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sania_58
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RACE, THE CHASE BEGINS ( ACP Pritviraj & Inpector Kaya Sehgal)(RP fic)
Teez barish ho rahi thi,raat ke kareeb do baaj rahe hai.Ghane andhere main ek headlight dikhti hai,shayad ek bike aa rahi hai dur se.Bike se ek ladka utarta hai.uska age 26-27 saal ke aas-paas hai.Ladka puri tarah se bheeg chuka hai.Woh samne ghar ke taraf daudta hai.Pockets ke keys nikalta hai.uske haath kaap rahe the,dekh kar lag raha tha ladka kaafi ghabrahaya hua hai.Jaldi jaldi darwaza kholne ke chakkar main uske haath se keys gir jaata hai.Phir bhi woh keys utha kar darwaza kholta hai.andar jaa kar acche se darwaza bandh karta hai.aur aapna laptop on karta hai.Bahar tabhi tez barish chal rahi thi.achanak bijli chamakti hai.uss light se hum dekh sakte hai, darwaje ke baahar ek figure black raincoat pahen kar khada hai.woh dheere dheere pocket se kuch nikalta hai.tabhi phir se bijli chamakne ke light se hum dekh sakte hai who chiz ek gun hai.woh figure door par do baar fire karta hai, but koi awaz nahin aata,coz gun par sliencer lagaya hua tha.woh figure andar aata hai, andar betha hua aadmi chauk jaata hai,par kuch karne se pehle hi woh figure uss aadmi ke sar par goli maar deta hai.Phir woh figure laptop ke paas jaata hai.but alas!tab tak woh koi mail kisi secret account par send ho chuka tha.Woh figure laptop par kuch der tak kuch karne ki kohsish karta hai.Phir laptop utha kar phenk deta hai,aur phir bahar aa kar sunsan sadak par andhere par kahin ghayab ho jaata hai.
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Interesting prologue!!!!!!
The title is very nice and apt for a thriller!!!!!
The story starts with a murder setting the mood of the story ahead!!!!!!
Someone is killed while sending a message, rather to keep hinm from sending that message!!!!!
But that message has already been sent!!!!!!
Probably that man was an important informer!!!!
A very mysterious beginning to a thrilling chase!!!!!! 
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