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Posted: 20 September 2011 at 1:05am | IP Logged
yeah it was short but guys i m waiting for ur opinion and wishes what u want so do pm me 
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Posted: 20 September 2011 at 1:36am | IP Logged
its was short but its too cute i wish this could be happen actually in show but r bad luck:(
Plz do continue...
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Posted: 20 September 2011 at 1:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by fareehamustahsa

its was short but its too cute i wish this could be happen actually in show but r bad luck:(
Plz do continue...
thank u for ur support surely gonna continue btw wats ur name?
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Posted: 20 September 2011 at 2:45am | IP Logged

heyy... awesome imagination..  i can so imagine it.. m just waiting fr them to show something like this.. :) plz write bigger parts.. :)

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Posted: 20 September 2011 at 2:55am | IP Logged

hey guys m continueing it...

Next morning rey thought if kria hurt too y she slept ...he was bit confused thrn he hears vishaka saying to bharat ,sharon ki to band baj gai dude what she was thinking us peech k badd acha jawab mila use..bhara:haan aur uus ne jis tarah kria ki beizati ki us k saath aisa hi hona chahiye tha ...

rey was confused which speech, insult ,slept ..yeh sab kya hai...(than he goes to swayam)

rey:swayam mujhe tum se kuch baat krni hai

swayam:kis aare main 

rey:rose day :

swayam:(he was kind of thinking kya baat ) haan bolo

rey:us din kya hua tha jo kria ne mujhe thapar maara..

swayam:us dinnn

rey:haan us din just tell me na

swayam:us din sharaon ne kria ki insult ki(told all the things that sharon said)

rey:wat to tu m ne mujhe pehle kyun nai bataya,,yeh aur mere frndz ne bhi nahi bataya ..y(rey shocked)

swayam:maine tujhe batane ki koshish ki thi but tum ne meri baat hi nahi suni...

rey:oh my god ..i m such a fool u know swayam i m idiot (saying emotionaly sadly wid anger for all dazling)mene use trust nahi kia jise main pyaar karta hun ...(saying this he leave the room and went to the reahearsal hall where all the dazling were practicing)

sharon:acha hua rey tum aagaye hum practise start hi karne waale the.

rey:tmne kria ki insult ki (in full of anger and shouted loudly) tumne kria ki insuly ki...

sharon :rey wat happened insult us us kripa ki us ne zarror tum se mere bare main kuch ulta seedha kaha hoga(all the dazzling shocked)in konw that ...(rey cutt off)

rey:dont u dare to say anythng about her tum ne us ki itni insult ki u even point out on her character cant believe tom vo hi sharon ho jise main apni best friend kehta tha ...

sharon;rey tum us kripa us weakling ki wajah se mujhse lar raje ho

rey;ok u tell me the truth us din kya hua simmis tell me vicky my best buddy tell me rinne nil

this is wat the truth is the silence

sharon;rey it was just a campaign of election y r u taking it so seriosly ...

rey;u really think this itna sab hogaya mene kria itna insult kia jab k she have no fault in it ...

sharon;rey ur over reacting

rey ;ghosh i cant believe ur that sharon my best frnd u know leave it u cannot understand this cuz u dont have heart ur heartless and main yeh 1ce and for all clear kardun aj se i m not the part of u dazling

tum ne jo kiya i cant forget it ...

thats it for now hope u like its a long part so do comment or pm me ur vision & opinion



Edited by Angel56 - 20 September 2011 at 3:29am

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Posted: 20 September 2011 at 3:42am | IP Logged

awesome yaar. . :)

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Posted: 20 September 2011 at 3:49am | IP Logged
awesome n continue waiting 4 ur next chapter

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Posted: 20 September 2011 at 4:42am | IP Logged
Wow loved it

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