points that we disliked: Kastur as usual running just get over with it we've seen her doing that so much. What's with Saroj not knowing about kastur mohan? does she know or no? caz i got the feeling she doesn't and that's a big Uhghg how can she not know and that's unfair

 

Mention Bloopers: not really

 

Suggestions for handling of tracks: Plz pick up the pace. Give Mohan kastur more emphasis and focus Give them more to perform rather than running and heavy breathing. tell us kastur's story too 

 

Other suggestions:

 

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Edited by -Mausam- - 31 August 2011 at 1:13pm

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Posted: 31 August 2011 at 1:00pm | IP Logged
pov of overall episode- D best till date as they gave more screen space 2 mohan nd not his bad habits. iwud rate it as 8/10.


points i liked- Mohan and his family bonding wass really nice. Esp wid his sis,awwwe. felt gud dat he still respects baapji nd cares 4 his parents and bapji's feeling and wants bapji 2 4give him and his parents.


points i dislike- same scenes of kastur and her family but wid diff costumes.Sleepy. Y d hell is jitu making kastur dream more about mohan wen he knows dat it s deal. Y d hell bhanu don't say mohan about d deal, coz after getting bapji's 4givness wen mohan will cum 2 kno dat he was sold, he will b in utter shock and hopelessBroken Heart.
 

mention blooperrs- Din't find any.

msg 4 d leads- Harshad u r doing n awesum job, nd making us blive in a confusing char like Mohan. Ujust steal d limelite 4m d others wen u r onscreen.
Asiya u hv a vry sweet smile. U r also trying ur level best and doing a vry gud job.

msg 4 d technical department- Harshad's costumes r suprb. they suit him soo much. Tnx 2 d designers,Also thnx 2 d dialogue writer 4 givin harshad sum suprb lines, no matter 4 hw many mins he s onscree.

suggestion 4 handling d track- Pls stop kastur 4m running nd breathing heavily nd make her meet mohan fast. Giv more screen space 2 mohur nd don't awste time on desai's unnecessary teasin 2 kastur.


Edited by harshu.sundas - 31 August 2011 at 1:16pm

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