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This is my first ff so i hope you enjoy it :)

(btw if u find it interesting & u want me 2 continue wiv the story leave a comment )



What happens when your best friend falls in love with the person you hate the most?


  Angad Khanna:- A cheerful person who's never upset  + a popular cool dude who's very rich, handsome and a Casanova

Kripa Sharma:- Anjali's best friend, not so popular, very caring  and respects others + can sacrifice anything for her friends and family  

 Anjali Salve:- A beautiful hot chick + a popular girl whos very rich & Kripa's best friend + she can also sacrifice anything for her friends and family, shes a bubbly girl whos always been waiting for "the one" 


Kavya Nanda:-  Angad's childhood friend, a very cute/handsome boy who respects  other

 

Part 1

 

We see a big hall beautifully decorated, as we enter inside we see there's an engagement of Angad and Anjali, everyone's enjoying and having a wonderful time except, Kripa, Anjali's childhood friend 

 

Meanwhile, Anjali and Angad are talking and the house maid comes up to Anjali and

says: Tumna Kripa ko kahin deka hai

Anjali: Nahi lakin woh yahan kahin hogi'. kyun?

House maid: uska phone ayah hai

Anjali: uske ma baap ka phone hoga, meh dek ka athi hone

 

     * Phone conversation *

 

Anjali: hello

Mystery caller: bahar tumhare liye ek parcel hai

Anjali: thiek hai lekin m'.

 

    * Phone conversation over *

 

Anjali: ajeeb hai'. Kath diya phone

 

  * Anjali exits through the main door to collect kripa's parcel,

But she see no1 there.

 

On the other hand, Anjali's mother had been searching for Anjali and she bumps into Angad

 

Anjali's mom: ohh sorry '.. Tumna Anjali ko kahin deka hai?

Angad: kya yaar aaj sab gum kyun ho rahe hai

         *He whispers*

Lagta hai lost and found kholna parega LOL

Anjali's mom: huh   Confused '.  Tum ye kya bol rahe ho

Angad: kuch nahi'' Anjali yahin kahin hogi mein uuse  dhoond ke lata hone thiek hai?

Anjali's mom: thiek hai '.

 

Angad walks off to find anjali when anjali's mom stops him and says

 

Anjali's mom: aur u se kehna ki maa bahut hi gusay mein hai

Angad: thiek hai

 And he walks out the main door to find anjali

 

Meanwhile Kripa is lost in her dreams when suddenly shes interrupted with Anjali's scream.Shocked



Edited by cutestar12 - 13 September 2011 at 4:04pm

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part 1 is intresting,

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Originally posted by ashwini_k

part 1 is intresting,

Thanx  Smile

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nice start

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PART  2

 

Kripa rushes in the direction form where she heard anjali's scream she trys to find her when suddenly she sees anjali unconscious she runs to her but she was shoked to see anjali like that and that's when angad comes and sees Kripa sitting next to unconscious anjali.

 

Angad goes next to Kripa and he holds her by her shoulder says

 

Angad: Kripa, anjali ko kya hua... Kripa... KRIPA!!!

Kripa: an..ang... angad (stemmers) Stern Smile

Angad: tum yehi ruko anjali ke paas mein gadi le ke ata hoon

 

Meanwhile,  anjali's parents continue there search for anjali when they bump into Prithvi

 

Anjalis mom: tum ne Kripa, anjali aur angad ko kahin dekha hai

 

Prithvi: nahi auntie maine un logo ko nahi dekha hai ... Kyun

 

Anjali's mom : oo ho  prithvi mujhe aunty muth kaha karo .. meri image ke sath match nahi kartha

 

Prithvi: giggles... theek hai aunt... Oops sorry :D

Vasi app kripa, anjali aur angad ko kyun dhund hare hai

 

Anjalis mom: main anjali ko kabse dhund rahi thi or phir main ne angad ko pucha anjali ke bare main tho voh usse dhund ne ke chaker main chla gaya aur ab maine un dono ko khodiya ...aur ab muja lagtha hai muje Kripa ko dhund na chahiye ... shayad muje voh dono uss ke sath milja yeh

 

Prithvi: ap chintha mat kijiye varna ap ke chahre par wrinkles ajaiyen gay

 

Anjali's mom: theik hai lekin ab tum plz ghum math ho jana varna muje tum he bhi dhund na parega

 

Prithvi calls angad to find out where he is and if he knows where anjali is

 

On the other hand angad and Kripa admit anjali in the hospital

 

Kripa and angad wait for the doctors to come , and suddenly angad's phone rings and it was prithvi

 

    * Phone conversation *

 

Angad: hello

 

Prithvi: angad ... yaar tum kaha ho tum yh ha sab log pareshan ho ra ha

hai ... aur kyh anjali tum hare sath hai

 

Angad: hum hospital main hai ..

 

Prithvi: tum hospital main kya kar rahe ho ... sab theik ha na?

 

Angad: umm ... ha sab theik hai voh .. actually muje anjali behosh milie thi to main usse hospital le ke aya

 

Prithvi: voh theik tho hai na

 

Angad: doctors usse check kar rahe hai

 

Prithvi: theik hai .. main sub sambalonga tum anjali ka khayal rakh na aur muje inform kar te reh na

 

    * Phone conversation over *

 

As angad turns around to inform Kripa about prithvi's call he sees...Shocked



Edited by cutestar12 - 13 September 2011 at 3:53pm

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Originally posted by angelina_angel

nice start,

Thanx


Edited by cutestar12 - 03 September 2011 at 3:38pm

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Part 3

 

As Angad turns around he sees kripa fainted and he runs towards her and quickly holds her before she falls down,

Angad:- kripa...kripa.. ankee kholo ...nurse...doctor

As he tries to pick her up he sees blood dripping down her shoulder


A doctor comes and admits her, Angad was really worried for kripa

After sometime the doctor came out angad rushed to the doctor to ask was kripa

Angad :- doctor how's kripa is she alright

Doctor:- i am sorry

Angad:- i am sorry what do u mean by i am sorry

Doctor:- she slipped into coma

Angad was so shocked he dint no y but felt like his whole world had been stopped

Angad:- can i see her

Doctor:- ok

He goes in and sees a pale kripa he goes and sits on the chair next to the bad and holds her hand but he see there was something she was holding.

 

It was a scrunched up piece paper it had something written on it

 

Angad I don't know what's gonna happened to me but please don't tell anyone about this I know you are wondering how I knew something was going to happen to me. When I was waiting for you to come with the car someone from the back stabbed me but don't worry about that, I don't have much time… and I need you to do me a favour…. Plz get the keys 2 my apartment from anjali and take all my stuff (luggages) and shift it into another place and if anjali or sum1 else asks about me just make an excuse and tell them that u have dropped me at the airport ……..

 

 

 

Precap

 

The secret is revealed (Angad gets Kripa's secret dairy)

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Nice story 
looking forward for the next part Wink

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