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zesty.me

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Posted: 27 August 2011 at 4:06am | IP Logged
hey friends..am yashashwi..am a patron of this website..just love reading a lot..your ffs really inspire me to write something...i had started writing last year but somehow lost my inspiration..recently..i have started writing again..so wanted to share it with you guys..haven't written it as yet..just wrote the prologue..and thought to share it with you guys..i am going to continue it anyway but if u guys don't find it interesting i won't post it here..anyway it wasn't actually a ff..but i've renamed my characters into our favorite armaan n riddhima..like u all am a huge fan of ksg..so here goes my ff..



                              

Feud...battle between LOVE and OBSESSION..!!


 PROLOGUE


            Beep! Beep! Beep!

I wiped off my tears and unlocked my phone only to find three texts from HIM, stating his apology. Unable to control my emotions I started weeping again. Throwing myself on the bed and clutching the pillow tight, I sobbed louder.

What was his fault? Why is he apologising to me? Was he responsible for everything that am being so mean to let him take all the blame? Even when I know we are equally responsible for the mistake we've committed together, why am I still cursing him alone for everything? Am I not taking him for granted? Knowing the fact that he wouldn't let a fly hurt me, am I not intentionally holding him accountable for everything we both did? Why is he always there to be my apologist even when am on the wrong side of the law? How can he be so altruistic all the time to overlook all my mistakes?

"ARMAAN" calling...my inexorable thoughts were interrupted by my buzzing phone.

I disconnected his call. Never before was I so apprehensive in receiving his call, but today. I just couldn't muster up enough valour. My phone started buzzing for the umpteenth time and I couldn't reject it yet again. I had to sort out everything before it's too late.

 

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Posted: 27 August 2011 at 4:12am | IP Logged
intersting concept...

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thank you so much for the comment

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Edited by zesty.me - 24 December 2011 at 4:27am

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man its awomse..yaar loved it waitng for more... eagerly ...hope u write more... Star

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man its awomse..yaar loved it waitng for more... eagerly ...hope u write more... Star

i will surely write..thnx for the comment

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lovely
pm me when you update next time 

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Originally posted by funkybratz

lovely
pm me when you update next time 

yeah i will...thanks for the appreciation..:) 

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