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Maaneet FF ~ Kasak THREAD 3 ~ Last Pt 60 Pg 27

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Posted: 27 August 2011 at 3:51am | IP Logged

"Kasak usko Kehte hain jo Dil ki Dil mai reh jaye, Jo marke bhi na poore hoon unhe arman kehte hain". So when u like or wish some thing (it may be ur love) to be yours and don't get the same. it creates some sort of feeling that whenever u think of it u will get upset. So this is 'KASAK'.
In simple words it means 'un easyness','lust',something which will make u go crazy!!!

This is about how two people who hated to see each others face fall madly in love with each other but they don't accept it.. n when they accept it in their hearts.. they r scared not to accept it to each other. But the destiny that bought them close.. bring them so close that they have no other choice left other than accepting their love..

Story so far

Sometimes in this lifetime,
we meet a special soul,
who fills our very essence,
to almost overflow,
we drink the cup of friendship,
it tastes like ruby wine,
and you know within your heart,
this meeting was Divine.

This soul that lives within your heart,
no distance can prevail,
an inner spark, within the heart,
becomes a Holy Grail,
the starting of a journey,
in which you both shall be,
a reflection of each other,
for all eternity.

Maan Singh Khurana-  MD of Khurana Constructions.. 26yr old bussiness tycon, sucessful famous rich.. He was a khadus boss.. dusht danav.. but when someone entered in his life.. he changed completely.. her eyes.. her eyes are the mirror of his heart.. as if he cud see just himself in those eyes..he is in something called love.. & is looking forward to spend his whole life.. with his Jaan..

Geet Handa-  She came from HP to fulfill the needs of her family.. as it is her responsibility to do so.. her family is more than everything to her.. she is scared that her family will not accept her when they will know the biggest truth of her life.. but she has trust on her love.. her life.. & she know he will be there with her always..

They are in love with each other.. the first day they saw each other.. they felt related to each other.. their eyes.. their eyes connected them with each other.
The Kasak that they felt.. made them realize.. that they are made for each other..

He realized that he was in love.. her pain made him realize.. her eyes.. he can't bare tears in her eyes.. that Kasak.. which haunted him day & night made him realize that he was in love..
Wo kehte hain naa.. kisi cheez ko sache dil se chaho to puri kayanath tumhe us se milane me jut jati hai..

She knew she felt something for him.. but what.. she didn't knew.. his care.. his concern for her.. made her realize that he loved her.. & that she is also in love with him.. she had always got opposite of what she wanted.. so how cud someone love her but she knew this is what life is.. it never gives u what u want.. but she knew it gives the best for u.. she was scared.. she didn't wanted to loose her love.. her life.. she thought this was a dream.. which will break when she gets up the next morning.. but he made her realize that this is the truth..

Jab kisike sapne kisike armaan ban jaye, Jab kisiki hasi kisiki muskan ban jaye, bepanah pyar kehte hai use jab kisiki saanse kisiki jaan ban jaye

They faced each & every obstacle together. How diffiicult the situation be.. but maan & geet always succeed. Even destiny could not not apart them. And love always finds its way.. to sweep into ur hearts & make ur live worth living.
A special world for you and me
A special bond one cannot see
It wraps us up in its cocoon
And holds us fiercely in its womb.

Its fingers spread like fine spun gold
Gently nestling us to the fold
Like silken thread it holds us fast
Bonds like this are meant to last.

And though at times a thread may break
A new one forms in its wake
To bind us closer and keep us strong
In a special world, where we belong.

Link to Thread 1 (Pt1 -32)
Link to Thread 2 (Pt 33- 55)

Part 56-  Below
Part 57
Part 58
Part 59
Part 60


She tried to get involve in some work.. she asked dadimaa if she can help in the kitchen..
Dadi' Bete abhi abhi tho aap theek huyi hain.. aur agar maan ko pata chalega tho hamari tho khair nahi..
Geet' dadimaa mai kya karun.. mujhse yeh kuch ghante bhi nahi kat rahe hain unke bina..
Dadi' Geet aap unhe call kijiye.. phir tho aapka dil lag jayega na..
A smile formed on her lips.. she nodded her head & went towards her room.

These few hrs were like years for her. She just couldn't divert her mind. Her heart raced so swiftly not letting her calm down. She knew that now he was fine & was coming back to her, but still until & unless she will see him.. how could she relax.
She sat near the window waiting for his arrival.
Unko call karun ya nahi.. nahi nahi.. he must be busy tabhi tho unhone bas sms bheja.. mai unhe tang nahi karungi.. waise bhi woh abhi thodi der me hi aa jayenge.. a smile touched her lips..
She hid her face in her palms.. feeling really shy as if she was going to meet him for the very first time. She smiled at her own thought.

Suddenly her whole body shivered in his warmth. He wrapped his hands around her from the back. She closed her eyes knowing that it was him.
Maan' Jaan.. he said in a husky voice, his hot breath fanning on her neck.. making her shiver even more. She closed her eyes even more tightly but only if she could. He slightly slipped her sleeve from her shoulder, kissing on her exposed skin. She quivered only to make him tighten his grip.
Maan' Jaan.. aankhen kholo na
She fluttered open her eyes only to find the warmth disappearing. She looked here & there trying to register that it was just a dream. She laughed at her own plight & buried her head into her knees.

It was already 2 hrs since she was waiting for him to arrive. She was really tensed now.. abhi tak aaye kyun nahi..

I count the hours,
I count the days.
How much I miss you,
I count the ways.

I miss your voice,
I miss your touch.
And I miss the face,
That I love so much.

How to describe it,
There is now way.
I walk around,
In a permanent daze.

I long to feel,
Your warm embrace.
And to see a smile,
Upon your face.

I will not sleep,
Won't close one eye.
Until you're home,
Safe and alive.

While you're overseas,
And I'm safe at home.
I think of you out there,
In danger and alone.

This is the life you've chosen,
And I can't change your mind.
You've found your inner bravery,
And now I must find mine.

I miss you so much,
To the moon and the stars.
And this feeling will go on,
Until you're safe in my arms.

She remained worried until she knew he was there. His aroma.. she knew it was him. She ran.. ran like a fool.. ran for her life.. until she slipped & fell.. fell in his strong arms. A tear escaped her eye. She straightened herself & looked deeply into his eyes. A smile touched her lips.  She wanted to drain into those eyes.. even if God would ask for her life.. she would not deprive.. only if she was allowed to die after his sight. She had turmoils of emotions running through her.. she couldn't hold back anymore. She hugged him.. as tightly as she could.. not letting go. He hugged her back.. trying to soothe her. She sobbed.. let all her pain out.. yet there was so much anxiety & fear left inside her.. fear of losing him.. that had haunted her the last night.

It felt as if their story had again come where it had started from. That Kasak which they thought had ended, had actually never ended. That Kasak was still alive in them not letting them apart from each other. She broke apart halfheartedly & looked at him. Maan knew how deep were the emotions running through her right now.
Geet' Maan.. kahan the aap.. aise koi bina bataye jata hai kya.. she said between sobs. Before she could say anymore, he took her complaining lips in. His hands wrapped around her pulling her closer to self. Her hands eventually got circled around his neck. How much she was dying for his one touch, only she knew. The kiss grew deeper & more passionate. Their tongues played in their own rhythm. She moaned his name in his lips only to arouse him further. The kiss grew deeper & deeper until they broke apart panting & breathing heavily.

Maan carried her in his lap & took her to her room. He made her lie on the bed & tucked the spread around her properly.
Maan' tum abhi puri tarah se theek nahi ho gayi ho..
Geet' Par maan..
Maan' shh.. chup bilkul chup.. ab tum aaram karo.. I know raat ko theek se soyi tak nahi hogi.. aur haan tumhe yaad hai ki aaj tumhara dr ke sath appt hai??
Geet' Woh..
Maan' Dekha.. I knew that.. ab tum aaram kar lo thodi der phir ready ho jana.. ham aaj hi jayenge dr ke paas..
Geet' Par maan ab tho mai theek hun na.. tho phir..
Maan' Geet.. mai kuch nahi sununga..
She twisted her lips & drifted into deep sleep holding his hand. He also dozzed off with her.. didn't knew when.

Last day was not easy for him.. spl without his jaan. Nobody could understand how he has managed the last day. But it was for the sake of his jaan, so how could he deny Mr rathode.

Appt with dr

Will PM later
Thanks a lot for all ur love & support..
Wish to recieve even more in this thread..
So plz give me my likes & comments
Love u all lots..


Edited by mahimak - 29 October 2011 at 8:26am

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