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..Anita..

@..Anita..

IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 12 years ago

Amazing update

Shyam is a creep and just gross.

I loved the flashback. please don't make nani and anjali negative too... keep them good atleast

Please update soon

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kiran255

@kiran255

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

wow wow wow Bristy !

You are simply aweosme and this story is a kick ass one !

loved ths atrt how khushi was showing him anger and how he saved her

and love how she just got along but the real shocker is

when Khsuhi felt why they married and

omg the most shocking flash back

shayam is such a creep and makes such a realistic story !

pervert kahi ka , and loved that Arnav shouted but what u ended

the fbs are so interesting !

i dont know why still feels like Asr needs to fall in love with her again

from begiing its khushi who makes sure everything is right according to ASr but love is not abt just taking care or making things right !

love is abt , aar ya paar , im with u !

how perfect ur or imperfect u are

either way u belong to me !

so im so looking forward to the story

and plzzz update fast !

and glad we are lucky k u updated fast !

but plz be fast then ferrari in updating :P

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Zehra

@senorzorro12

Groupbie

Posted: 12 years ago

OMG the past was heart breaking 😭

Shyam is such a creep kaisay kahani banali 😡

poor Khushi but Arnav took her side..😳

hope Anji leaves that idiot soon😛

wana read the complete flashback😛

Update soon 😊

And yeah

It was Beautifully Written

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660428

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

This is even better! * squeals girlishly, then checks around hurriedly if anyone saw her do it*

AWESOME! I have these gazillion hindi questions aaand my brain's in overload, so I will comment more later...though Awesome still suffices! btw, Post soon!

Once a creep always a creep...

Edited by storybooksgd - 12 years ago

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Kinarandomness

@Kinarandomness

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 12 years ago

awesome update

continue soon

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mimi

@moon_mine

IF-Rockerz

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

the story is too good man!!!!

i mean seriously...never xpctd the past to be like this!!!!!

thank god arnav din support his di n supported khushi!!!!

hope arnav knws evrythng abt shyam!!!!!

n wat to tell shyam...jst sic!!!!!

nyws watng fr the nxt update nw!!!!!

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@Hot_Indo_Chilly

IF-Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

Oh I want more~!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😛

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Sanchari

@.hea.

IF-Sizzlerz

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

I have a small request

Actually I was just loving the small description you gave for their past

So ..I just wanted to read more about how Anjali actually believed her and allowed in their marriage and moreover how Arnav agreed

Actually i don't force you to write..but I would love to read more

Otherwise..I just loved the part

Oh! comforting Arnav...it's like dream come true

Moreover you see that I loved to read the past!

It was great

Please do look forward

You have an amazing power to describe the emotions

That's what gripped me to the ff

The concept was so fresh and new

Not yet read an update about married Arhi

That too so good

It's amazing

I am having exams these days

That too the half yearly exams

So i thought no more ffs till the exams get over

But I can't control myself from reading this one

And...post the next part soon!

Keep up the good work

Best wishes from me!

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Bristy

@the_rain

IF-Rockerz

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Harshiti4Lyf
WoooW...that was amazing dear!!! The flashback actually stirred a fear in me that something like this might happen later in the show regarding shymaless!! Everything transitioned so smoothly that i felt like i was actually watching an episode!!! Well done!!! Loved it!!! 👍🏼👏Cant wait till the next update!!!

P.S. Shyam is disgusting n i hate him😡

Ooh...I'm grinning madly reading this and feeling flattered. 😉

Thanks a lot...😛

And yes, Shyam is disgusting...

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Bristy

@the_rain

IF-Rockerz

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: minimuffin86
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i am hooked to ur SS! it's so good! i loved the flashback! so realistic! the fact that Anjuie hates Khushi is sad but so realistic!

Hmm, Anjali's reaction is a bit altered from herself, but I thought it's only real...

Thanks for commenting...😊

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