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Posted: 03 November 2012 at 10:57am | IP Logged
Awesome promo!! Nxt prt jldi update kro..
No w8ing plzz..

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awesome promo and great story..
update sooon do pm

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nice promo                                                                           pls update next part soon

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THIS UPDATE IS DEDICATED 2 YOGINI... MY SPAMING CHICK! HAPPY BIRTHDAY SWEETIE!!Big smile

Part 17-

On the other hand----
Swayam *looking at Sharon's pic in his mobile & kisses the pic* Gud nite'
Sharon *looking at a group pic which has Swayam in it, caressing his face & kissing his pic* Gud Nite'.
Rey: Yeh Kriya day-by-day itni changed kyun lag rahi mujhe?
Kriya: Yeh' yeh mujhe ho kya raha hain? Mein Rey ke saath itni comfortable kaise?
*Screen split vertically into 2 wid one side Rey & one side Kriya*: KAHIN MUJHE KRIYA/REY SE PYAAR TOH NAHI  HO GAYA?
*Screen split horizontally into 2 wid one side Sharon (beneath Rey) & one side Swayam (beneath Kriya)*: I LOVE YOU SWAYAM/SHARON!

Rey

Kriya

Sharon

Swayam


(for reference, see vid (from 1:26 onwards)- http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wCN70BULbdc)

The next evening...
Rehersal Hall-
Rey enters the Rehersal Hall only to find Sharon & Sanchita warming up. Sanchita sees Rey & gestures Sharon that he's come.
Rey: Wassup girls?
Sharon *fake anger*: Rey,  Tum mujhe apna best friend maante ho na? 
Rey: Ha... kyun? is this leading to something Sharon?

On the other hand,
Atrium-
Kriya also reaches college by 6, but finds that the RH is already taken. She then starts warming up in the atrim.
Voice: Hey...
Kriya *turns back 2 see Swayam*: oh hey! tum yaha college main...
Swayam: yeh baat mein tumse bhi pooch sakta hu Kriya.
Kriya: what else? Dance...
Swayam: yeha.. saath warm-up karein?
Kriya: K...
They do warm-up... n den suddenly,
Swayam *fake anger*: Kriya, tum mujhe apna best friend maanti ho na?
Kriya: Ha kyun?

Sharon/Swayam: TOH TUMNE MUJHSE YEH BAAT KYUN CHUPAYI HA KI TUM KRIYA/REY KO LIKE KARTE/KARTI HO!
Rey/Kriya *totally confused*: WHAT? WHERE DID THIS COME FROM?
Sharon: Raat ko? Remember my text?
Swayam: raat ko... hmm.. hmm!
Kriya remembered their "almost" kiss!
Kriya: ha... *blushing* yaad aya!
Rey then remembered d text she sent asking abt his-n-Kriya's "status"...
Rey: Oh yeah! I remember now...
Sanchita *muttering*: Sooo convenient & Sooo Reyaansh!
Rey: Whatever! Ok fine... *taking Sharon's hand & making her sit on a stool* I'll tell u everythg!
Sharon: Sanchu tu bhi aa na!
Sanchita: Queen, mein sab kuch jaanti hu! U guys talk.. *plugging her ear-phones* i'm starting my rehearsal.
Rey/Kriya told Sharon/Swayam everything... right from their Dehradun encounter 2 yesterday wala gud-night kiss!
Sharon/Swayam *totally happy*: OMG! OMG! OMG!
Sanchita & Rey were baffled as to why Sharon was jumping with happiness... while Kriya was wondering why Swayam was behaving so weirdly...
Sanchita & Rey: Kya hua diva/queen?
Kriya: Swayam.. u ... u alright?
Sharon: REY! U'RE IN LOVE! U'RE IN LOVE WITH KRIYA! YES!!!
Swayam: KRIYA! U'RE IN LOVE WITH REY! YES!!!!!
Rey/Kriya: WHAT!!!
Sharon/Swayam: yeh saare signs hi toh hain... tumhe yeh baatane ke liye... that.. U'RE IN LOVE WITH KRIYA/REY!
Rey: Ohk... fine.. maan lete hain ki i'm in love with Kriya.
Kriya: But mujhe kaise pata lagege ki woh bhi mere bare main same feel karte hain ya nahi!
Sharon: Woh hum sab baad main sochenge Rey! *jumping, clapping & singing* OMG! OMG! OMG! REY'S IN LOVE! REY'S IN LOVE! REY'S IN LOVE!!
Sanchu: woah! woah! woah! Easy queen easy! pure college ko batana chahti hain kya!
Swayam: Poore college toh kya, mein poori duniya ko batana chahta hu ki my second best-friend is in love!!
Kriya *pouting*: Second best kyun?
Swayam * scratching back of his head*: woh 1st best-freind Sanchita hain na...
Kriya: koi baat nahi!

(pls play this song while reading this part- http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JTCYGs5_xnc)

Yaaron Dosti Badi Hi Haseen Hai
Yeh Na Ho To Kya Phir
Bolo Yeh Zindagi Hain


Swayam lifts Kriya & twirls her around while Kriya just smiles!

After he puts her down,
Kriya: Swayam, par Rey...
Swayam: Kriya chill! I know Rey... woh bhi tujhse bahut pyaar karta hain!


Koi To Ho Raazdaar
Begaraj Tera Ho Yaar
Koi To Ho Raazdaar

Meanwhile,
Rey: Guys but Kriya...
Sharon: Rey, tension mat lo! just go n tell her u love her!
Sanchita *going 2wds the mirror area where she's kept her botltle*: ha Rey! aur waise bhi *drinks water* i know she loves u too...
ShaRey: really? but how can u be so sure!
Sanchu: Simple! jo bhi ho raha hain tum dono ke beech for the past few days, ussko dekhkar...
She spots KriYam togteher in the atrium & gets an idea... She takes ShaRey out of the RH & leads them 2 d atrium... KriYam are surprised 2 see them...
Sanchu: Kriya, tum bhi yaha ho & Rey tu bhi hain... bol do apni dil ki baat!


Yaaron Mohabbat Hi To Bandagi Hai
Yeh Na Ho To Kya Phir Bolo Yeh Zindagi Hai
Koi To Dilbar Ho Yaar
Jisko Tujhse Ho Pyaar
Koi To Dilbar Ho Yaar
Rey-Kriya n Swayam-Sharon share a H2L2... They remember the times & moments they spent with each other... 

Teri Har Ke Buraai Pe Daante Woh Dost
Gam Ki Ho Dhoop To Saaya Bane Tera Woh Dost
Naache Bhi Woh Teri Khushi Main
Aree Yaaron Dosti Badi Hi Haseen Hain
Yeh Na Ho To Kya Phir
Bolo Yeh Zindagi Hai
Koi To Ho Raazdaar
Begaraj Tera Ho Yaar
Koi To Ho Raazdaar

But then,  realization strikes... Rey takes Sharon n Sanchu aside n kriya takes Swayam aside...
Rey: nahi Sharon, yeh mein nahi kar sakta hu...
Kriya: Swayam mujhse yeh nahi hoga...
Sharon: No Problem! ussey jakar hum dono bata dete hain!
Sanchita: right! *pretends* Kri...
Rey: Pagal ho gayi ho kya tum dono.. use pyaar mein karta hu na toh mein jaake bolunga!
Swayam: No probs.. mein jaake bol deta hu!
Kriya: Pyaar mein karti hu Rey se... mein jaake unhe bolungi...
Swayam (to Kriya) & Sanchu-Sharon (to Rey): ha toh jao na... yaha khade-khade muh kay dekh rahe/rahi ho...  
They take slow steps 2wds each other... n stop when there's only an inches' distance bwn them...


Tan Mann Kar Tujhpe Fida
Mehboob Woh


Rey: Kriya... I

Palkon Pe Jo Rakhe Tujhe
Mehboob Woh


Kriya: Rey woh...

Jiski Vafa Tere Liye Ho

Kriya: I LOVE YOUE REY!
Rey: i LOVE YOU KRIYA!


Arrey Yaaron Mohabbat Hi To Bandagi Hai
Yeh Na Ho To Kya Phir
Bolo Yeh Zindgi Hai


KriYaansh are happy, surprised & relieved to knw that they love each other...
SwaRon, Sanchu  r damn happy seeing them like this...
Sanchita: arrey ab muh kya dekh rahe ho ek-doosre ka...
Swayam: i think yeh wait kar rahe hain dat we turn ard...
Sharon *turning ard*: lo bhai ho gaya... *to Sanchu-Swayam* turn ard guys...
After they turn ard, Rey-Kriya hug each other tightly... they hug as if there's no 2mrw... after they break the hug, Rey leans fwd, Kriya does close her eyes, but when Rey is just abt 2 kiss her, she opens her eyes, kisses on his cheek & pushes him... Rey gets startled & they both begin the Tom-Jerry chase... (somewhat like before their confession)... 


Koi To Dilbar Ho Yaar
Jisko Tujhse Ho Pyaar
Koi Toh DIlbar ho yaar...

SwaRonIta turn ard & c KR behaving like kids.
S3 *facepalm*: IN DONO KA KUCH NAHI HO SAKTA HAIN!
Sanchu: new couple on the house!
Swayam: actually, make that couples on the house...
Swayam goes in front of Sharon, goes on his one knee & takes out his hand...
Swayam:Tumhaari aankho ke peeche tumhari muskaan hain chippi,
            Jo kissi ne na dekhi, sirf mujhko hain dikhti...
           Tumhara guroor ho, gussa ho, ya ho woh tumhaari narazgi,
           Tumhaari har uss ada main, chippi hain saadgi...
           Shikayat sirf itni hain ki tumne apne aap ko nahi hain jaana...
          Jab janogi, toh mujhe pehchaan ne ka... milega tumhe bahana...
          I LOVE YOU SHARON RAI PRAKASH!
          BE MINE FOREVER N EVER?

Sharon was surprised beyond her wits...
Sharon: toh isska matlab, mere SECRET ADMIRER... TUM THE!
Swayam: Ha... Sharon Ha ya Na... jaldi bolo! my knee is hurting!
Sharon: u dumbo! idiot! of course its yes!!!!
Swayam gets up & give her a ring...



Swayam: meri daadi ki hain... she wanted ki mein yeh ring uss ladki ko du, jise mein apni life partner banana chahata hu...
Sharon: I'll be honored n glad to have YOU as my life partner Swayam Shekhawat!
Swayam: yeh ring mein tumhe abhi nahi, humarai engagement pe pehnaunga! Par filhaal ke liye, apni fav *takes out a Lindt's* chocolate se kam chala lo!
SwaRon share a Lindts while KriYansh sit on the stairs n talk...
Kriya: Rey, waddaya think? mein maa ko hum-dono ke baare main bata du...
Rey: nek kam main deri kaisi... in fact, *takes out his phone & dials Kriya's ghar ka no.* hum aunty ko abhi sab kuch bata dete hain...
Kriya: Rey par...
Rey: shh! phone baj raha hain...
on the phone,
Smriti: hello!
Rey *puts on loud-speaker*: Hello aunty, mein Rey..
Sm: Rey... kaise ho!
Rey: M fine aunty... aap bataye..
Sm: wait kar rahi hu.. Kriya ke aane ka..
Rey: usski zarurat nahi hain.. Kriya mere saath hi hain aunty.. in fact, mere pas baithi hain aur hum dono aap se kuch kehan chahte hain...
Sm: kya...
Kriya: nahi Rey.. mein kya...
Rey: Shh.. saath bolte hain theekh hain!
KR *together*: AUNTY/MOM... MEIN AUR KRIYA/REY... HUM DONO EK RELATIONSHIP MAIN HAIN!
Sm: WHAT!!! WHEN!!! OH GOSH! Tum bache bhi na... nywys.. i'm soo happy for both of u... n Kriya... choice achi hain!
Rey: i told u.. mein aunty ke good books main hu! toh aunty, mein aa jao phir aapke ghar... band baja baraat lekar...
Sm: inti jaldi.. bachas.. tum dono abhi sirf 20 yrs ke ho! n trust me when i say this, jaldi shaadi karna theekh nahi hain! wait for 5 yrs... phir toh yeh tumhaari hi hain!
Rey: 5 YRS! Aunty 5 yrs tak mein kya krunga!
Kriya: mera wait karna...
Rey: acha.. soch lo, agar mujhe koi aur mil gayi toh!
Kriya: toh pehle mein uska murder kar dungi aur phir tumhara...
Rey: be my guest!
Sm: ahem.. ahem... romance n all baad main.. Kriya ji, ap jaldi gahr aa jayein...
Kriya: ya ma.. see ya!
Rey: bye aunty.. Gud nite!
Sm: Bye...
Rey *puts d phone 2 speaker*: Aunty ek min! *to Kriya* tum jaake apna bag ready karo, i'll drop u!
*to Smrirti* Aunty, meine kal Dr. Mishra se baat kar li hain & i've faxed ur reports n everythg 2 him... mein aapko unka no. de dunga... aap pls ek baar unse bat kar li jeye & figure out ki aapko kya karna hain.. 
Sm: yeh sab karne ki zarurat nahi thi.. but still thnx...
Rey: koi bat nahi aunty.. gud nite!
Sanchita in the meantime, texts the whole gang that KriYansh & SwaRon have bcm a couple...
SwaRon  & Kriyansh leave the atrium with a pleased Sanchita behind!
Sanchita: Chalo acha hain...  mera plan successful! Yaha meine Sharon & Swayam ko KR ke baare main bataya aur waha se... dono couples mil bhi gaye! Issey kehte hain- EK TEER SE DO SHIKAR! Waah Sanchita Singhania! *pats her back* U're tooo good!

hope u like it Yogini...n u all guys also! next upd8 on pg 90.
taniya


Edited by kriyaanshd3 - 07 December 2012 at 11:04pm

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Posted: 20 November 2012 at 2:43am | IP Logged
Yupppieee. . . .
Me 1st. . . .
Me 1st . . .
Me 1st. . . .
Awsome update. . .
Finally
finally
finally. . . . .
Kriya and rey became kriyaansh,
and..
Swayum and sharon became swaron. . . .
And yeh swayum toh bada chalu nikla,
sidha marriage k liye prop kr diya. . . . .
M realy happy 4 them. . .
Thanks 4 such a happy happy vala update. . .
I realy lovd it. . .
Nxt part pls jaldi update krna,
and pls pls pls pm wen u update nxt part.

Edited by Madhukumari - 20 November 2012 at 3:44am

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Awesome Tania...
Absolutely loved it... Swayam ne finally Sharon ko propose kar dia and ofcourse humari diva ne haan keh dia...
Loved it... update soon...

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awsum update

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loved it

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