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Yippe pg 90!! Ab mujhe UPDATE
CHAHIYE with PM

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Hahahaha le mai aagayiii Tanya ROFLhahahaha thnku soo much for sending me the link from whr i stopped hahahaha otherwise mai kan fused ho jhatiROFL...damn reading ur updates aftr soo long really missed it allEmbarrassed...sooo sorry i lost in touch with them heheheTongue
Ok ab ready ho jao for my spamming-giriROFLROFL

Part 10 - WOW Awsummm cuteee updateEmbarrassed...hayee KR kitchen scene was too adorableEmbarrassedEmbarrassed hehehe Rey marring chauka seeing mauka hahaha but bechare ke haath mei maarr diya chaukaROFLROFL
OMG i cudnt stop laughing at the candel-lite breakfastROFL...pehle jab candles parha tou i was like hai ye subah subah candles kaha se aayaStern SmileLOL...hahahaha that's Rey ka R effectROFL
Superb updateeeClap...loved it...hopping to next one hahahaLOL

Part 11- OMG another Superb updateThumbs Up...totally loved it...hahaha loved the way Kria gave the idea to Sharon hehehe and the hospital Swaron scene was really Superb and cuteeEmbarrassede...WOAHH Swaym ka behaviour at first was shocking hehehe but really that was written AwsumlyClap

Part 12- WOAAAHH i soo luv this update it was total DIN-CHAK ClapEmbarrassed
hahaha OMG that was a dreamShocked dash dash humein ff mei bhi sapna dikhayingROFLROFL
but aaahhh it was still awsummmEmbarrassed...i enjoyed every bit, Swaym and Sanchita ka plan LOLhahaha dat was nice and then the whole team coming together awwEmbarrassed, Kriyaansh ke never-ending cute nok-jhoks hehehe soo adorable, and wow jelo Sharon hahaha it was jus SuperbClap, cant wait to read moreeeEmbarrassed

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OMG Yogini ka Spamming made me ROFL so much ROFLROFLROFL

Ok back to the ff OMG kya promo diya thank god i'm reading now warna mai tou pakka tumhe pagal kar detiROFLROFL...kamre mei band karwa diya dono ko damn too good hahaha okEmbarrassedLOL hopping to the updateTongue

Part 13- Awsummm updateeClap...yayyy partyyt ime lots of fun and masti hahaha, love the way you wrote about all guys going gaga over their girls hehehe and nice twist with Swaym goign to Sanchu hahahaLOLTongue
hahaha Nicky ke drinking plan hahaha omg cant wait to read all of thatROFL...loving the whole making Sharon jelo trackLOL

OMG soorry i know i'm super lateTongue but Congoos on ur becuming MaasiHugEmbarrassed hehe mai bhi recently Phupo bani EmbarrassedLOL 

Part 14- WOAAAHHH dat was Super-Awsum Partyyy...hahaha Sharon ki jeousy drinks mei duba diya usse hehehe, awwiieee Kriyaansh ka hugEmbarrassed , hehehe awsum song selection for Sharon ka danceThumbs Up and OMMMGGGEEE Nil ka Proposal ROFLhahahaa it was totally Super-Rocking heheheEmbarrassed...and Vicky trying to propose to NehaLOLEmbarrassed hahaha soo cuteee and just gud friends aww reminds me of Rey ka situation hahahahaROFL
Love the ending damn dat was sooo Ah-mazinggEmbarrassed...Kria kissing his cheeksDay Dreaming and Sanchu telling him to wait and see and then teasing him hahaha love the bro-sis relationEmbarrassedLOL
Super-Super Awsummm updateeeClap

Chalo now baaki updates ka review kal aake deying LOLLOLTongue

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see it reached page 90 ab toh update kardo!! plss!!!


edited comment on page 87!!


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awesome update...smrti bhi uney accept kar diya...pls pm me...

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Posted: 26 December 2012 at 4:38am | IP Logged
pg 90 
ab toh update kar do.

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sorry for l8 upd8 guys...
here's the next part...

Part 18-

Sanchita in the meantime, texts the whole gang that KriYansh & SwaRon have bcm a couple...
SwaRon  & Kriyansh leave the atrium with a pleased Sanchita behind!
Sanchita: Chalo acha hain...  mera plan successful! Yaha meine Sharon & Swayam ko KR ke baare main bataya aur waha se... dono couples mil bhi gaye! Issey kehte hain- EK TEER SE DO SHIKAR! Waah Sanchita Singhania! *pats her back* U're tooo good!
Next Morning---
ReYam are in the Boys Locker Room and are discussing about THEIR girls.
Rey: Swayam sach batau toh... I really love this girl yaar...
Sw *pretending not 2 know*: Kaunsi ladki Rey????
Rey: abbey! teri second bf...
Sw: second bf??? meri toh ek hi bf hain- teri behen Sanchita. Tu baat kiski kar raha hain?
Rey *turns ard frusturated*: abbey! teri team ki captain...
Sw: Meri team ki captain... yaad nahi aa raha... kaun...
Rey: Abbey... woh apni... *blushes*
Sw: Saale sharma aise raha hain jaise ki aaj teri shaadi hain Kriya ke saath!!!!
Rey ka chehra lights up like a 1000 watt ka bulb...
Rey: Sacchi! Haye... tere muh main... sweets n chocolates yaar!!
Sw: sweets n chocolates nahi Rey... its ghee-shakkar!
Rey: whateva... same thing na waise bhi... but seriously yaar... aisa ho jaaye na toh bas... *blushes again*
Sw: shakkal dekhi hain apni Rey... kaise typical love-struck boy ki tarah expression hain tera...
Rey: waise... mein ab jaake woh feeling feel kar paa raha hu... joh tu Sharon ke liye feel karta hain!
Nilesh: woh tum dono karoge hi na... Love-struck puppies...
ReYam turn around to see the rest of the boys...
ReYam: sup guys...
The boys enter the LR widout sayg anything & stand in front of them...
Sanchita (outside the BLR): yaha boys in dono ko 3rd degree torture se inka jeenaa haaraam kar denge... aur waha girls, Kriya aur Sharon ko questions se maar daalengi! Bechaare couple ko bhi kya-kya sehna padta hain... All the best KriSha & ReYam!!
In BLR & GLR-
ReYam/KriSha are sitting & are surrounded by Vicky, Nil, Amar & Bharat/ Neha, Simmi, Rinni & Vishakha.
Vicky: kya yaar Rey aur Swayam? tum dono hume apne buddies maante ho na?
Kriya: ha par...
Amar: toh phil itni bali baat tum dono ne humse kyun chupayi?
Sw: arrey tum log kya bol rahe ho yaar?
Rinni: yahi... ki hum sab ko pata lag chuka hain hain!
Kriya: kya pata lag gaya hain?
Boys/Girls: ki tum dono relationship main ho Sharon/Swayam aur Kriya/Rey (respectively) ke saath!!!!
ReYam/KriSha: WHAT???? TUM SAB KO KAISE PATA LAGA???
Boys/Girls: Sanchita...
ReYam/KriSha *shouting & frame hilne ka effect*: SANCHITA!!!!!!!
Sanchita *to the camera*: uff! i'm needed everywhere... gotta go!
ReYam & KriSha text the gang to meet dem in the Rehearsal Hall; they reach there to find the 4 of them displaying their "raudra ras" avatars'
Sanchita *in mind*: Chal Sanchita! Sakshaat Lord Shiva ke 4 versions ko face karne ke liye ready ho ja!! *inside RH* hey guys!!! So, sabne kya kaha?
Rey: Kya zarurat thi?
Sanch: kya?
Kriya: yeh sab kuch karne ki?
Sanch: kya karne ki?
Sharon: Yeh'.
Swayam: sabko batana'
Sanch: abt what?
Swayam: about the 4 of us'  I mean, *pointing 2wds him n Sharon* US & *pointing 2wds Rey &Kriya* THEM!
Sanh: oh u guys!!! *waving hand* chill! N btw, tum sabko mujhe thnx bolna chahiye!!
KR & SS: thnx hyun?
Sanch: *sighing* thnx issliye, coz I saved u 4 frm telling the gang & cutting out all the awkwardness!
Kriya: ha waise, issne yeh ek kaam toh theekh kiya hi hain' sabko batakar' waddaya guys think?
Sharon: I kinda agree wid Kriya' but still, thoda jaldi ho gaya!
Swayam: oh hello! Sharon, 10 yrs se tumhe chase kar raha hu'. Ab issey zyaada aur kitna der/jaldi ho sakta tha, yeh tum hi batao mujhe!
The GANG*shocked*: 10 YEARS SE!! ARE YOU SERIOUS SWAYAM???
Sanchita: Hang on'. Mein 8th khatam karke nikli thi ri8??? Toh isska matlab, umm, *counts on fingers* 3rd STANDARD SE U'RE IN LOVE WITH SHARON, SWAYAM!!!!!
Swayam: YUP!
GANG: OH MY GOD!!!!
Sharon: tum mujhse 3rd std se pyaar karte aaye ho Swayam! Aur tumne kabhi kuch bataya nahi??? Kyun?
Swayam: tumhe yaad hain Sharon, 3rd std main' jab Sharma Sir ne hume, Science Project ke liye ek-doosre ka partner banaya tha na' *scratches the back of his head* actually, mein tabse tumse pyaar karta aaya hu'
Sharon is damn surprised to find out this'.
Swayam: umm' Project ke final day par, tumne mujhe kuch diya tha'
Sharon: I think so' maybe' cnt remember!
Swayam: hang on! *goes out n comes back after 5 mins* yeh yaad hain?

Sharon gasps n puts her hands over her mouth in shock'.
Girls: OMG! Its sooo cute!
Guys: way 2 go Swayam'.
Sharon: tumne yeh'
Swayam: abhi tak sambhal ke rakha hain!
Sharon: well' umm' tumhe yeh bhi yad hoga phir ki tumne bhi mujhe ek gift diya tha, ri8?
Swayam: ri8 but'.
Sharon: hang on! *turns ard & picks up her bag, takes out smthg & cm back* yahi than a woh gift?

Swayam is more than shocked 2 know that even Sharon had kept his gift safely!!
Swayam: tumne bhi mera wala gift sambhal ke rakha hain?
Sharon: hmm'
They smile & hug'
Neha: waah re waah! ekdum Ram Milaayi Jodi!
Sanchita: awww'. Guys! Watsay' group hug?
Guys & Girls: agree'.
Swaron break the hug & the rest join in & do a group hug!
At night,
Kriya is sitting on her bed with the laptop on & is looking at Rey's pic, while, Rey is almost latkofying on Kriya's window; he somehow climbs up & sees Kriya smiling at the screen'
Rey: yeh baat-cutter kisko dekhkar itna smile kar rahi hain?
Kriya *caressing his face on screen*: aap smile karte waqt bade cute lagte ho' *blushes*'
Kriya sees Rey's reflection in her mirror but decides to play a bit wid him' she quickly clicks on a different pic & starts to praise the pic'
Kriya: waise dekha jaaye toh' Reyaansh toh aapke saamne kuch bhi nahi hain! I mean' Rey toh... is the worst singer of the world! Par aap toh bahut acha gaate ho'. Aur aapki smile' aapki smile pe toh har koi fida ho jaye' aur Rey! Unki toh smile bhi itni achi nahi hain!!
Rey is surprised & jealous to hear this from Kriya'
Rey: le' mein yaha isske liye gift leke aaya hu aur kisi aur ki tareef kar rahi hain'. Abhi batata hu tumhe Miss Dehradun'
Rey quickly jumps inside her room & Kriya pretends to be shocked.
Kriya: Rey! Aap' aap yaha?
Rey: ha! Mujhe laga kit um mujhe miss kar rahi hogi' *luks at her laptop* but I can see, u have company!
Kriya: ha' company toh hain'.
Rey: btw, tumhare liye yeh laya tha' *gives her something*
Kriya: yeh kya hain?
Rey: dikhayi nahi deta! Gift hain!
Kriya: woh toh mujhe bhi dikhayi de raha hain' par yeh kyun?
Rey: woh sham ko RH main'. SwaRon ka gift wale cheez ko dekhkar I realized ki aaj tak meine tumhe koi gift nahi diya hain toh'
Kriya smiles at this...
Rey: waise company kaun hain?
Kriya: khud hi delh lo'
Rey shifts the laptop 2wds him & is surprised to see the persons face!!!

Rey: HIMESH RESHAMIYA!!!
Kriya bursts out laughing luking at Rey's reaction'.
Rey: YUCK! TUMHE LAGTA HAIN KI HIMESH RESHAMIYA MUJHSE BETTER HAIN???
Kriya: shakal dekhegi hain kya Rey!!! Aapko dekhkar aisa lagta hain ki kisi ne aapko 440 volt ka jhatka de diya ho!!!
Rey: ya right!! Meri khud ki gf ko lagta hain ki HR mujhse better hain toh mein kya karu??
Kriya luks the gift smiles at his thoughtfulness'
Kriya: waise, *shows d gift* that's thoughtful of u!!
Rey: gift nahi khologi?
Kriya: dekhungi zarur'
Kriya opens the gift & smiles'

Kriya: Rey' *she runs 2wds Rey n hugs him tightly* thnk u thnk u thnk u soo much Rey!!
Rey at first is surprised by her reaction but hugs her too' after an eternity, Kriya breaks the hug'
Kriya: aapko pata hain, mein bahut tym se apne liye yeh lena chahti thi' & luk, aaj aapne mujhe yeh gift kar diya'. *hugs him again* thnk u thnk u thnk u sooo much!!
Rey *hugs her back even more tightly*: I'm glad u lyk it!!!
Kriya *breaking the hug*: like it? I love it Rey!! Just like'*whispers in his ear* I love you'.
Rey *hugs her again*: I love you too' *breaks hug* acha so abhi mein nikalta hu' I'll see u 2mrw morning' k... gud nite..
He turns 2 leave but Kriya stops him.
Kriya: Rey'
Rey *turns ard*: kya hua?
Kriya *goes upto him & gives him a quick peck on his lips*: gud nite Rey! Abhi jao' I'l c u 2mrw'
She den sleeps off wid a smile on her face'
Rey leaves & ghar pahunchane par, goes off 2 sleep wid a smile on his face'

pasand aaya na... thoko "like", reply karo... next part on pg 95.
taniya



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Awesome update Smile
Sanchita told the gang about Kriyaansh n Swaron
Swayam loves Sharon from 3rd standard n they have kept their gifts preserved till nowBig smile
Kria teases Rey by praising HR n Rey gifts to Kria

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