Love and Fate (AK) FF:ch3 pg9 - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
amnesia?! lol can't wait for the next part, lol. pm me! xx
Posted: 12 years ago

Loved it!
So she 's says that arnavs room is her room hmm
i wonder wat the story there is
thanks for pm and update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: veena_rocks

oye hoyee!! 😍

Khushi being all d authority 😳

thnx for d PM, cont soon πŸ˜ƒ



LOL yeah...😳
thnx for the comment veena(that is ur name right?)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: AnnieKittWatt

Hello -kalika-, πŸ˜† πŸ˜ƒ
Hahahahaha...πŸ˜†..Okay, now what was that? πŸ˜‰
Khushi (is it really Khushi?) acting as if everything's normal and as if she shares the room with some guy (Arnav), whom she doesn't even know! πŸ˜†
And Arnav fuming πŸ˜† at the girl for having the guts, the audacity to open her mouth in front of him, in front of 'The ASR'. And totally bemused by her presence in his room and her words -
"What do you mean by that? Don't you know whom am i?"
"mai yaha kya kar rahi hoon matlab? agar mai yahan nahi hoti toh kahan hoti?"
"par Kaka ji... ye kamra bhi toh mera hi hai na? aur ye aap aise badi badi aankhen kr ke mujhe kyu dekh rahe hain?"
Well, I didn't understand the part where she faints. Was it on purpose or something else? Is she here with a motive? Well, for the second question to be true, she would not have been found unconcious and dumped somewhere in the middle of the road...But still, just to clarify.
Too good, Kalika!πŸ‘
Way to go! And thank you for the PM.😊
 
Regards
Annie 😊



hey annie 
lovely commnt yar!
@red girl have patience...  so many ques. on day one... u'll get a big shock as the story proceeds!πŸ˜‰
stay tuned!
annie thnks so much buddy!
really loved ur commentπŸ€—

PS: i thought for including ur poem here but NO i didn't... i have other plans for posting ur poem!πŸ˜‰πŸ˜³
pls trust me with that...😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: aquablue17

Whoa! Thts rele diff. I wonder if Khushi thinks Arnav is her hubby . Thanks for the pm n keep writing :)



stay tuned
u'll.. i thinkπŸ€” will love the story if u like surprises!πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: Zbegum

amnesia?! lol can't wait for the next part, lol. pm me! xx


um... let the story unfold!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Originally posted by: sweet_girl234


Loved it!
So she 's says that arnavs room is her room hmm
i wonder wat the story there is
thanks for pm and update soon


LOL
let the story unfold!πŸ˜‰
all i can say is  jo dikhta hai vo hota nahi , jo hota hai vo dikhta nahiπŸ˜†
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Posted: 12 years ago
hi kalika 

hhaahha 

love the update 

the mysterious girl has make ASr go nuts 

so waiting 4 next part :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very nice update.
loved the starting chapter , very interesting.
Plz do add me to ur pm list.
Raunika
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Posted: 12 years ago
Fantastic twist Kalika!!
I loved it.
I thought Khushi might get up, be confused about where she is and panic. But this was a brilliant take. Arnav seemed to wake up confused and panicked...and angry ofcourse. He wouldn't be Arnav without that particular emotion...πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
Really looking forward to the next chapter deary!!
Thanks a bunch for the PM...😊
Edited by FebruaryFlower - 12 years ago