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Posted: 02 September 2011 at 11:34am | IP Logged
I like the promo coz sum1 is here who talks directly and not go gol gol about tis and that and then create a huge chaos

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Posted: 02 September 2011 at 4:30pm | IP Logged
wow what a rocking promo
thank God at least here some1 open the mouth
not like  in the show
im glad sanchita told rey the truth
cant wait 4 next
continue when u can
see yaaa

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Posted: 04 September 2011 at 1:35pm | IP Logged
Thnx 4 ur comments guys. here goes 3rd part.

Part 3---
Suddenly, she heard Swayam's phone ring. She took out his phone & saw Sanchita calling him.
Sanchita: Hey Swayam! How r u? & party kaisi hain?
Sharon: Sanchita, it's me Sharon!
Sanchita: Sharon tum? Kya hua?
Sharon: Sanch, I NEED U HERE! CAN U PL CM ASAP! bring ur car.
Sanchita: f9. mein jadhi aati hu.
Sanchita reached college n 10 mins & both the girls somehow reached the hospital & got him admitted in the ICU...

All the dazzlers & the weakling girls: KYA!!!!! SWAYAM KE WAJAH SE KRIYA AAJ ROSE QUEEN BANI?

Sharon: Ha! At least dats what I heard jab Bharat aur Swayam baat kar rahe the locker-room main!

Everyone looked towards Bharat since he was the last person with whom he spoke about the Rose Queen thing.

Bharat: *muttering to himself* Abbey yaar! Yeh Swayam toh ICU main chala gaya theekh hone! Peeche itne ghayalo ko chod diya! *sighing & now addressing everybody* Ha! Yeh sach hain! SWAYAM NE POORE COLLEGE SE KRIYA KO ROSE DILWAYA TAAKI USSKA ROSE COUNT BADH JAYE AUR WHO ROSE QUEEN BAN JAYE!

Kriya was shocked to bits.

Kriya: Par Swayam ne aisa kya kyun?

Bharat: Kal ke "thappad" waale haadse ke baad, woh chahata tha ki tum main aur iss Reyaansh main thoda'.. woh kya kehte hain usse'.. thoda kammo'.. ho jayega!

Kriya: Kammo ho jayega? *thinks a bit* OH! U mean COMMUNICATION ho jayega!

Bharat: Ha! woh' jo bhi abhi Kriya ne kaha woh ho jayega!

Kriya: Bharat tum bhi na!

Rey: Nyways, ab jo ho gaya so ho gaya. Now lets just wait for the doc to come out.

Vishakha: U'r right Rey! Lets just wait n watch.

Both of the teams were waiting outside the ICU, Sharon had no expression on her face as dis was the 1st time wen she had faced such a situation. Suddenly out of nowhere, Sharon started to cry & started 2 blame herself for Swayam's condition.

Sharon: Yeh sab meri galati hain, it's all my fault.

She just kept on repeating the same line again n again.

Kriya saw Sharon crying for the 1st tym & was shocked 2 c dis side of her's.

Kriya: Sharon ro kyun rahi hain?

Rey: Woah! Sharon? Aur woh bi crying? IMPOSSIBLE!

Kriya: Possible hain. Just turn around.

Rey turned around 2 c Sharon crying, he then looked at Kriya who gave him a- "go to her. she needs u, Rey" look.
W/out wasting ny more tym, Rey ran 2wds Sharon n started 2 calm her down.

Rey: Sharon, relax! OK. Jo ho gaya, so ho gaya. Issme na toh tum itna kuch kar sakti thi, na koi aur. IT WAS DESTINED 2 HAPPEN. OK. So now pl calm down & wipe ur tears.

Even after a lot of cajoling by Rey & dazzlings group, Sharon cud not stop crying & dis irritated Bharat a lot.

Bharat: Abbey! Jaake koi pl isse chup karwao, nahi toh mein isski bolti bandh kar dunga!

Kriya & her gang smhow controlled Bharat; on the other hand, Dazzler grp (including Rey) sab fed up hokar, decided to leave Sharon on her own.

Rey: I'm done. I really don't know ki mein tumhara kya karu Sharon!

Kriya went 2 Rey & offered help.

Kriya: Umm... if u don't mind, kya mein ek baar Sharon se baat karke dekhu?

Rey: Oh please! 4get it! yaha pe woh meri baat nahin sun rahi hain, tumhari kya sunegi!

Kriya: Trust me Rey! Woh meri baat maan legi. Lemme try.

Rey: Ur wish! n all the best.

Kriya took a deep breath n sat beside Sharon.

Kriya (very hesitatingly putting her hand on Sharon's shoulder): Sharon? Aap itna kyun ro rahi ho?

Sharon just turned her head towards Kriya n on an impulse, hugged her.

Every1 present over there, including Rey & Kriya were surprised by Sharon's act. Kriya hugged her back n tried to pacify her by gently stroking her hair

Kriya: OK. Shhh. Sharon, calm down. Shhh shhh. OK. Bas. Bas bas.

Sharon: I'M SORRY KRIYA! I'M SORRY FOR WHATEVER I DID & SAID 2 U!

THIS took every1 by surprise, includg KriYaansh!

Kriya: Ummm... It's OK Sharon! Meine... meine tunhe maaf kiya.

Sharon (breaking the hug): Really? Tumne... tumne mujhe sach main maaf kiya?

Kriya gave her an assuring look. ShaRiya again hugged.

Rey was really confused as to what was happening.

Rey: Oye hello! Koi mujhe batayega ki yaha pe kya ho raha hain!

Sanchita: Rey shayad se tu nahi jaanta, par Swayam ka accident tumhare, Kriya aur Sharon ke wajah se hua hain!
Rey: Kya? Swayam ke accident se hum teeno ka kya connection?
Sanchita: Connection hain Rey, connection hain! Na Sharon Rose Day ke din woh speech deti, Na Kriya itni hurt hoti, na woh tujhe aake slap karti, Na Swayam ko poore college se Kriya ko rose dilwakar usse Rose Queen banana padta & NA USSKA ACCIDENT HOTA!
Rey: WHAT?? Yeh tu kya bol rahi hain Sanchi!
Sharon: Sach bol rahi hain yeh Rey!
Kriya: Sahron tumhe yeh sab...
Sharon: Nahi Kriya! I think it's high time ki Rey ko sab kuch pata lag jana chahiye.

do comment guys.
taniya


Edited by Tania92 - 04 September 2011 at 1:39pm

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Posted: 04 September 2011 at 1:50pm | IP Logged
Thank you, thank you for making Sharon have some sense in her in this FF :) 
I liked the part, and loved that ShaRiya might be friends soon! (: Continue soon! 

-Snehaa

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Posted: 04 September 2011 at 1:51pm | IP Logged
omg plz plz write more i wanna see more what happen next plzzz write it n thiss is awsum lines yaaar !!!!!!! ~_~ !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 04 September 2011 at 1:52pm | IP Logged
yaaa i guess they will be frndz now but in d3 its not going lyk thiz ... kash aisa d3 mein real i mein hota its very awsum !!!! taniya its really gud keep it up n write more lines what will happen more

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Posted: 04 September 2011 at 2:59pm | IP Logged
fab part pls update soon n do pm me if u can

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Posted: 04 September 2011 at 5:09pm | IP Logged
Fabulos part..the truth is out n im glad
n cant wait 4 rey's reaction
loved sharya hug scene
i think she ll be friends after this accident
n both teams will patch up
continue soon when u can
see yaaa
 

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