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omg m loving this story... the way armaan is behaving when she is arround and his wild imaginations...jeez, u wrote it awesome or what β­οΈ loved the characters of them both... the detention is going to be rocking...cont soon... n thx for PM πŸ˜Š
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@Jyoti - Thanks! Lol, will try to do so. :)

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dildirani

OMGGG Guru 😲😲😲 This part was the best so far.. I mean I like all of them but this one was more open and had more passionate scenes ☺️and also it was the LONGEST πŸ˜† The dance was superb.. Shilpa really showed off her dance to him πŸ˜† but which dance teacher do that now? Showing off her dance to the most handsome guy student? 🀣 and Armaan getting those WILD dreams☺️.. he really needs to fade away from those stuff nowπŸ˜† and OMG that girl 🀣 he keeps bumping into her πŸ˜† You don't know how much I'm enjoying Shilpa's character.. I love how she's strict with HIM especially.. and I also loved how she threw her question back at him.. I like this clever Shilpa.. love her character in this .. it's so opposite of her "RIDDHIMA'S" character who was ALWAYS confused and DUMB  πŸ€£ Now I really really wanna see KaSh as student-teacher characters.. its more fun and challenging 🀣 I wish you continue to update every now and then.. but i have a feeling since how u updated so fast for 2 parts.. ur gonna update after so long now -______- Dude u better update jaldi the story is getting interesting!!!



Hehe, thanks Subi!! :D LOLL, really? I didn't even know that. I just wrote whatever came. πŸ˜† Haha! This dance teacher does!! 🀣 Ooohhh... those are just the trailers my friend. β˜ΊοΈπŸ˜† Haha, I don't know what to do with that girl yet. 🀣 Aww, thanks so much!! LOLL!! That's because she's NOT RIDDHIMA, but SHILPA. ;) Haha, don't even get me STARTED on Riddhima!! I can just write pages and pages as to how she's obsessed with being confused. 🀣🀣

Go give this concept to Palki. She said she needed one!! 🀣🀣 I wanted to update this week, but cause of school I wasn't able to. :\ Chorry!! :(   I'll try my best to update twice tomorrow. :)

Hehe, oh you just wait and watch. It gets better. ;)
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Hehe, thanks Subi!! :D LOLL, really? I didn't even know that. I just wrote whatever came. πŸ˜† Haha! This dance teacher does!! 🀣 Ooohhh... those are just the trailers my friend. β˜ΊοΈπŸ˜† Haha, I don't know what to do with that girl yet. 🀣 Aww, thanks so much!! LOLL!! That's because she's NOT RIDDHIMA, but SHILPA. ;) Haha, don't even get me STARTED on Riddhima!! I can just write pages and pages as to how she's obsessed with being confused. 🀣🀣

Go give this concept to Palki. She said she needed one!! 🀣🀣 I wanted to update this week, but cause of school I wasn't able to. :\ Chorry!! :(   I'll try my best to update twice tomorrow. :)

Hehe, oh you just wait and watch. It gets better. ;)



She needs to be my dance teacher 🀣 not that I'm a lesbo but She seems Bombatt πŸ˜‰πŸ€£I don't really like strict teachers but I'll take SHILPA as my dance teacher πŸ€£ 🀣 oh boy, Am I gonna learn a lot or what? πŸ˜†πŸ˜†We should definitely let Palki know about this concept, KaSh ne doctor doctor bohot khel liya ab teacher teacher khelenge 🀣  🀣 I don't get y these creatives don't get any good concept like our KaShians? And they call themselves creatives? 🀣 they're so dumb to realize KaSh can fit in any concept πŸ₯±they can jump down from the 150th floor πŸ₯±  OH RIDDHIMA  🀣 sorry I even mentioned her name here 🀣our Shilpu is more bombatt than her 🀣  and OMG :O I can't wait for tomorrow.. Better see  a PM from you after when I come back from partying 😳
PS- I LOVE YOU πŸ˜³πŸ€—

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dildirani

She needs to be my dance teacher 🀣 not that I'm a lesbo but She seems Bombatt πŸ˜‰πŸ€£I don't really like strict teachers but I'll take SHILPA as my dance teacher πŸ€£ 🀣 oh boy, Am I gonna learn a lot or what? πŸ˜†πŸ˜†We should definitely let Palki know about this concept, KaSh ne doctor doctor bohot khel liya ab teacher teacher khelenge 🀣  🀣 I don't get y these creatives don't get any good concept like our KaShians? And they call themselves creatives? 🀣 they're so dumb to realize KaSh can fit in any concept πŸ₯±they can jump down from the 150th floor πŸ₯±  OH RIDDHIMA  🀣 sorry I even mentioned her name here 🀣our Shilpu is more bombatt than her 🀣  and OMG :O I can't wait for tomorrow.. Better see  a PM from you after when I come back from partying 😳
PS- I LOVE YOU πŸ˜³πŸ€—

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I wish she would teach me how to dance too! 🀣 Haha!! You'll end up having more detentions than Armaan. πŸ˜‰πŸ€£ LMAO!! Aur hum CVs CVs khelenge. 🀣 LOLL. I'm just gonna pass on them. Thinking about them makes my brain hurt. 😡 Anytime man!! 🀣🀣 Hehe, I'll try to send you two PMs. πŸ˜‰πŸ˜³

I Love You Too!! πŸ˜³πŸ€—
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I'll try my best to update it today. :)
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Originally posted by: MG.Creations



I wish she would teach me how to dance too! 🀣 Haha!! You'll end up having more detentions than Armaan. πŸ˜‰πŸ€£ LMAO!! Aur hum CVs CVs khelenge. 🀣 LOLL. I'm just gonna pass on them. Thinking about them makes my brain hurt. 😡 Anytime man!! 🀣🀣 Hehe, I'll try to send you two PMs. πŸ˜‰πŸ˜³

I Love You Too!! πŸ˜³πŸ€—



Hahaha I know right  🀣 main toh CVs CVs khilllaaongii kurta phaardke 🀣 My dil, jigar, nazar , brain everything hurts 🀣
OMG thank you sooo much.. i love you man πŸ€—
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: dildirani

Hahaha I know right  🀣 main toh CVs CVs khilllaaongii kurta phaardke 🀣 My dil, jigar, nazar , brain everything hurts 🀣
OMG thank you sooo much.. i love you man πŸ€—



LMAO!! That will be a sight worth seeing. πŸ˜‰πŸ€£πŸ€£ Story of every KaShian. 🀣🀣

Aaaww, no prob man! Love you too!! πŸ€—
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Originally posted by: MG.Creations



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