FF: After marriage - pg 50 20.10.2011

Posted: 12 years ago

Hi frnz... i have tried writing for the 1st time... plz bear the spells and my hindi 😊

All rasam's are over' and its time for Bidaai

Priya meets her mom, dad, Ayesha and nani' and tells them that she wants a gift while she is leaving'and priya's dad says.. bol beta tujhe kya chahiye'

Priya: main chahti hoon ' ke mujhe haskar bida kiya jaaye' taaki main haste hue apne jeevan ki shuruat karu'

With a heavy heart' sudhir says'. Haan beta aisa hi hoga..

Ram is stunned with priya's request and appreciates her courage with smile'

Everyone accompanies the bride and groom till the car'

Priya sits in car and Ram is about to sit when' sudhir calls Ram'

Sudhir: Ram Beta' thanks for everything'

Ram: sir, aap bade hai' plz thanks mat boliye'

Sudhir: Ram, ek baat kahu' plz mujhe papa bulana'. Sir nahi'

Ram: haan papa

Sudhir: ek aur baat karni thi' meri priya ka khayal rakhna.. woh bahut dikhati hai ki who strong hai' lekin ' aur apne dard ko nahi jatati hai' use samajhna  beta'

Ram: aap priya ki fikr mat kijiye..

Sudhir: ek aur baat beta' priya har khushi ke afsar par kulfi  khaati hai' woh shayad aaj tumhe nahi batayengi' lekin' aaj plz tum use kulfi khila dena..

Ram: thanks aapne bataya' aap priya ki fikr mat kijiye..

Finally, Ram sits in car'and asks driver to drive'

Ram takes off his mobile and sends a SMS in the meanwhile' and turns to priya' to see if she is ok'

And sees that priya is crying

Ram: priya tum ro kyun rahi ho???

Priya: Kuch nahi Mr. kapoor' aap nahi samajhenge'

Ram: Tum har baar mujhe underestimate kyun karti ho' batao mujhe main samjhunga'

Priya: ye aisa kyun hota hai mr. kapoor ki ek ladki ko apne sab kuch chodke ' sasural jaana padta hai..

Ram: who'. Unable to answer' says dekho tum mat ro dekho' main ye nahi seh sakta' achha thik hai'  dekho agar tum chaho' toh toh' tum chaho toh hum tumhare sath tumhare ghar chal sakte hai'. Ab yehi option hai'.

 

Priya: smiles at Ram's kiddish answer and says' kya?

Ram: nahi I am serious'.i will try to manage' for 1 day

Priya: smiles and says its ok Mr. kapoor' aisi koi baat nahi hai.. woh main thoda emotional ho gayi thi..

Ram: I know' waise main aise hi bol raha tha..:-)

Priya: stunned by his answer' matlab'

Ram: woh tum ro rahi thi toh mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha tha' toh isliye' lekin tum abhi kyun ro rahi thi' sab ke saamne toh badi brave ban rahi thi aura b..

 

Priya: woh sab ke saamne nahi ro sakti thi na Mr. kapoor

Ram: waise ek aur baat kahoon' maine tumhare liye 2-3 drawer extra khali karvaye hai' toh plz' agar tum tension ke wajah se' ro rahi ho toh'

Priya: thanks Mr. kapoor' lekin main thik hoon

Ram gets a call'

Ram: haan Vikram, kya baat hai'

Vikram' gaadi rokna toh zara left ek 5 min ke liye

Ram: driver gaadi rokna toh zara

Priya: kya hua Mr. kapoor

Ram: woh

Itne main vikram comes and sits in front seat and neha asks priya to shift '

Ram: vikram ' neha ye sab kya hai'

Neha' fatty let priya sit besides u' priya sharmao mat' tumhara hi pati hai' now c'mmon shift'

Neha sits and the car moves on'


ram: Tum dono mere car mein... mera matlab hai... humare car mein kya kar rahe ho???


Vikram: woh kya hai na Ram.. bachon ko neend aa rahi thi.. toh humne driver ko bacho ko nani ke yahan chod deneko kaha...

 woh kya hai na abhi shaadi ke kuch rasam baaki hai na

ram: ok

Ram: driver ye juhu beach waaale side se lena...

Vikram: lekin ram ye toh bahut longcut hai... wahan sab hamara intezaar karenge...

Ram: tu chup rahega plz...

Neha: kya vikram ... maine kaha tha na... ki let ram and priya go alone.. they wanted to have a romantic drive aur hum kebab mein haddi ban rahe hai...

Priya... shyingly holds her head and scratches her fore head

Ram: looks at priya and says aisa nahi hai... woh darasal.. mujhe thoda kaam hai... isliye

Neha: acha fatty...

suddenly ram asks driver to stop...

A man comes in and hands over a parcel to Ram...

Ram: chalo sab log bahaar... in front of juhu beach...

everyone gets down and ...

Ram: hands over kulfi to Priya and says... ye lo...

Priya: shocked... and says woh aapko ...

Ram: le lo jaldi nahi toh pighal jayega...

Neha and Vikram take one each and say... kya pyaar hai... abhi shaadi hui nahi ke... romance chalu... juhu beach pe... kulfi aha aha

Ram: will you both shut up now...

Vikram and neha: have their kulfi and go towards beach...

Priya: thanks...

ram: kisliye...

Priya: ye kulfi ke liye...

Ram: woh papa ne bataya ... i mean tumhare papa ne...

Priya: smiles and feels proud about Ram... and smiles blushingly... and says thanks Mr. kapoor

Ram: ab kisliye...
 
Priya: papa ko papa kehne ke liye...

Ram: smiles...

priya: aap kaise kulfi kha rahe hai... i mean germs...

Ram: maine isliye mumbai ke best ice cream parlor se mangayi hai...

they finish their kulfi's and Ram turns to see priya is having a moustache  of kulfi..

ram: woh... tumhare muche bangayi hai...

Priya: oh and licks it with her tongue...

Ram: unhhh... ye kya tha..
Priya: woh hanky nahi tha mere pass... aur aise kulfi khane mein maza kuch aur hi hota hai...

aap bhi try kariye na mr. kapoor...

Ram: no thanks...

Vikram and Neha... ab kulfi khana ho gaya ho toh chale...
sabhi raah dekhrahe hai humari...

they reach kapoor mansion...

Priya kicks the kalash and puts her ahnd print on the wall of kapoor mansion and when they are about to enter...
Ishika's mother - in law interupts and says..

ram: ye kya hai... priya ko god main uthakar apne kamre tak lekar jao...

Priya: blushingly looks at ram...

Ram: looking at priya.. nahi ab ye sab nahi..

Vikram: chalo ram ... utni hi excercise ho jayegi...

Priya: looks at Ram and says no through her eyes...

Ram : through his eyes says it has ti be done...

Finally, ram picks her up... priya puts her hand around him,,,, and takes her to their room...

Ram says in a slow voice to Priya...
Priya... tum sirf dikhti patli ho... par bahut bhaari ho..
priya smiles blushingly...
 and replies...
abhi toh daadi ne ghee khilaya bhi nahi hai aur... aapko main abhi se bhaari lag rahi... hoon...
both smile and ram and priya enter their room...

Vikram and neha stops others from entering and says... chalo lets leave them alone...

In ram's room: ram lets priya get down and priya's mangalsutra gets tangled around Ram's sherwani...

Ram says: priya... tum ruko main nikal ta hoon... he untangles it and ram and priya look into each others eyes and get lost ...

when suddenly, vikram and neha enter their room and both get away from each other...

Vikram says ... ram tu chal toh zara bahaar..

Neha... Priya tumhe kuch dena hai... zara ek minute and neha locks ram's room from inside...

... to be continued...
Edited by lgr1210 - 12 years ago
Posted: 12 years ago
very nice ... hope atleast some of the romance is shown in todays epi 😊
Posted: 12 years ago
Wow thats cho cute i loved it ❤️  😳 😳 😳 😳 
Posted: 12 years ago
is this fan fiction or real? 
Posted: 12 years ago
 lgr1210, Brilliant attempt. 👏
Very well written...love is in the air :)

Keep it up...waiting for the next post :)

😍

Posted: 12 years ago
nice...
you should forward it to cvs and ekta...
scared we will see more sighing and what not...hopefully kulfi...that was really nice.
Posted: 12 years ago
Awww sho chweet!!!
Upd8 soon
Posted: 12 years ago
hey vry nice pr Ram ne Priya ko utaya..cnt go well..cauz Ram so fatty n its just impossible for him...bt nice writing Keep it up..n left d writing so suspense plz do continue fast it ws good...
Posted: 12 years ago
very cutely written loved it ...cheers sree
Posted: 12 years ago
AMMAAZZZINGLYYY WIRTTEN
LOVEDD IT
PLEASEEE WRITE MORE
IF POSSIBLE PLEASE PM ME
AWESOME JOB😛

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