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Edited by Elizabeth Darcy - 12 years ago
For the time being we will follow a format for the review, which will be as follows:
PoV of Overall Epi:
Points that we liked:
Points that we disliked:
Mention Bloopers:
Msgs for the lead Actors (Sincere Comments):
Msgs for the rest of the cast../team/makeup/costume department:
Suggestions for handling of tracks:
Other suggestions:
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Edited by Elizabeth Darcy - 12 years agoPoV of Overall Epi: Too much emphasis on Baapji and his rule over the household and too little emphasis on the main characters. I wouldn't even have minded an equal balance with the other characters showing some traits besides their typical ones but even the spoof seemed more like an extension of what they feel about Baapji. The leads, Mohan and Kastur, are barely seen for more than a few minutes. Unfortunately this has been repeated since Mohan has stepped in - the family seems to get more screen-space than the leads themselves.
Points that we disliked: The masala segment wasn't all that necessary. Also, Baapji seems to be eating up a lot of space. I know he may be a primary hurdle for Mohan and Kastur later and therefore an important part of the story, but how is it fair that we see him for 3/4th of the episode, and a few minutes apiece for the leads?
Mention Bloopers: So far...none that I can see in this episode. But one major problem I would point out for one of the previous episodes is that Kastur's mother Shardha is complimented for maintaining peace finally between Pradeep and Jitu - but in the actual scene that's not the case. EVERYONE pitches in, including Pradeep himself, and it was mostly Kastur who eventually got Jitu to talk to Pradeep again. Considering that this track was used to introduce the Dharampatni concept, that winds up being a BIG blooper.
Msgs for the lead Actors (Sincere Comments): Both are doing a good job I feel, but it's hard to tell when they don't even have that much to do at this point...Harshad is doing a wonderful job with this searing wit that he employs in all his conversations with the Mama, Aasiya meanwhile is working hard with a character that seems real in some ways and unreal in others...there are a LOT of things about the character at this juncture that jar, and because we're told nothing about Kastur the person beyond her waiting for Mohan, that shows in her performance. I feel the problem is not in Aasiya's acting - because she's doing a very good job - but in the way the CVs don't seem to focus on developing the main characters and focussing on their families.
Msgs for the rest of the cast../team/makeup/costume department: Can't say much right now...
Suggestions for handling of tracks: Please, PLEASE, bring some balance in the portrayals of the characters, and please quicken the pace.
Other suggestions:
1. A good explanation for how Viku changes to the brat Mohan, as well as a good reason for why he doesn't complete the degree as his mother had wanted him to, despite his love for her. Right now it just doesn't add up.
2. A good explanation for why Kastur didn't continue her studies.
3. Now would be the right time to end speculations on whether Mohan and Kastur actually knew each other before he left.
4. Pay more attention to execution of scenes.