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Posted: 29 August 2011 at 3:55pm | IP Logged
Finally something on Maaneet from my side too ;)

Well, peeps one among the readers here at IF, wanted me to write IT on Maan and Geet.

I am being an Old DMG fan specifically KaSh(AR/ArSh) fan have been writing several shots on them.

I have already written this oneshot with the title He&Her(armaan&his Shona) OS....

and here it is now...

Maaneet Version.


i have changed the title though, and here it goes...



||~Love-Lost-Feelings~||


Here you go Ree...and all other Maaneet Fans...


Enjoy!


Oneshot
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You took my heart and ran away
Forever in my heart you'll stay
No matter what we've been through
I'm going to keep on loving you

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The emptiness filled inside him was making him feel miserable. Never had he known that he will fall for a girl and that she will evade his thoughts so much that without her it will make him empty, desolate, a complete void.

Two days two hours twenty minutes and twenty seconds to be precise...
All he did after she left was to stare at the clock allowing time to pass and staring at the door as if waiting for her to come back to him, engulf him in her arms.
He wanted to feel her presence he wanted to inhale her scent, that made him lost on exotic world of its own.

This could be sounding perfectly absolutely filmy but that was only for them who have yet not met their soul mate. He felt all the so called love-lost-feelings all a dramatic damn things, until he met her, fell in love with her.

But...sigh

Misunderstandings...that changes everything. Their relationship was affected just because of this misunderstanding.

She came to know about it and kept herself mum. If only she would have questioned him about his past. If only he would have not tried to hide his unwanted past to enter in his present, if only...

She would have been with him now. She left him three days after she came to know about his bitter past, when she tried to ask him relating that, he choose to ignore all that,but she dint argued for that. When she tried asking him about that girl related to him in his past he choose to keep mum,but she was just patience. When she felt his pain from the past and tried to console him he shooed her off and went out leaving her, unknowingly making her believe that may be he still loved that girl from past and still was not over her and that the present,the today is a burden and just a social responsibility for him.

He never conveyed his true feelings, that he loved her and only her, to her making her misunderstandings look like a truth to her...and that has now destroyed that beautiful relationship of his and hers.

He was angry at her, his wife, for leaving him but he could not blame her, if he dint acted like a dumb jerk and speak everything to her, she would have been with him.




'Do you know how it feels like love someone who is in a rush to throw you away...
Do you know how it feels like to be the last one to know that lock of the doors have changed'




He felt himself murmuring those lyrics trying to ease the pain bubbling in his heart. He wanted to give halt to those feelings that was making his stomach churn with the emptiness , that was making him go teary with his throat gulping those un-spilled tears that was threatening to make their way to his eyes and follow its course like last few days of loneliness.

He needed her back. She has always understood him, but why did she failed to understand him this time. He wanted her to shout at him with him asking forgiveness with those puppy like pouting face and then she shaking her head and acting as if she is still angry trying to hide the fact that her anger has already melted. He wanted to hug her tell her that he love her.

But how can he now.
"Please be back Geet" he prayed with his hands folded in form of praying and head looking up.

Hours passed and he still sat on the very same sofa in the living room in their house staring at door and the wall clock simultaneously. Their house felt so died he wanted her back to make their house their home a lovely paradise.

He took the notepad beside him on the table. With the pen in his hand he started scribbling something as if pouring his heart all over that piece of paper to vent out his feelings. Being a writer lyricist and singer pen and paper is the best friend for him as he can share all the things with those lifeless materials.

But...'do you know how it feels to be away from you love?'

He wanted her. He needed her.

He was busy writing on the piece of paper thinking and penning it down. It was then when he was done, he felt someone's eyes on him.

He looked up to the door to find...HER! He looked up to find her standing at the entrance with her hands on her waist and legs and upper body of hers resting on with the support of the door.

He was sure that he forgot to blink his blurred eyes scared and not wanting her to fade away.
He stood at his place to take in the moment, her pace towards him finally halting at few inches away from him.

They stared at each other.


After what took several minutes he tried to utter something when she raised her hand to stop him to say anything.
She finally took few steps to close the visible distance between their bodies. Not leaving her stare in his eyes, she said "Don't...never did you speak when it was needed and so now you will keep quiet and just listen me..."She said that with the expressions and feelings completely unknown and alien.

She continued "I read your letter" he looked up thinking of the letter he wrote to her about everything every fact and truth that concerned them, after she left home but was not able to give it to her and so asked their common friend to pass the letter to her.

She continued further "and you know..." She started but stopped in between gulping down the tears in her throat and blinked her eyes trying to not let those tears fall right away, she took a deep breath and again they both shred a eye lock ..."I am sorry" he finally said when he dint heard her speaking further.

If you think words could justify those complains and pledges between the two here...then you are wrong...it was perfect to let the eyes and silence speak volumes for the both were unable to speak anything further.

She wanted to scold him yet love him. she wanted to shout at him for leaving her that day and letting her believed the false she wanted to shout at him for not clearing the misunderstandings she wanted to shout at him for not coming to her and speak the truth to her...but to top that she wanted to love him because she loved him. She wanted to love him because their separation has been taking a heavy toll on her.

He wanted to apologize her he wanted to love her he wanted to get a bit angry at her for not demanding him the answers for not fighting with him. But at the end he wanted to have her in his arms to say that he Love her like anything.

She was there, his love, his other half, the one he would really care about for all eternity. The one who had taught to live a life like a human a calm peaceful loving life. How much he loved him. He had to tell her...he dint wanted to wait further.

He knew she is back...he will clear every damn thing to her but before that he wanted to tell her that she is his life his everything to survive in this world.

She can see the love and wanting in his eyes too just like hers...she closed her eyes, letting few tears escape from her eyes. He moved more forward into her, wiped away her tears with his thumbs, and kissed her wet cheeks and eyelids. She opened her eyes to find his eyes filled with tears too. While she tip toed and wiped his tears with her hands.
He reached for her shoulders when she was done, pulled her body close to his masculine, well-built body. He held her close to his body, so that she could hear his heartbeat. Beating into one rhythm their heartbeats they both tried to calm themselves and feel each other.His arms seemed to enclose her like shielding her. So warm and toned, he shut out the rest of the world. It was just him and her now. She looked up at him. He looked down at her.

"I Love you Geet"he confessed with deep husky passionate desiring and full of love voice.

Tears flowed from their eyes, but they cared less... adoring each other with their arms wrapping each other they stood living cherishing the moment thoroughly...




Staring at the moon so blue
Turning all my thoughts to you
I was without hopes or dreams
I tried to dull an inner scream
But you...
Saw me through

Walking on a path of air
See your faces everywhere
As you melt this heart of stone
You take my hand to guide me home
And now...
I'm in love

You took my heart away
When my whole world was gray
You gave me everything
And a little bit more
And when it's cold at night
And you sleep by my side
You become the meaning of my life...





--- an year later ---


She took his hand and moved his hands to her bulging stomach. She rested them there.

She was nine months pregnant. Their child will be anytime in this world now...

They both looked at each other their hearts bursting with the happiness and excitement of becoming parents yet their eyes filled with slight tears feeling serene and beautiful.

"I Love you Maan" she looked up at him ..."I Love you too my baby...I Love you a lot Geet..."He bowed down planting a gentle yet love filled kiss.

She smiled.He smiled.

His hands cupped her face. Carresing her, Kissing her lightly on her lips he made her lay down. She was shivering slightly. She was shaking because of the cold. It was winter season.

He took of his shirt- leaving himself with only pants on, and took of her thin party-wear dress for her, as they just returned from the family n friends get together.

He unbuttoned her dress as quick as he could. He pulled it off her, leaving her body bare apart from her underclothes. He looked down at her belly, seeing its soft-contoured bulge. He smiled at it, put his hand on it. He lay his cheek down on it- it felt like he could feel it there, growing in its splendor. He kissed there and stood up covering her with the thick warm bedsheets and went to the wardrobe bring her and himself a proper comforting suit for the night.

Dressing her he made his way beside her in the bed. Carefully wrapping his arms around her he pulled the comforter over them...and they slept with that content smile adoring their face waiting for the new day to spend together with each other.


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Holding your hand
I won't fear tomorrow
Here where we stand
We'll never be alone

You took my heart away
When my whole world was gray
You gave me everything
And a little bit more
And when it's cold at night
And you sleep by my side
You become the meaning of my life
You become the meaning of my life
You become the meaning
You become the meaning of my life


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...

I really dunno how that came up...
How was it do let me know..

Do comment/criticize

And yeah the LIKE button is below :p

Waiting for you reviews.

 

:)


Thank You

God Bless You all,
Cheers,
-Sri :)

 


 

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Posted: 29 August 2011 at 4:27pm | IP Logged
hiii
congrats on da os
awesome 
loved it
loved maaneet
sooo cute
interesting concept
loved da ending
perfect
plzzz do write more
thanks 4 da pm

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Posted: 29 August 2011 at 4:39pm | IP Logged
a beautiful OS...im glad geet came back. The epilogue made he smile :D

thanx

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Posted: 29 August 2011 at 8:11pm | IP Logged
AWESOME OS!
loveeed it!

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Posted: 30 August 2011 at 3:25am | IP Logged
Hi dear,
It was a brilliant OS.Thumbs Up
You are a great writer...and know how to pen down emotions so well. 
I am amazed...u should write more...
Loved it to the core...Clap

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Posted: 30 August 2011 at 11:08am | IP Logged
nice os

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Posted: 30 August 2011 at 12:03pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by KaSh-Maneet-Fan

hiii
congrats on da os
awesome 
loved it
loved maaneet
sooo cute
interesting concept
loved da ending
perfect
plzzz do write more
thanks 4 da pm


Thank you! Smile

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Posted: 30 August 2011 at 12:08pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Shabz.

a beautiful OS...im glad geet came back. The epilogue made he smile :D

thanx

aww...thank you..Glad you liked it! :)

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