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The-chosen-one

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The-chosen-one

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Posted: 21 August 2011 at 2:04am | IP Logged

Hi friends, It's my first post In writer's corner. I used to write in Fan-fiction Forum but since I am more inclined towards poetry so posting my work here too...
Note: These poems have been posted on my blog Words do matter too.

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Walking down the lanes
Clad in shabby, ragged coat
She preferred being solitary
She lived life in melancholy
Terrified of brutal world

Shielded beneath thick walls
Lay the crumbled heart
Embracing scratches of the past
Her innocence yet remained
Untouched, unscathed

World's ruthless, so is life
She learnt and behold

She lived' a life of dead

And then, it happened
He blew in as fresh air
Like springs succeeded winters
Like flowers replaced snow flakes

Yet, her apprehensions took over
What if he too betrayed?
What if it's another heart break?

"I came to guard not to offend,
To hold you mine, till the end"
Soothing cold on burnt soul
She gave into the sincere words

He took her to heights of glee
Of life, she flew and laughed

At last' she learnt to live


Fairy tales had taught her
Dreams of prince-charming
Who'll kiss her to life
Wipe tears off her eyes

Did dreams ever come true?
They cease to turn into veracity
So did hers, broke with a clash
When actuality hit hard in face

"till the end" was a lie
Shattered yet again, she fell apart
Crying over what wasn't meant

'and she died again

Would she ever fall in love again?
Maybe not now
Maybe not yet
But soon enough
When things are meant

Fault wasn't his
For he came, he stayed
It was conspiracy of fate, they met
It was wish of almighty, it wasn't meant

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Let me know your views :)


Edited by deepikavasudeva - 21 August 2011 at 2:04am

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Posted: 29 November 2011 at 9:53am | IP Logged
Great piece of work dear!!

I just loved the poem.. The way you penned the emotions, the pain... Beautiful... I could Picture the scene but with a specific person in my mind..Wink

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Posted: 03 December 2011 at 11:16pm | IP Logged
this was beautiful!! i can always relate to skepticism towards love. i could totally relate to this. except for i've never had my heart completely broken like she has.. not yet at least. when you wrote this, did you have any specific person in mind? Embarrassed

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