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Posted: 04 September 2011 at 5:17am | IP Logged
am waiting for a little bird 2 come out n give something 2 read abt.when r u posting dear.tc
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Posted: 05 September 2011 at 6:37am | IP Logged
"Jab kisi ko beti paida hoti hain, tab wo baap, pehle chinthith hota hain, beti paida hogayi, vuski vivaah kaisa karna, vagaira vagaira. main bhi koi kam nahi hain. jab meri beti paida hogayi, tab main bhi vaisi hi socha. kyun ki main vus samay mein itna loss mein ki , main apni saari empire, sharma empire ko khone ke prayas mein ho. Lekin meri maa hain jo mujhe strength diya .

                              Meri maa ne mujhse bas yehi keh di ki "lallu, kachu chinta mat karo, teri beti ne sukravaar aur radhashtami ke din paida ho gayi hain. swayam lakshmi devi ka avtaar radha devi ka preti roop hain lalla teri beti. " meri maa ki baat se mujhe bahut sakhoon mila tha.
              
                              Meri maa ki ek ek baat sach huyi hain, the next day itself an unexpected tender was granted and from that day i never look back in these eight years. Vus din hi main ne nirnay liya hain ki kabhi meri beti ki aankhon mein nahi dekhungi. Lekin vo itni buddhi ki mujhe se ek bhi nahi maangoongi, main hi vuski khwasih ko jaankar poori karte aaya that, itni din. Lekin aat saal ke baad vo mujhse ek baat maangi thi. Kanha ki mandir sthapan karne ka, main jaanta hun ki vrindavan mein do kanha ki mandir sthaapith nahi ho skate.Lekin main meri laadli ka khwaaish bhi adhoora nahi chosakte ho.Isliye maine nirnay liya ki purohith se haath jodo. " Purohith mera vyaapaar mein mera pehla competetor hain. Maa bhi yehi chahti hain, takhi vo apni priy saheli ka parivaar apna sakhogi. Main ab jaarahe ho purohith parivaar se haath jodne ke liye, meri beti ki khwaaish poori karne ke liye"
Mohan wrote this in his dairy and left over.
 
                         Sheetal came from mandir to home and loudly called "radhika bitiyaan"

                       "Main yaha hun amma" came a voice from pooja place.

                         Sheetal went there and said "beti"

                        Choti Radhika slowly turnde her face. A small girl who had a charming face with smile on her lips always; who was weating a white colour lehenga , smiled to sheetal and ran to her " ammmaaa"

                    Sheetal kissed her  and said "beti ; aaj main bahut kush ho. teri wajah se aaj mer barshon ki khwaaish poori ho rahihain. Tukhe jo kuch bhi chaha pooch lena main poora karungi."

Radhika: Amma! wo meri kanha ki mandir ka kya hua.

Sheetal: Beti teri kanha aur Radhika ki moorthi jaroor sthapith honge vuske saath meri Barson ka khwaaish bhi poori honge.

Radhika was abt to say something when devki called her. She ran to her mother.

At purohith house,,,,,,,,,,,

Mr.purohith:Thanks , Mohan bhai, aap mera paas aaya tha bas wahi enough tha, aap ki khwaaish jaroor poori hongi aur, mandir mein kanha ki moorthi aapke taraf se hi sthaapith honge.

Mohan: Thanks , Raj bhai, yaha aate samay mein main sirf meri beti ka khwaasih porri karne aaya tha. Lekin yaha aane ke baad mujhe maaloom hogaya ki , main itni saalon se kya missi kiya tha. mujh maaf kar dena.

Mr.Purohith: Arey aap kaise baatein kar rahe hain. Aap toh humesha best hain, aur vyapaar ka sarv sootr achi tarah paalan kiya tha. Aur hum donom ke beech ek choti si commnication problem tha,aur jo kuch bhi hua kanha ki kripa se hua tha,.

Mohan: Aap bilkul sach keh rahe hain. Aj se hu donom ghar se hi nahi , vyaapaar mein bhi achi dost rahoge aur jo kuch bhi competition hoga healthy competition hoga, agar aap ki aitraaz na ho toh.
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Mr.Purohith: Yahi baat ka barson se mera intezaar hain

Mohan: aaj mera zindagi k sabse kushi ki baat hain. Hum auy ko dekhna chahte ho, aunty kahaan hain.

Mr.purohith : aunty vaishali ji aur bachon ko lekar maatarani ka mandir gaye hain.

Mohan: koi baat nahi main intezar kaoonga.

At sharma's mansion.,,,,,,,,,,,,,

Sheetal:"devki"

Devki:jee maaji

Sheetal> jaldi jaakar tayar ho ja, mandir jaana hain

Devki; lekin maa, aap subah gaya na mandir.

Sheetal: main mere liye nahi tere liya poch rahe ho, ka apni saheli se nahi miloge.

Devki: vaishali, kya vaishali aagay hain mandir.

Sheetal: haan bahuriyan, bachon ko saath lekar aagayi hain.

Radhika: ammaji , kya aap mandir jaa rahe hain?

Devki: ab aagayi tu, mandir ki baat suna diya toh aane ka an laga tujhe.

Radhika face was sadden and she hid herself behind ammaji

Sheetal: bachi par kya hain tera hukum, jakar tayar ho ja

Devki: nahi maa , main vuse nahi sata rahe ho, main jaavungi lekin raj bhaiyya na maan lenge.

Sheetal: raj , mohan ki tarah nahi hain bahuriyaan. Vo toh jaroor maan lenge.

Devki: Radhika jara tum jakar tayar ho jaa, tum bhi aana hain na beti.

Radhika went off and devki then said to sheetal "toh radha apni kanha se milne ka samay aaogaya tha."

Sheetal" bahuriyaan, jyaada asha mat rakho, niyati ka faisla hum nahi jaante hai na"

Devki: "maa ye radha humesha apni krishn ka hi hogi. "

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Posted: 05 September 2011 at 6:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Myra.nelly

Good job,bring soon part 1!
THANKS DEAR HOPE U LIKE IT
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Posted: 05 September 2011 at 6:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by masumasrilanka

WAITING FOR THE STARTER,SO DAT I CAN HAVE MAIN MEAL.PLS DO GIVE SOON,TC
here's ur main meal enjoy dearWink
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Posted: 05 September 2011 at 6:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by fatssrilanka

Thnx for the PM.Waiting for your FF to unfold.
thanks dear but u have to wait a lot for the unfold yaar
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Posted: 05 September 2011 at 6:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by masumasrilanka

am waiting for a little bird 2 come out n give something 2 read abt.when r u posting dear.tc
the little bird is here to give u some thing to read, i think u like it
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Posted: 05 September 2011 at 7:04am | IP Logged
Very nice,struglling a bit with hindi but its ok...so the families are friends, waiting for devs apearence maybe at that mandir
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Posted: 05 September 2011 at 7:08am | IP Logged
Wow! Nice FF. Waiting for both Dev & Radhika to grow up.

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